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THIS CHAPTER TRULEY WAS A ROLLERCOASTER MY WORD and the ending… ohh boy… like idk where to even beguin... i just had to include reaction pics so hence posting my thoughts on chapter 5 here on le tumblr since i dont think i could add tons of pics on ao3 and emojis aren't enough to describe the emotional chaos i endured XD

(snippets directly from the fic are in orange)

"Pulling away only after he does, the words you wish you could say to them never leave your mouth. You’re not messy, you’re human." I METAPHORICALLY PUNCHED A WALL MY HEART ACK!!! AND ITS JUST THE START

GETTING NEARLY FLATTEND BY SUN OH NO XD funny but also…wait other people are looking OOHHH NOO i dont blame yn for hurrying away pfpfpf.

"When you rejoin he waves at something above and you crane your neck to see Moon waiting expectantly at the top. He throws something invisible down that hits Sun square in the face, rock granules flying everywhere."

"Work aside, you take it they’ve been screwing with each other all day. Guess this is what happens when they find any time to themselves without guest supervision."

whatchya got there? gravel :) *toss* like to see the two lightly messing with eachother XD luv silly lil moments like that pfpfp

"You shift your weight, looking between the two of them before relenting with a defeated huff. “There better not be any funny business.” Sun can’t help but fit in one last quip. “Only Waterspark business.” " wonderful <3 pfpfpf yes only professional waterspark business here

"When the slide’s roof opens to the outside, you see Moon again, “surfing” ahead of you with all safety regulations thrown out the window. Twisting your head around you see Sun still attached to you, elbow on your tube as he “lounges” in a lazy, side-reclining pose. “why.” Is all you can mouth as you stare at his beaming face. Sun’s smile only widens as he nods for you to just enjoy the ride." THIS! THIS RIGHT HERE! YES JUST YES!!! going in one of my fav moments collection <3

"Then you hear your name."

"Barely one step over the threshold a familiar voice calls from behind in question. You mutter something not child friendly as you spin to see Sun standing in front of the gift shop because YES, your luck is actually that bad." i feel a sense of dread creeping up…

"You don’t miss the dust of worry in his voice or Sun’s restless tell. This one is subtler though, thumb nervously rubbing the inside crease of his index finger. You try to pay it no mind, keeping your focus engaged in the conversation. Unfortunately, ignoring the hand shaped dents on his cuff is another story. How you managed to miss this detail earlier is beyond you. The seam now aligns jagged and mismatched, as if it were forced back together."

ITS LITTLE DETAILS LIKE THIS THAT GET ME AND IDK WHYYY?! NOO SWEET SUNNY BOY, HE JUST JAMMED THAT BACK ON HIMSELF?!?! im glad its back on but im still VERY worried. like he either TORE that off or he rly FORCED that back on… its still got dents from his hand (good grief hes scarily strong) idk why that just makes my heart so concerned… IMMA WORRY-ING STILL

"Sun humms but otherwise doesn’t stir, like he’s formulating something. “What if I come?” He leans off the wall to take a step closer. “I could drive. And that way you’d get to enjoy your meal.” Sun happily walks you back to the doorway, all but pushing you outside."

SUN CAN DRIVE??? WELL MORE SO WAIT HE CAN FULLY-ISH LEAVE THE WATERPARK PROPERTY??? WHA? i was funnily and weirdly perplexed the rest of the scene and so on...like ok yeah sun can just drive i guess, wow! are the tikis gunna tell on sun pfpfpf i dont know if he should be doing this XD (we dont talk about the almost running a red light sssshhh)

"He pulls off into the drive through, then to your surprise, sticks his entire head out of the car window. You don’t think he’s done this before, watching as Sun’s faceplate almost kisses the speaker box with how close he leans towards it. It’s only as he’s repeating your order do you realize why."

THE WHOLE DRIVE THRU SCENE WAS SO FUNNY PFPFPFPF THEE HIGHLIGHT OF THIS CHAPTER! the dad joke n everything just muah<3

"The letters “HITL,” plucks anxious chords in the back of your mind, a kept melody with hidden strings attached."

"You find your phone in your hand, opened to the search page."

"Sun thrums his fingers to a curious rhythm, oblivious to your dilemma. “But if you had to pick one thing.” He asks."

"You’re a button press away, text sitting in the search bar." ah...that feeling of dread is back :D

“The endless popsicles.” You finally answer.

Sun squawks a laugh, like you just reminded him of something nearly forgotten. “The freeze pops!? That was only for opening day-”

“Yes those!!!” You quickly defend. did i read that right?!?!? POPSICLES YOU SAAAAAYYYYYY!?!?!?! overwhelmed with warm fuzzy joy!!!!

Sun flexes his fingers on the wheel. “Well, if you’re ever feeling nostalgic for a similar experience, Moon and I can sing you tunes underwater.”

Sun then grins. “If you ask.” Nudging that he is leaving it in your court to request for the service in the future.

You almost laugh at his hopeful attempt to withdrawal you from your shyness but instead of acknowledging it, you decidedly try your hand at turning the tide.

Allowing his offer to seemingly pull a dreamy smile from your face, you respond. “I could see you guys as really sexy sirens.”

10/10 ONE OF THEE BEST BITS OF THIS CHAPTER NO QUESTIONS XD

Finally you see your hotel coming up on the left and Sun turns on his blinker. There’s an odd moment as he’s pulling into the parking lot, that you realize you never got back to putting in your address.

ITS SO BACK N FORTH ACK LIKE ok silly fun time ye <3....wait a minute im sorry WHAT? like how did he know the address…well i can guess but UMMM STILL…SUN?!?! WHAT?!?!

It’s only when you set your drink down on the counter do you notice that the pile of mail has been moved, now seeing a few of the letters sticking out in disarray.

You fix them impulsively, shuffling the cards back into place when something else catches your eye, or rather the lack of something. You only see white envelopes DREAD ALL I FEEL NOW IS DREAD HITTING IN HHHAARRRDDD and from here on out

“Bad timing.” Echoes in your memory.

They had planned your reunion.

You came early.

:) i have no words other than AAAAHHHHH at least the brick was peppered with kissed before being thrown

OK OK I WONT GO ANY FURTHER BUT LIKE CHIPS ACK IVE BEEN LEFT DEVISTATED IN A GOOD WAY BUT DEVISTATED STILL ACK!!! LIKE MY HEART OMMGGGG THIS TRULEY WAS A ROLLERCOASTER!!! AND WHATS GUNNA HAPPEN NOW CUZ OF ALL THAT?!?!?! LIKE RRRRAAAAAHHHH IM LOSING IT!!! (in a good way ofc)

IDK HOW OR WHERE TO TALK ABOUT THIS CHAPTERS ENDING AT FIRST IT WAS A BRICK BUT NOW I WAS HIT WITH A FULL ON FORKLIFT AT THE END!!!

CHIPS I BE BEEN RAN OVER BY A WHOLE FORKLIFT SPEEDING WITH A TON OF BRICKS ON IT XD (and i mean that in a good way you know how to hit the feels and there still more to go to the story, im soooo done for lol)

suns actions left me in shambles, poor thing was such a mess when they caught up to yn…like my heart hurts and is conflicted…(i very much can get yns flight response kicking in hhhhaaarrddd painfully undertandable…) LIKE EVERYTHING WAS FINE A FEW MINUTS IN THE CAR RIDE HOW DID IT ESCELATE THAT FAST IN JUST MERE MINUTS AAAHH-- (ive been mentally screaming lots throughout this pfpfpf and will continue to)

AND I CANT HELP BUT PONDER WHATS GOING ON THROUGH MOONS HEAD WITH ALL THIS?!?!?! gosh i am also very very worried about hhhiiimmmm HES KEPT IT TOGEATHER RELATIVLEY DECENTLY THIS WHOLE TIME…. BUT I CANT EVEN BEGUIN TO IMAGINE HOW MUCH HES GOT GOING INTERNALLY THROUGH ALL THIS LIKE OMGGGGGG there probs so much going on in his head *SOB* like when sun called him?!?!? did he know sun left before hand!?!?! also how did moon get over so fast??? idk how long it actually took but like how did he get here?!?!?! did he drive too XD?!?!? and the poor tikis have no clue…the tikis back at the waterpark they aint gunna know but oh goodness still AHHH--

IM JUST BOTH HYPED AND FULL OF EMOTIONS!!! again incredible work chips i was and still am on the edge of my seat with this chapter!!! i will also be doing my best to recover from the forklift of feels running me over lmao ANYWAYS HAVE A SPECTACULAR DAY/NIGHT!!!! i am so hyped to see where the story will go next!!! AGAIN THIS ALL LEFT ME STRUGGLING TO FIND WORDS XD