its not uncommon for the emergence of a character’s darker side to be represented through a darkening of their outward appearance, and a lot of things seem to point to Eclipse being a more negative force. Heck, a solar eclipse itself is the moon blocking out the sun, literally a darkening of the daylight. But adding the Triumbric Stones to the amulet has also rewarded Jim with new weapons; “leveling up” as he and Toby put it. Which makes me think Eclipse is a more negative force but that, with a lot of self-control, it can be made into a neutral force. That corruption isn’t inevitable if the user actively works against it.

Of course, that’s a lot easier said than done. I’d be surprised (and disappointed) if Jim comes out totally unscathed and unchanged. “All magic comes with a price” after all, and this is a lot of dark magic he’s dealing with. But dark doesn't always mean evil. I think Eclipse can be used for good, despite the price.

first of all. AAAAAAAAAAAAA CDREAM DEATH MURDER MAIMING DIE DIE ESPLODE THE EVIL MAN...........ahem. You made me remember why I used to enjoy cDream's presence in a stream instead of feeling /neg ill each time he shows up. Man's is scary evil but In A Fun Way. I want to belt stones at him. You write him sooo slimey he is like ooze he is a foul oil and I LOVE IT!

next up we have sam oh sam oh my sweet sweet cSam, the stupid cringefail cunt. he is so tired...........the whole time he was talking to bad I was like 'oh right cBad is fun when he's not being Evil In A Gross Victimblaming way' and it was just real nice. cHotelduo :((( weh

MICHAEL B MY BABY ooougghhh Sleepy. Sleepy you don't understand. he is tiny. he is ittle. he is just a ittle baby guy who is drawing with his crayons but keeps getting interrupted by his dada. it is so cruel. the world is sohorrible and unkind abiut him and the porridge. he needs 20 kisses on the head to recover, yes, from this grave deadly insult onto his character.

it's okay that's what cRanboo is here for bUT WAIT WHEE THHE HELL!!! IS CHOMMITO. SLEEPY. SLEEP WHERE IS MY BOY AND HIS CRINGEFAIL WHORE BROTHER. WHERE ARE THEY!!!!! ARE THEY WELL???? ARE THEY LIVING ARE THEY BASTARDS(they are. we love them)

Overall it is a very good fic so far, wonderful characterization, lovely descriptions and panning out of the plot. Cannot wait for the next update of it but ofc take your time ^_^ is very good, yes!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH SUNNNYYYYYY

im trying reaaaal hard to keep the essence of the original characters SO IM SO HAPPY U THINK THATTTTT

and hmmmmm what happened to the chomito indeed 😈😈😈 just gonna have to wait for whats coming up >:)