A Grave Concern: Commentary I’m so sorry this is so late, I’ve had NO time. Simian Spirit by @antmations While I like the homage to Simian Spirit Guide, having a card with Escape that Exiles itself kinda defeats the purpose of escape. Forgotten Trove by @fluffysheeplion While I love massive blue X spells with flashback, sticking delve on it takes this from “Powerful” to “Busted” Cadaverous Gasses by @i-am-the-one-who-wololoes I love the idea of having to crack a fetch to get these into your graveyard, but I worry that being able to dump 4 burn spells with flashback into your graveyard on turn 1 is a little strong. Rave Revanant by @hypexion This card would be a perfect common or uncommon in a standard set. Well designed. Investigative Necromancy by @fractured-infinity This is a really cool design let down by a fatal flaw: Hybrid Mana. If this was mono black, it would have worked fine. Hybrid Mana costs make things easier to cast, and represent both colours being able to do the same thing. Blue doesnt pay life to draw cards. Sucumb//Evil by @gollumni This card is so overpowered I can’t believe it. Languish on its own is a powerful card, but you’ve stapled a card that can both tutor and then play for free, any Bolas Planeswalker onto it. For 5 mana. Reila, Undead Assassin by @dabudder This is a really, really cool idea let down by a single rules problem: This creature would only ever be a 1/1 thanks to how changing zones effects permanents. If you changed it to exile them with a certain counter or just counted the number of exiled cards full stop, then it would work. Mask of the Returned by @mardu-lesbian This homage to theros as a psudo-animate dead is a fantastic design that unfortunately just fell short. Time’s Passage by @juggernuat-is-a-metalhead Solid, simple design. Try for something a bit more complex next time.
Volatile Inspiration by @haru-n-harkel This good idea is let down by the fact that it’s a massive colour break. Hybrid Mana costs make things easier to cast, and represent both colours being able to do the same thing. Being able to cast a damage dealing spell in mono blue makes this card break the colour pie. If you replaced the hybrid with a simple UR cost, this would have been amazing.

















