#*the fuck

i like to call this one: “Frankly It’s Not As Good As I’d Hoped (Even As A Work In Progress) But This Took So Much Work I Can’t Not Post It”

so my favorite genre to write in is royal fantasy or whatever it's called

with the kings and queens and royal court

and also unicorns and vampires and harpies

so almost like in a disney time period

except not

BUT ANYWAY

in the shorter story, twin heirs to a royal throne, the princess AND the prince, are kidnapped

originally, the villain was going to a Rich Bitch that was going to marry the prince using force, so she would become the queen, and most likely kill the princess, use her as leverage against her brother, or both. she hadn't planned on kidnapping both, the princess had tried to save her brother, but living the life of luxury means you're unprepared for these kinds of things

and the princess was easily saved because the Rich Bitch was too focused on her groom (the prince)

the reason for the Rich Bitch villainess is because normally the princess is captured by an evil man with the intentions of making her his bride and such but i'm worried if i go about it this way, that it'll come across as a petty excuse for evil

i could go the other way around, but then the story becomes:

princess is kidnapped by creepy man that wants to marry her

her brother tries to save her but fails

MC saves prince

MC + prince fail to save princess until army (of mostly men) comes to their aid

so i kinda...?

but it's not like all the girls in the story are lame and petty; it's just that the MC is biased about the (spoiled) twins because of their philosophy, and they obvs don't like the villain or they wouldn't be out to save them

and the whole story is parody on the princess in the tower trope/cliche and the fact that the MC doesn't find a "true love" in the prince(ss) it's kinda a downer ending for the MC and the closest to a magical "true love's kiss" is a kiss on the forehead to comfort a dying child-sorry, rambling

but