Animatic (First Pass)
No sound/audio
Shots from storyboard
Q.
- How can I cut this down? (Too long!)
- I would like to include few more shots of the clown consuming tears... but I’m not sure where.
- I would like to include a shot where the girl drops the clown as she tries to grab the yellow flower ... is it necessary?
- Is the ending too forced or awkward? What would be an alternative option?
















