Trying to do the giveaway thing. Not sure if it's too late, but just in case it's not, here we are (AP). Background: new reader, in fact this is the first and nearly only thing in the verse I've read. Review: It was an engrossing read - actually, I got stuck in it and read it all in one night. I was worried after I read your writing on tone that I wouldn't like it because your tone would be too not-warm for me, but I turned out to be completely wrong about this. The strong interpersonal connections and support the characters had, as well as their determination to do the right thing, were exactly what I always want in stories. And the way that connections-and-support feeling was there even as the situation became the type where people have to not-deal-with-yet their pain and grieving because emergency situation is something I don't think I've really had elsewhere and both made it even stronger, and kind of became a the-world-can-be-good thing for me.
I'm very curious about the resolution of the whole thing. In the meanwhile, I'm glad that the thing with Hermione after Rita might become relevant, because that bit felt so weird disconnected-from-everything when I read it. Also I'm hoping that the bit where Hermione is being so awful to Ron about being a stay-at-home dad might come up (in a way that will show it to be something different), because it rather upset me. I'm a bit worried that this seems to be going manipulative-Dumbledore, which is not a trope I enjoy, but that's a personal preference. On the bright side, if it's doing that, it's doing it in an original and very interesting way, and also in a way that recognizes important things about raising children, so I like that.
The music thing with Alice was quite the combination of fascinating and heartwrenching. I really like how you have all these characters, each with their own priorities and motivations and lives, interacting with each other. I have a thought-list of authors who all have approaches to real-life-like characters that work both well and differently, and you are now on that list for me. I really loved the opening scene with the picnic at the graveyard. It's one of the best recognitions of how these things work - they're gone, forever, and that never ends, but also life goes on - that I've ever seen.
Also, on a completely separate note, I love the title.