#beta reader comments

Jay's perspective is linked here so go check that out!

All green commentary is from @jayloocarrot on Object of Motion (The fic I am writing)!!! Hehee, hilarious comments that made me giggle while going over them :D

I think it's hilarious that I have a streak of how my beta's will always threathen me for my angst writing. I used to have that before too, and Jay has kept the tradition alive! Made me wheeze, because the aww made me NOT expect the rest of the comment ( ˘▽˘) AND on something I had already sown the seeds for before hehe. Life is so fun for me!

REALEST THING EVER!!! I love this comment so much, I had a LAUGH writing this part and Jay's commentary just made it ALL the more brilliant :D Jay's comments are so funny, it made me giggle and kick my feet while going over all the edits, which made me so happy. Normally when I edit I get to a point where I read over my own writing and don't find it as funny as I did while I wrote it, but this just made me BEAM haha.

Severus remaining unchaged hehe. HASTAG CONSISTENT KINGGGG haha. This made me laugh so hard. It IS TRUE, Severus is the most consistent in his behaviour in this entire fic, he is soooo true to himself, it's really fun! The REAL one of this fic. He is NOT doing all that changing up his behaviour stuff like everyone else is doing, bro is TOO tired for that stuff. He's also somehow one of the most emotional stable person in this fic, which is so funny concidering who he is. Jay over here meme'ing that Severus is consistent and I'm in the corner laughing like a B rate movie villain who has lost the plot.

COLD HAND MENTION HAHA, I love mentioning Tom's cold hands since it's such a important fact to Dakota. AND JAY GETS THATTTT! Makes me so delighted to get comments that mention stuff that I put down on purpose. Jay's been on the same wavelenght the entirety of the time we talked and it's so funny! I am putting stuff down and Jay's picking it up and throwing it at me like rotten tomatoes XD Also yeah I changed the shoved to dragged off, we had a entire convo about where I went D: but shoved is funnier and Jay went HOW WOULD HE DO THAT and I went,,, magic??? Had to give up on my shoving off dreams TvT sigh what a hard world we live in...

Anyways! Shout out to Jay for being such an awesome beta with such wit! It's been such a joy working with you :D I can't wait to post more of these!

It’s officially… The Beta Comment Series: Part 1 : Jay’s Perspective

As many of you have come to know, I am officially the beta reader for Object in Motion!! Me and Rem are buddies now, and we decided to make some posts together of our favorite beta comments and mistakes in writing to share!! This will be a multi-part series because as you may also know I am a yapper and I comment a lot!! Also I will be beta-Ing for future chapters so there is more to come!! Rem and I will be both posting something together so look out for his post too!!

If you are new here please check out rem and his fic and all that jazz here: @remnantofstars

Heres his part of the series as well so please check it out!

Anywayyyy let’s get onto a few of my faves for the chapter! These are mainly ones that I related to during the chapter so you can have a peek into my own reactions lol. Rem is posting some of the ones that I made myself laugh with so please go check those out as well.

When Dakota started talking about defense with the rubix cube I just nodded and smiled like a proud mom listening to teen talk about a video game they don’t know anything about LMAOOO. If it confused me then it’ll definitely confuse the person doing it which means it’s a success! Dakota you genius you do everything right. No I do not have favoritism.

This was so real, honestly who doesn’t complain like that nowadays?? It’s so fun like grumbling and shaking the fist in the air is me fr. Dakota you are my spirit animal. Don’t we all wanna be snakes too??

Me crying the first paragraph in like author my burning torch is slightly raised rn… trust guys I’ll be letting you know if you need to bring the pitchforks before the new chapter comes out!! And yea while I was doing my 130 something comments it was originally a pink color and then I exited out and it turned green. At first I was disappointed but then I realized I like green and it’s like slytherin so I’m okay with it! I’m a color changing queen guys, send me color recs and I’ll see if I can will them into existence. Omg pink and green is a wicked reference. But yea if you haven’t been able to tell already the green text is me!!

Last but certainly not least is my tribute to Nagini. Sorry Dakota, you are in second place now! Nagini is a Queen with brilliant advice and perfect words at all times. Everyone strive to be like her. Shoutout to rem again for teaming up with me and letting me beta! And also for taking all these screenshots because I know my fingers would’ve been tired after the tenth one LMAO.