#brokenwhistle

Heroes that never were

Brokenwhistle vision

@ambitiousauthor

Bonus:

Computer died and I forgot my charger at work, so posting this from my back-up blog on mobile. First post here, I think?

—Grebe once called Broken her little brother. They’re littermates, and he is the youngest. I imagine Broken was always very sensitive, and his sister was his protector.

—Though he cared nothing for Marblegaze, Redjay did love his kits deeply and was very involved in their lives (Black and Grey not included, he died before they were born).

—Lightstream put up a strong, confident front in front of his Clanmates, but alone with Redjay, he would confide and talk about things that worried him, his anxieties and insecurities. After Redjay was revealed and died, he kept to himself completely.

He is also gay, but never had the Realization until after he died and reunited with a tom friend.

—Swanmist was the first to suggest ending their bloodline, distraught at the pain it was still causing the family. Marblegaze had often failed to fight back in battles, not wanting to shed blood anymore, and got deeply hurt because of it.

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ref by Turukhan

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Aliases / Nicknames: Father’s Son, Bad Seed, Monster, Kit Killer

Gender: male

Sexuality: pansexual

Family: Redjay (father), Marblegaze (mother), Grebeglade, Blacksong (sisters), Lightstream, Greydusk, Swanmist (brothers), Myrtlewing (nephew), Tadpolekit, Songkit (nieces)

Other Relations: Drizzlespots (mentor), Runningpaw (apprentice), Redjay (haunter)

Clan: Shadowclan

Rank: warrior

Characteristics: haunted by his father, not all there in the head

Number of Victims: 8

Number of Murders: 2

Murder Method: drowning

Known Victims: Grebeglade, Lightstream, Swanmist, Tadpolekit, Songkit, Birdflank, Blacksong, Greydusk

Victim Profile: nieces

Cause of Death: killed by Myrtlewing

Cautionary Tale: ??

Story:

Brokenwhistle pushed his way into the nursery, frowning when he saw his sister. Grebeglade- once so large and happy- had withered to almost half her size. Her fur was dull, and there were bags under her eyes.

She looked up and smiled. “Hey kiddo. Did you come to see the kits?”

Brokenwhistle reluctantly nodded, shuffling his paws anxiously.

Grebeglade moved, and the sight made Brokenwhistle recoil. These were not kits. That much was clear. They were shaped somewhat like kits, but their fur was patchy and thinning, and their still-closed eyes bulged out.

“Those aren’t kits.” He whispered.

“What do you mean?” Grebeglade asked, but her brother was already gone.

His head felt like it was full of wasps. He knew that those kits weren’t right, why couldn’t the others see it? What were they?

He slept poorly that night, dreaming of golden eyes and a smiling tom.

“Those kits bring death.” The darkness hissed. “They’ll kill you and your kin.”

The next morning, he went straight to the medicine den.

“Myrtlewing, I have a question.”

His nephew looked up, confused and surprised.

“Brokenwhistle, right? What do you need?”

Brokenwhistle’s ears flattened. “First I need to know that you won’t tell a soul I asked this. Swear it on Starclan.”

Myrtlewing took a step back, ears flat. “What’s this about?” He asked. Brokenwhistle saw his fear, smelled his fear, like a sulphur haze.

He would tell, he would tell, he couldn’t be trusted.

No one could be trusted.

Brokenwhistle went to his favorite place to get away from all the noise, all the horrible noise.

He wandered and wandered further and further away from camp until he came to with a small Windclan patrol staring at him. The scent of blood was thick in the air, but he couldn’t remember what the blood was from. All he heard was the smiling tom, whispering in his ears.

The Windclan warriors escorted him back to camp, speaking kindly- almost like they were trying to calm a confused elder.

After that incident, he was put under watch. Not formally, but everyone watched him. He could feel their eyes on him. And the things in the nursery were getting bigger, while Grebeglade was getting smaller.

The breaking point was when cats started dying. Fleetsong, Bluefeather, Fallendust.. after each death, The monsters grew bigger, as thought they had eaten the very souls of the missing cats.

On the night of the gathering, he stole the creatures, carried them all the way up to the Two-leg farm. He dropped them in the small lake that horses drank out of, then fled the clans. He didn’t want to be around when his siblings learned what he did.

Additional Information:

--Submission by @ambitiousauthor​

--The kits were normal, just premature.

--Myrtlewing not even knowing his name is so in-character.

I think I got it right @ambitiousauthor

8/27/2025

Fandom: Warrior Cats

Species: Cats

Canon/Oc: Oc

Fanart Art?: No

Piece: Misc

Owner of the character

Brokenwhistle: https://toyhou.se/Squishyy

Fun fact!

They are presented, left to right, in the order that they were born.

Another fun fact, they are also each seated beside their favourite sibling. Though they all got along very well (at least until Black's pregnancy), Light and Swan were best friends, Grebe and Broken were best friends, and Grey and Black were best friends (though the two latter came from a younger litter).

It was also mentioned on another post that Broken was a very shy kit and Grebekit acted like his protector.

I think I mostly wanted to see Red and Marble together

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Ref: Newborn Kitten lineart F2U by Purrkiss on DeviantArt

I figured they wouldn't be old enough to have a good chance of escaping a horse water table, but perhaps old enough to begin speaking--I wonder what it sounded like to Brokenwhistle? Curses, taunts?

ooooooooooooooooooooooooo just had a thought

Brokenwhistle is the outcast of the family. Many crimes are accepted, but turning on the family--kit kin especially, is immediate cause to disown.

And another family member outcast? Pipitfeather.

Maybe Pipitfeather tried to get Broken to join his plans. Broken refused, and went to the Eye-Out family. That's why they were able to save Fallenkit and Waspkit when they did.