10 for the writing ask!❣️
10.) what’s a line of dialogue you’re particularly proud of?
“Looks like you got yourself a boyfriend.”
Doc was going to maim Montagne.
I’ve always liked this one because I think it was the line that really made me feel like Dopamine was coming together as a story. It’s very simple and yet I love it so much, I can’t explain it very well 😅
“C'mon. I’ll teach you how to shoot. Your aim is terrible.”
That same question pops up again while they shoot. Do you think you could kill someone? He’s still not sure. Bonneyfoy still seems disappointed.
(It feels wrong to think about it.)
(He will eventually learn to kill.)
(Bonneyfoy dies before he can.)
I also included this one from an unpublished fic about doc’s journey to becoming apart of rainbow that I wrote before all the new lore drops so it’s totally not correct anymore but I really love the flow of it!