The Best First Lines in Claymore Fanfiction (Part 1)
[A good story begins with the very first line. Craft out something dramatic or powerful. Grab your reader by the throat. Some good examples:]
1) "Clare nipped at the edge of Teresa's ear and purred, "Mmm... you taste like sweets. I wonder what your mouth tastes like?"
by: Roxius, "Clare's Obsession"
2) "Undine's disdain began when Galatea stopped to give a girl in rags a handful of beras."
by: Hamstadini, "Strength Alone" (From "Girl Talk")
3) "He had been with the group of Claymores for six weeks - six weeks! - and he had never seen them this heated up over something!"
by: Kraven Ergeist, "Pecking Order"
4) "Her body moved atop his in a slow rhythm, trying to savor every moment of their joining."
by: Hamstadini, "In Fire"
5) "There were times Miria wished Clare had not been reunited with her young friend."
by: Dany Le Fou, "Unexpected Consequences"
6) "It was quick. BRRRT! Or was it?"
by: antiassasinguy, "The Fart"
7) "We've got one chance. Don't fail me Cynthia."
by: Lady Katana4544, "Don't Fail Me"
8) "From the tower of the church, a lone figure stared out into the dusky haze of the setting sun."
by: kblackwolf, "must get out"