Author’s Notes: 8/18/2025
Creating SunnyDaze is a long process and along the way we had quite a few pages that end up going through changes. And it today's edition of Author's Notes we'll be taking a look at some of them! So strap in!
So for starters Page 3! When we started with this page I had a distinct idea for now I wanted it to look but during the process I kept envisioning different ways that I wanted this to look. It was supposed to be the picture that introduced you to the character.
Here were some of the sketches of what the page almost looked like. I was going for something of a batman style looking at the city angle, but after some convincing from an old friend I decided to go with the one above.
However that's not to say that some pieces didn't very close to being put in the actual comic itself, as you can see here.
Moving right along! A few pages later down to page 7! Which had quite a few drafts here's the final version you all saw.
In one draft, Pages 7 and 8 were actually all on one page, where you would've seen Mama and Sunny's interaction as well as her leaving the building and heading into the city all in one go. But IIRC I felt this version might've been a bit busy and moved a bit too fast.
Eventually we managed to condense it down to a few panels, but we weren't done there yet as it went through a few more drafts just as well. I had a distinct vision for this page So much so that the draft on the right even had it's own page.
And while I really did like this page, my problem with it was that I felt it wasn't the kind of introduction I want the readers to have to Mama's character especially given how she's portrayed in the web-novel.
In addition to that, since this was Mama's first introduction she went through quite a few different changes too mostly in the way that her hair looked. Eventually we settled on the version on the right. But since it was her first appearance I wanted to make it accurate.
Moving right along! Page 8! This one doesn't have that many changes too it, however the main thing here was the meat of the panel. Here's the version you all saw:
So for page 8! The biggest thing I kept trying to nail down was this was supposed to be that big picture where you're literally running into adventure. But it didn't always look that way. Since the beach scene comes after this at some points it almost looked transitional.
But eventually we found something to settle on which eventually led us to the finished product, it took a few drafts but we got there in the end.
Page 8, is also the home to one of my favorite panels in the whole chapter, just look at her!
Alright lastly! Page 11! This one much like page 6 went through quite a few drafts as well. For starters it was originally going to look quite different in terms of the number of panels we had. Here's the one you all got in the final draft to start us off!
So in this draft, originally Sunny was going to look a lot more triumphant, but I sort of felt like maybe it made Sunny look a bit too strong. I was trying to sell the idea that she still feels pain, plus it felt like there might've been a bit too much going on.
On top of that I kinda felt like I wanted this to be a bit more of a character moment. So during drafting I asked if we could hold on the panel where Sunny puts up her dukes. But as you can see the pose she's in, isn't the same as how it looks in the final page.
And well that's because, at the time I didn't really have an idea for how I wanted her pose to look or knew specifically the kind of stance she'd have. So much so that this version had quite a few variants make it to the final stages. I felt like each one just didn't really fit what I was going for. And I honestly didn't know what it was until I just stumbled upon an idea that I felt looked cool enough. As far as these are concerned to put it simply, I felt like many of these didn't match the right expression for the moment. They looked either too Zany or too pained. I'd love to know your thoughts however!
Eventually we settled on the version you all saw. But I bet you didn't know that it too also had its own variations as well. Even after we got there I wasn't sure what type of expression I wanted for her that I felt properly conveyed how Sunny felt about fighting. The stance was excellent but I had to ask myself. "Just how did Sunny feel in that moment." I eventually settled on the one with her eyes open cause I think it had just the right amount of enthusiasm.
But unfortunately that's all for now! I'd show more but I feel like you guys might be exhausted just having gotten this far. I've really been enjoying making these little blogs and I'm super happy for those of you who take the time to read them! Expect Pt. II Next Week! Also feel free to sound off on your thoughts on some of the pages below!
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