#affectusrp

the theme you’ve chosen is awesome, and the colour scheme all fits together pretty perfectly. i love the graphics, and the design of them and the way you’ve used psds/textures and made it all blend well together! i also really love the graphics at the top of each page, they’re really great! your plot is amazing, it’s so well written and thought through and i have plot envy right now. it’s so interesting and if i still group rp’d, i’d honestly consider applying! i think the only thing i’d say is maybe move the summary of your plot to the top of the plots page, because i know that if i read the summary first, i’d want to read more and people might skip over your plot if they think it’s too long to read. so yeah, the summary at the top would possibly help applicants a lot more! your characters page makes me want to cry because it’s so pretty, i’d never of thought to make the original theme look like that! your apply page looks pretty great too, but i think that there’s possibly a little too much writing under each header - specifically the first one. for example, instead of “Hey there, applicant !! We’re so glad you’ve decided to take your time to apply. Your application means the world to us. Why don’t you start off by introducing yourself ?? What’s your name/alias, age, timezone, && preferred pronouns ??” maybe cut it down to something like “Start off by introducing yourself !! What’s your name/alias, age, timezone, && preferred pronouns ??”. it’s less words, and straight to the point so people don’t need to look around to figure out the application!