#bwb problems

And the match v relationship symbolism absolutely vibes IDK if im reading way to much into it but like you start and the match is pristine (first appearances) and then it becomes blackened but there's still the flame there (truths come out but there's still love), then its buffeted by the wind but refuses to die (struggles), then you get too close to the flame and it hurts (fight?) and finally the flame is out but the embers are still there (longing??? Pining??). +

not gonna lie but bwb is gonna be...pretty heavy-

+ DUDEEEEE the symbolism absolutely makes sense and I'm so excited for this but also so so stressed oh no imma cry huh? anyway thank u for indulging my rambles, sorry this is so long 💕💕

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"and the heart of the match glows a resilient red. For an infinitesimal second, it reignites- the flame reaching higher, grasping at the air defiantly" THIS AJHHH. again, vocab is on point. "infinitesimal"??? dude... I'm shook such a good choice. And the "defiance" of the flame is such a cool image.

"Still, it returns to blaze quietly; a small show of force despite the breeze that whisps by" I was waiting for it and it DELIVERED your descriptions for the wind were lovely too? idk if thats weird but they stood out to me. "Then- it singes. Pain shoots up your palm, and you curse- switching the matchstick to the other hand with panic" OOF yes the burn was also super cool I though using the short sentence was clever! Makes it a bit more frantic, and the "fulfilling warmth" phrasing was gorgeous

"It sways, waving to you- almost fluttering out to touch you, and you can see the undulation of its radiant figure against the grey wall." im doing a lot of excited arm movements rn cuz I AHHHH I JUST LOVE THIS BIT OK?? 'undulation' was suxh a huge brain choice and the atmosphere really comes alive with the red of the flames v the grey of the wall?? Juxtaposition babey I love it oof many feelings.

OK idk if ur gonna see this but I saw u wanted feedback on bwb and I kinda went a bit ham so... uhh yeah :) can I say this VIBES. so hard. I was like breathlessly infuriated the whole time how good your descriptions are? and your vocab??? Gorgeous. "Raising the match upwards, you watch as the once-pristine material peels away, revealing a blackened, crumbling core." such cool imageryyyyyy and I enjoyed that you really took the time to explore each stage of the burn.