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People pretending they're scared of Riddle when we all damn well know we all saw the yandere tag... im onto you fellow readers... dont be afraid EMBRACE THE CHAOS MUAHAHAH-
-Empyr-anon
Also new memes- lemme know your favs! :D
My favorite is probably the first one, mostly because I like Pokemon.
Falena Kingscholar was dead. The Geo Archon, Sovereign of Savanaclaw, had been assassinated.
“D-Did that lady just say that the Sovereign is… dead?!” During Grim’s exclamation, you nabbed him, snatching him away from the railing as you backed into the shadows of the hallway connected to the balcony. Taking hasty steps back, you avoided the immediate gazes that had fallen upon where you stood previously. “Hey, what’s wrong, disciple? Were you hurt?! You’re breathing weird!”
You had to get out of here. Now. That was the thought at the forefront of your mind. “Grim, they’re gonna think we did it! We have to leave!”
The attack had come from your direction. The spell was one of pyro which was the element you were capable of. You were already under suspicion for the rumors surrounding you and the accident at the sacred statue. Most notably, currently there was no other culprit. It was all too convenient. People already believed you had the power to defy a god’s almighty power, how much of a stretch would it be to say that the same Ruby Rebel with the power of fire who cut the Pyro Archon’s thread now used their power to assassinate one of the Geo Archons? This wasn’t like breaking silly little laws and landing in court, a god was dead and you were to be the main suspect.
When you entered the hallway, there lay the Guards of Haven that had been tasked with following you. All of them had been knocked unconscious. Someone capable of taking out not only multiple high-ranking Guards of Haven but also the God of Strength had been responsible for this. Among them, at the very end of the corridor, was Jack Howl. He too had been knocked out.
“Is… Is he dead too?” Grim inquired quietly, the worry obvious in his voice. When you set your guide down, he immediately padded over as you paused to kneel beside the fallen guard.
As your fingers brushed over Jack’s face, you watched the slight up and down movement of his chest while Grim tried to nudge his cheek. He was breathing, so that meant he was alive, and there were no visible injuries. “He’ll be fine.” Whoever was responsible for this must have been powerful. Jack Howl wasn’t weak, and neither were any of the other guards. Seven Knights of the Gavel was easy to imagine defeated, but seven Guards of Haven? As you stood, you squinted as you noticed little particles across his chest and on the floor. Not dirt, but…
Slowly he stirred, groaning as his eyes began to open. It seemed as if he were disoriented. While relieved that he was alright, you wondered what he would think. Would he believe you, or blindly follow orders to capture you? Blinking so his eyes adjusted to the dim lighting, his head turned slightly and recognition flashed in that golden gaze. “Grim? (Y/n)? What…?”
There was yelling ringing out from nearby stairs and corridors, getting closer and closer. At the potential prospect of being chained like a criminal and confined to a space just like Riddle Rosehearts had done to you in the Fyrosian Palace, you blanched. “Sorry, Jack.” Before he could process what was happening, you picked up Grim and ran while ignoring his shouts.
The Gol Colosseum was like a maze, full of stairs and corridors between stone walls. The amount of people here served to your advantage as other Guards of Haven were too preoccupied with attempting to quell the unrest and keep everyone in by physically sealing the exits with towering barriers of earth that were summoned from the ground. Even the windows were sealed with stone, casting the halls and cramped spaces in total darkness. The only light came from the sun peeking through the cloudy sky, slivers of light pouring in from the very top of the Gol Colosseum.
“We need to find who did it before they try to hang us for it! Grim, do you smell anything? Anything at all from the balcony we were on?”
As Grim opened his mouth to answer, a spear flew by and landed between the two of you, nearly skewering both of you in the process. Guards of Haven across the hall had found you, either they recognized you as the Ruby Rebel or they had seen you fleeing from the balcony and now they were on the attack.
“Quick, Grim…!” You called out, Grim having the same idea as you.
“On it!” First he opened his maws to spew the deadly blue fires, and you added your own from your palms so the torrent of flames filled the entire hallway ahead of you. Although if you knew anything about Guards of Haven, is that they would clear through it quickly.
After a moment, you stopped creating pyro and shifted to place your hands against the ground just as you had seen skilled geo magic users do. If you could muster that same strength you had when you accidentally severed the Geo Archons Statue, maybe you could collapse the hallway and block the path. “Come on, move!” You shouted, as if the earth would listen to you if you shouted. Why would geo listen when you were soon to be blamed for the death of the element’s archon? In response there was no crack or floating rock but instead dirt shot upwards to form a dust cloud that mixed with Grim’s blue flames.
That would have to suffice for now, because the geo element was stubbornly refusing your command.
The moment Grim’s flames stopped as he prepared to bolt with you, is when the barrage came. Rocks the size of your torso came hurtling at you and Grim from the dying flames and cloud of dust. There was no time to react, there were too many for your pyro to defend against and you couldn’t even create a barrier of stone to protect yourself. So focused on trying to create some sort of pyro strong enough to at least defend Grim, you failed to notice the figure that tackled you and your companion out of the way.
Abruptly you were crashing down the nearby flight of stone stairs, caught in a mess of your limbs, Grim’s gray fur and forked tail, and familiar strong arms coated by bronze plates. The hard surface must have nicked your skin and the harsh landing would have caused bruises. A calloused hand cradling the back of your head protected your skull from hitting the pavement as you landed on your back.
The force of the fall knocked the wind out of your lungs, causing you to gasp as Grim was yowling from his place squished between you and the Guard of Haven who tackled you. “Jack! Let me go right now!!” The tips of your fingers grazed over his armor, threatening to heat up and burn as his own sharp claws held you down. You could have opened your mouth and tried to breathe pyro, Grim could have done the same thing, but neither of you wanted to seriously harm the very wolf that brought you to the Sovereign. Wait… he brought you to the Sovereign.
In your daze, Jack managed to haul you up to your feet and hold Grim by the scruff. However, unlike how you expected he would react to the main suspect involved in the death of his Sovereign, he didn’t scowl down at you in disgust. In fact, he was entirely solemn as he opened his mouth–– and all his words were drowned out as you were bombarded. You were shoved against a wall by someone else.
Guards of Haven were flooding the bottom of the stairs, pinning you to the rugged stone walls as they searched you for weapons and confiscated your satchel, slapping those familiar magic-blocking handcuffs over you. You had broken them once before in Heartslabyul, but that was an accident, and these were not only notably thicker but also heavier on your wrists. Normally, you would have fought to at least stay with Grim, but in this instance he was safer with Jack Howl. If anything happened, you knew Jack would actually defend Grim.
That didn’t stop Grim from thrashing and screeching, attempting to scratch as Jack prevented the little entity from rushing to your side and meeting the same fate.
Your mind was currently elsewhere. Jack Howl, Captain in the Guards of Haven, had brought you here to meet the God of Strength, Sovereign of Savanaclaw. Why? Perhaps it was spurred by some sort of understanding between you and the wolf, maybe he genuinely respected you in a sense, or at least he liked you enough to do this for you. The point is: Jack Howl had a good heart despite his rough exterior. There was no way he was connected to the pyro attack because his element was cryo, and he admired the Sovereign so he would never assist in a plot to assassinate the archon. At least, he would never assist willingly.
As you were dragged to your feet by infuriated Guards of Haven, you felt the aches and pains all over your body. That wasn’t enough to snap you out of your train of thought. There had been tiny grains of sand among the dirt on Jack when he was unconscious. There were not many who could use sand that was a subtype of geo magic, except the Fisarun and their god. You recalled that important detail Jack had mentioned, that Leona Kingscholar had been the one to send him to patrol in Banagi Badlands. It must have been for a reason, Jack had claimed. Was this it? Was this the reason? Did the God of Intellect not only play you and Grim but also Jack Howl? But why?
That question was seemingly about to be answered, as you were shoved onto your knees and out of your stupor. When you came to, you were on the arena floor. There was no God of Strength present, just the broken stone left untouched in the rubble and a figure kneeling in front of it.
That eerily familiar individual with a dark mane was facing away from you, methodically and meticulously gathering the shattered pieces of the strange stone. Reverently he cradled the broken orb in his palm. You recognized that figure anywhere. Even if his outfit was vastly different, no longer so simple but rather intricate with a gold necklace like fangs hanging around his neck and more golden bands around his wrists. Had he not been the object of your frustrations since yesterday, you may have not recognized him in the new attire. Now, he actually looked like a deity, not a simple entity. Rather, he was not just any deity, he was one of the two Geo Archons––now the only Geo Archon left.
When your lips parted, you weren’t sure if you were going to try and spit pyro at him or curse his name, whichever came first. Without even turning to acknowledge you, he flicked his finger and sand flew over your mouth to prevent any sort of threat, physical or verbal, from escaping. The same thing must have happened to Grim, because all his yowling came to an abrupt halt. Off to the side, Grim was still being held by the scruff in the hands of none other than Jack who appeared conflicted and bewildered.
Of course he would be bewildered. Everything happened so fast, you were barely processing it yourself.
The Guards of Haven, which had forced you to kneel at the feet of the Geo Archon, took slow steps back and they too displayed acts of reverence. It wasn’t at the same level as enthusiasm as it was towards the God of Strength, but the guards were compliant enough to bow their heads low in submission.
As if sensing the slight movement you made to get back up, sand shifted to encase parts of your legs, chaining you down to the earth. How was he even doing that without looking at you?
Once all the pieces of the orb were gathered in his palm, the God of Intellect finally stood and turned to face you. Again you were met with that accursed gaze, one eye a vivid green and the other eye cloudy with his signature scar. Just like the previous times you had met him, he appeared apathetic even as he looked down upon you struggling against the sands. “You…” His voice was low and quiet, as despair overtook his hard features. “What have you done?”
It dawned on you that this had been his plan since the very start. It was why he decided to spare you and Grim in the Unseen, it was why he left you with his subordinate Ruggie Bucchi in the Dwelling of the Wise, it was why he specifically sent Jack Howl to patrol Banagi Badlands so he would discover you there and bring you here. Here, where you became the key suspect in the assassination of the God of Strength. You were the perfect candidate given your reputation, he knew who you were the moment his eyes landed on you at that first encounter and he took full advantage of it.
Cradling the orb, he raised it ever so slightly so those around him could see. In the sunlight it glittered beautifully like the rarest of gems, but it had been fragmented. Particles of sand slowly moved the pieces back into place, keeping them loosely connected. In a voice, stronger than the tone he used with you, he declared, “The Sovereign is dead.” I was never meant for more than I currently am, and you, well… you’re both not meant to be here. Those were some of the first words the God of Intellect had ever spoken to you days ago in the Unseen. Now, he had dissimilar words for you, acting as if you two had never once met before. “Had it not been for this human mortal and their feline companion, my brother would still be alive standing before you today.”
He was lying! It was all a ruse! You wanted to shout and scream at the gods, at him, at Leona Kingscholar. The Sovereign of Savanaclaw, whose true form lay irreparable in his hand, was dead but it was not your fault! Countless harsh gazes bore upon you, and it was as if you were in the courtroom all over again. Yet this time, you saw no way out. There were no legal loopholes, no fighting against them, and no escape from a god.
Leona used both hands to hold the orb, sand encompassed it completely in a protective layer. If that stone was the God of Strength’s true form, then was the God of Intellect’s true form the same?
Carefully he passed off the fragmented remains to the lioness Captain of the First Division beside you, who could do nothing but accept the task of carrying what was left of the God of Strength. “Lesser Lord Kingscholar, Prince Cheka went missing in the midst of the confusion and mayhem.”
“Search for him, deploy all guards.” Walking over to Jack who stood stiffly, Leona held his gaze for a long moment before taking Grim by the scruff. Did Jack even realize he had been a pawn in this plot? “We cannot risk losing my precious nephew too. No one rests until he is found.”
Before you or Grim could throw another fit, your guide was tossed towards you without warning. Luckily you had enough freedom to move your arms despite your hands being chained, so Grim landed in your embrace. The small feline entity’s big blue eyes gazed up at you, and you felt his tail wrap around your arm just in case they attempted to separate you two again.
“I will take it upon myself to interrogate the killers. What was it you said? Ah, I remember the report now… I’m going to kill that damn Geo Archon.”
When the sand from your mouth dropped, there wasn’t even a full second to act before you and Grim were abruptly pulled into the ground below. Sand enveloped you completely, coating you entirely and getting into your eyes, ears, mouth, and nose. It was suffocating you, and burying you completely. You tried to protect Grim, hoping that if you used your arms to cocoon him then maybe he would avoid the same fate. However, when you felt him squirming frantically, you knew that the sand was seeping through your defenses and slowly suffocating him too.
Sand was lighter, different from rocks and the very earth. If you could move a pebble, then maybe you could move sand––!
Any attempt was interrupted as a force propelled you upwards and suddenly you could breathe again. The handcuffs had disappeared while you were buried alive, but now there was sand everywhere. Sand came falling out of your mouth as you nearly retched to get every single particle out of your system, and so too did Grim. The familiar sensation of sand shifting across your skin made your skin crawl, as it was magically brushed off with a distant wave of a hand that wasn’t yours.
“Leona, you…! You—!!” Everything had been planned, and seeing the slight smirk by the God of Intellect was all the confirmation you needed.
Just as you were about to act on your promise to throttle him, Grim dug his claws into your arm as he murmured fearfully, “Disciple, don’t…! Leona is an archon!”
There was the painful reminder that Leona Kingscholar was far above you. There were mortals like you, then the common entities like Grim, followed by deities, and at the top of the food chain were archons like Riddle Rosehearts and Leona Kingscholar.
The God of Intellect watched as you glared at him from across the room. The area was simple, with plenty of space and no one to bear witness. It had lounges and pillows and vases, possibly a room connected to the Gol Colosseum. Keenly he took notice of how you were trembling and how you clutched your hands into fists. “The Ruby Rebel wants to kill me, hm? Ooh, how I quiver with fear.” Did he feel no sense of grief at all for his brother?
Without thinking, you surged your free hand forward so that your punch against the air formed a shot of pyro aimed directly at him. The God of Intellect didn’t even flinch as he casually side-stepped, your attack missing him entirely.
In retaliation, he made a slight waving motion so a strong stream of sand was aimed towards you, which Grim intercepted by breathing hot fire. Instead of incurring his wrath, Leona only scoffed, noting dully, “They’ve taught you well.” By they, he meant his own worshippers, those he made with his own hands, at least according to the legends: the Fisarun. “Givin’ up already? Didn’t you want to meet the great God of Intellect? On your feet, mouse, housecat.”
“Grr… I told you, I’m no housecat! That’s a name I won’t take lying down, even from an archon! And my disciple ain’t no meek little mouse either!” Despite initially not wanting to go up against an archon, Grim had your back as he had promised.
And yet, despite it all, despite every attack of pyro and technique you used against Leona Kingscholar, he dodged each one with ease. It’s like he wasn’t even trying, he was toying with you all over again! Even if you and Grim had him surrounded, even if you and your guide were catching and deflecting each other’s attacks in near perfect sync to try and catch him off guard, nothing worked. It’s as if he had eyes in the back of his head because somehow in those moments when he shouldn’t have been able to see you or Grim either due to the amount of flames or where he was facing, he still effortlessly avoided being hit. You had multiple clear shots aimed at his back, and he would move swiftly without so much as the tiniest flame licking at his ornate garbs.
“Huh, is that all? The two of you with your combined strength don't even have the power I possess in one finger.” After a few minutes your gaze met his temporarily, and now he was facing away from Grim but he still bent down to avoid a hit directly in the back of the head. Closing his eyes completely, he sighed not out of exhaustion but of boredom. When you caught Grim’s blue flames and hurled it at the lion, he shifted to avoid the attack while pivoting on his heel. “I was expecting more. Specifically from you, human, who has so much fire. Such a disappointment from the Ruby Rebel, or perhaps they should call you the Killer of Kingscholar now.”
“Shut up––!!” Sand silenced you. With a wave of his hand, a blast of sand hit you when you were least prepared, and it nearly sent you flying. Over your hands and arms, you felt the particles stick to you. Each particle stuck to you like glue, grainy over your flesh. Seeing him set his sights on Grim, and realizing he might actually go on the offensive now, gave you the push you needed as you recalled the priestesses mentioning that geo was about forcing the element to heed your commands. Before you could land on the pillows and some books strewn across the lounge floor, you held a command in your mind and tried to fire like how you would launch shots of pyro like baseballs.
Even firing a different element like geo required an entirely different method. Your shot of geo was sloppy, as the sand gathered into an uneven clump like a rock and it shot forward as fast as a flame. You had assumed it would hit the back of his head as if throwing a regular rock, but perhaps all your anger and inexperience had morphed it into something more deadly as you continued to treat the unfamiliar element like pyro. Because it shot forward like a bullet, piercing not only his intricate clothing but also flesh. Or at least, what should have been flesh.
The clump of sand lay on the other side of him, and in its wake it had left a hole the size of your fist where the Geo Archon’s heart should be. The hole was so clear that you could see Grim through it, and the small feline entity was just as stunned and horrified as you were.
There was no blood, no entrails, just sand. Sand everywhere. Sand was slowly streaming from his injury, but he was oddly still.
Grim screeched in terror and ran towards you, his fur standing on edge as he ran as fast as his little paws could take him until he jumped into your arms. You had landed on some pillows on the carpet, so the fall wasn’t all that bad, but you steeled yourself for whatever the God of Intellect planned next as you clutched Grim protectively. Archons weren’t human, but you had never actually hit one to see what would happen.
Leona turned back to face you, his impassive exterior steadily shifted to the slightest traces of an intrigued smile beneath that stony mien. It only took a second for him to fully face you, and in that single second, the hole shrunk as sand filled it until it looked like you hadn’t even touched him. But you had. You hit an archon. “Pretty bold, I can respect that. No one’s had the guts or the skill to hit me in centuries… You caught me off guard.” He regarded the duo curiously, specifically honing his gaze on the mortal as a smirk tugged a little more at the corner of his mouth. “So they weren’t imagining things, you really can use two elements. I try not to make a habit out of preying on the weak, so generally you would be safe. But after what you’ve learned, I can’t stand idly by and allow you two to scatter.”
“Oh, I’ll show you weak!” Invigorated by the adrenaline and confidence boost that came with managing a successful geo move and landing a hit, you only stopped when Grim was tugging at your sleeves and preventing you from going at it again.
“Disciple, let’s go…!” Your companion pleaded, his paws on your arms as he attempted to sway your mind. “This guy ain’t gonna give us any answers. Look at him!”
You gazed down at Grim as you got up, and tried to gather your bearings as sweat had gathered on your brow. Wiping it away, you frowned slightly at the sight of your guide’s pleading gaze that was so hard to say no to. If you left now though, what would it all have been for? The God of Intellect was right here! It’s not like there was anywhere for you to go right now anyways. “We have to try. We’re right here, Grim! Besides, if he doesn’t answer, I’ll force an answer!” You had no idea how you would go about accomplishing that, but those were details that could be worked out later.
The God of Intellect, seeing that he was being excluded from the conversation about him happening in front of him, rolled his eyes upon hearing the words that came from your lips. “I’d like to see you try… but I have a funeral to plan so the answers you so desire will have to wait.” When Leona snapped his fingers, the two main suspects of the God of Strength’s assassination, (Y/n) and Grim, were swallowed whole by the sand and earth beneath their feet.
As a huge fan of your work and specifically “we just got a letter” you have no idea how much I love that series. Truly one of my favorite fics ever keep up the good work and have a good day!🫶🏻
Ah, thank you. I haven't even started the Savanaclaw part of the letters... We'll see when the motivation for that spawns.
I've been kinda hopping between works lately, like between different OC stories in the drafts, one being rewritten, the occasional random TWST post in the drafts, and last night I made some minor additions to Empyrean. Now, for some reason, I've been lowkey really wanting to make the second and final part for that random TWST post I made a while back called in the land.
Maybe I'll start it just to get rid of the urge? We'll see. Just another thing to put on the endless list of things to write.
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Hello shiny, I adore your writing very very much. And once Empyrean is complete, can I print and and turn it into physical book? It's for my personal use of course! I just enjoyed your fanfic so much and I would love to have a copy of it in physical form🤍 Of course with your consent and permission. If you do not wish so please dont hesitate delete/ignore this ask!!
Aw, thank you, anon. This is a tall order, not because of the bookbinding part, oh no. I mean because of the completing Empyrean part. If and when I ever do finish the series, I imagine it won't be anytime soon. It'll probably be closer to like 2030 if I'm lucky 😭. I mean, at our current rate, the end of act three will be posted and act four will start in late 2027. So...
And I'd be shocked if you could fit everything into one book. That thing is about to look thicker than the bible but I'm not here to stop you.
I've received similar asks from an anon wanting to bind some of my works and another anon physically writing down Empyrean on pen and paper. Both for their personal use. So I have no issue with it, so long as it's not being shared or sold or anything like that. Go for it! If you do go through with it, feel free to share any updates or results on it. ✨
Chapter 26 was… definitely SOMETHING. Like, I could NOT believe Falena was killed off as early as this!! I thought his death might come a little later, or maybe Leona would persuade MC to help him in that.. Maybe Falena’s not dead. Or maybe he IS dead. UGHHHH. The moment I read the fireball just whisking past MC and Grim, I KNEW it was trouble!! Who could have caused the fire?🤔 Riddle doesn’t seem like the type to willingly kill another Archon.. Maybe this is a little too far-fetched but could it be the Red Thief and the Blue Brawler..? Maybe they found Leona and made a deal? If Leona promised they could see MC again… it could be a possibility. But IDKKKK😭😭 Maybe I’m overthinking.
Also, another theory! Could Jack be working for Leona?? I mean, Jack and his guards “CONVENIENTLY” disappeared right before Falena was killed!! Jack is the captain—he could easily have ordered them to stand down for a while… And you DID mention one of the biggest twists… Just a theory, but makes sense since even in the OG plot(the game), Jack looked up to LEONA, not Falena.
Your writing is amazing as always!!🫶🏻🫶🏻 Was really happy that June had so many updates hehe. But now ig it’s back to waiting two weeks for an update.. Still excited tho!
Also do you still accept anons? If so… could I be Mushroom Anon (welp guess my fav is exposed hehe)? TYSMMMM for your wonderful work and have a nice day!
Who, indeed, anon. That is the question, and it's rather important and remains a vital question for quite a while. Take note of the wording of the scene, but I seriously doubt anyone will guess it. If someone actually guesses it, I will, I dunno, write or post something extra, I guess. Because I'm that confident no one will get it entirely correct even though it should be lowkey obvious.
As for Jack, well, there will be some hints in the next chapter but nothing definite until later. Y'all will just have to stay guessing on him too. So many guesses on everything, and so little answers. Anyways, yes, you can be mushroom anon. I already added you!
Since we're on the topic of Empyrean, I'm going to use this as an opportunity to share part of the character page/word count and explain how I changed it.
So, originally, the content for the characters was counted by pages which led to some counts being skewed and difficult to count. An example of what would make this difficult would be like scenes from chapter ten in which technically Cater, Trey, and Riddle appear in it but Riddle takes up a vast majority of the chapter while Trey and Cater don't actually say or do anything for too long in that chapter. You can imagine how complicated it would be to count a random short paragraph Cater/Trey has, followed by multiple paragraphs for Riddle, and another short paragraph for Cater/Trey.
This is why I tried to change it. It's hard to explain, but I'll try my best. I started with Ace, and skimmed over chapters to copy and paste wherever he appeared into a separate document to keep track of an approximate word count. If he's the main focus in a scene, like it's just him talking to MC, I tend to leave it as it is. However, if he's part of a scene with Deuce and MC and Grim, it becomes more complicated. At that point, I remove any line that doesn't mention Ace or is meant as a response to something else Ace said just to keep the word count more accurate.
It sounds kinda complicated, and honestly, it is. It's a lot to keep track of, but I do want a somewhat accurate count for the content each character receives. That being said, I only went up to act two. Why not do the same for act three? Because chances are, act three may face a lot of edits. Act one isn't really going to be edited because it's complete and act two is halfway complete and I'm very unlikely to add anything major at this point.
That means I only have a character content count for Ace, Deuce, Cater, Trey, Riddle, Jack, Ruggie, and Leona. I will share it, but keep in mind these are approximations! It's literally impossible for me to be super accurate, but I tried my best. Also, it's important to note that these are the character content counts for the end of act two. I'll be including page and word count just so y'all have an idea of how much each character actually got.
Ace Trappola has approximately 25.6K words in 53 pages.
Deuce Spade has approximately 25.5K words in 52 pages.
Cater Diamond has approximately 17.9K words in 38 pages.
Trey Clover has approximately 13.9K words in 30 pages.
Riddle Rosehearts has approximately 18.1K words in 38 pages.
Jack Howl has approximately 18.7K words in 40 pages.
Ruggie Bucchi has approximately 18.4K words in 40 pages.
Leona Kingscholar has approximately 24.5K words in 52 pages.
WAIT. HOLD ON. I SWEAR ITS NOT AS BAD AS IT LOOKS.
Remember, Heartslabyul kinda got the short end of the stick because their act is split between five characters and Savanaclaw is split between three. I have more scenes written out, like for Riddle, and I'm planning on extending his parts too. And I have major scenes planned for Cater and Trey. Maybe Ruggie too, not too sure about him though, because after skimming over his parts he literally steals the spotlight so many times it's unreal. Jack might get a bone thrown his way, gotta see. As for Ace, Deuce, and Leona fans, y'all will be fine. I gotta worry about feeding the others.
EDIT: I may or may not keep the old page count for characters in acts that are in the process of being written.
Wtf I just found out you can’t send videos in asks??
Anyway hiiiii shiiinyyyy, this is more of a joking approach on the imp situation, they’re looking at the gate of Olympus with tears in their eyes thinking “damn, I’m gonna have to spend eternity with this guy”
The conversation they probably had when they were on the stairs lol
OH GOD NO SHINY FOUND ALIEN STAGE RELEASE ME I am not prepared for that level of angst… (actually pls do I am intrigued :D)
-rose anon
It would be lowkey fun... but I won't. At least not anytime in the near future.
I'm still working on Empyrean afterall and I'm currently trying to figure out a new method for the character page/word count. I think I got it, it just takes a while. To the five Trey stans in the audience, I am so sorry. I am now realizing how little content y'all actually got of him compared to everyone else.
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A twst AU inspired by Alien Stage... Oh, the angst potential...
As someone who watched Alien Stage (worst decision of my life, since I don't do well with sad things, though I did like it), Shiny.... Do you want us to suffer?
It is a cool concept, though!!! Leaving my traumas and jokes aside😭, I'm sure you would make it work beautifully
I mean, if I ever did do it, I would implement a voting system at the end of certain parts so readers choose who proceeds and who doesn't. Soooo, technically that would be on y'all, not me. LOL.
I had a thought. TWST as an idol au BUT with a twist. I keep hearing about something called "Alien Stage." Truthfully I don't know all that much about it, but it would have a similar premise. Perhaps something along the lines of:
Contestants are chosen at random and forced to compete for their lives. While they can complete alone many find safety in numbers which leads to several groups being formed and competing against each other for survival. In the end, only one group can emerge victorious. The losers must face a mirror that will decide their manner of execution.
There tend to be two factions: NRC Entertainment and RSA Entertainment. RSA has held an unprecedented winning streak for the past years. This year the head of the NRC faction, Dire Crowley, is determined to win by any means necessary. Which is why he employs you, the descendant of NRC's last winner. Now it's your job to see to it that at least one of NRC's idol groups wins, without them destroying each other before they can even get to the stage to meet RSA's own idol groups.
This year, the twenty-two NRC contestants have split themselves up into seven groups, and they're particularly competitive even amongst themselves. At this rate, if you're not careful, they'll start sabotaging one another and fighting among themselves, which will allow the RSA groups to absolutely sweep the floor with them.
The first group, through some heavy deliberation (no one could agree so they drew the name from a hat), decided to call themselves: HEARTSLABYUL. You're not quite sure how they ended up together. It seems like the two childhood friends ended up together and teamed up quickly, then invited a familiar face to join them, and they randomly claimed two others to join their group.
Ace Trappola, a dancer and vocalist. A troublemaker that has no trouble charming the crowds and gaining a quick following, which is surprising for a contestant who came out of nowhere. He nearly bailed on Heartslabyul to go solo, but that was thankfully prevented.
Deuce Spade, a rapper and vocalist. While not as popular as Ace, the two have learned that the crowds like their bickering so he's also shot up in fame. The rest of the group learned very quickly that he has two left feet, so dancing was something he definitely needed to practice.
Cater Diamond, a dancer and rapper. Fans love interactions with him because he's so great at them, whether it be taking pictures, signing things, or chatting it up. With the way he acts, you can't even tell he's nervous about the impending doom most contestants will face.
Trey Clover, a vocalist and dancer. He's actually not fond of dancing, but he learns it out of necessity. Without him, the group likely would have imploded already with the amount of arguments that happen day-in and day-out. He holds it all together, but he isn't the leader.
Riddle Rosehearts, the leader and a vocalist. He is determined to not meet his end here, and he is set on guiding his group through this. While entertainment is definitely not his forte, he will persevere and entertain all. His cute face has already garnered plenty of attention.
HEARTSLABYUL, for all their infighting, work together surprisingly well when it comes down to their lives on the line. Their style mixes pop with rock, and their larger group leads to a wider variety in production. They seem to excel in creating the type of upbeat tunes that get stuck in your head.
One song that would be similar to their style would be: "Haven" by Stray Kids.
The second group came up with their name fairly quickly, as in one person chose it and the rest were fine with it: SAVANACLAW. The first member happened to recognize the second so they banded together, and the third admired one of them so he was later accepted for his worth.
Jack Howl, a rapper and vocalist. He doesn't feel that he's good at entertainment, but he refuses to just give up and die. On the upside, his form has given up the upper hand since many fans admire his muscular physique. Is that why he was accepted into the group?
Ruggie Bucchi, a dancer and vocalist. The prospects aren't great, but so goes life. Even if he's not a fan favorite, he uses his agility in dancing to gain the spotlight and leave a positive impression on potential fans. He knows he's just support, but he believes in the group leader.
Leona Kingscholar, the leader and a vocalist. Not only is he a royal, but the attention of the crowd tends to linger on him for his rugged good looks. That's something he plans to use to his advantage. And his voice ain't half bad either, so they got a fighting chance.
SAVANACLAW, follow their leader without much of a fuss, unless he starts thinking about playing dirty then that causes fights. Their style focuses primarily on hip-hop with a dash of EDM. Their music is loud and leaves an impression, especially when they flaunt their looks or a glimpse of abs that make the crowd go wild.
One song that would be similar to their style would be: "Wonderland" by ATEEZ.
The third group debated on their name, and the end result was: OCTAVINELLE. The three members all appeared to know each other as they're childhood friends, two of them were even related, so their group was formed rather quickly.
Floyd Leech, a dancer and rapper. His official profile says dancer and rapper, but he always switches it up, and while considered annoying at first, the rest of his group realized it's advantageous. Not only can he do it all, but fans like it when he changes his role spontaneously.
Jade Leech, a dancer and vocalist. Unlike his twin, he maintains his role unless necessary to change it. With his gentlemanly demeanor, he's gained quite a following. He knows about it all too well, and uses it to his advantage and to entertain himself.
Azul Ashengrotto, the leader and vocalist. Not a very good dancer. The twins tend to makeup for that, but he does practice for shows and his voice is rather remarkable. He knows exactly how to win over crowds with a charming smile and suave words.
OCTAVINELLE, work scarily well together, especially when it matters most. Their style blends pop with funk and jazz, leading to a unique sound that makes them stand out. Beyond performances, they are most well known for the fan interactions full of calculated moves like gentle handholding, sincere gazing, and of course completing the gesture when fans' hold up half a heart with their hand.
One song that would be similar to their style would be: "Light a Flame" by SEVENTEEN.
Anyways, that's all I got for now. I'd probably call it something like mic to mirror or something. And if it were a series, it would be a longer one where the readers would decide the winners. Will I actually write it? Probably not, but it's fun to imagine since I kinda went lowkey crazy with the playlists.
I kinda feel bad for people in heartslaybul, usually the overblot is the point where the charachter gets the development but since it’s a yandere au riddle remains a tyrant and the people will still suffer under is reign…dark.
So in the Heartslabyul trivia page for Empyrean and in past asks, I've mentioned that I try to have a theme for each act. I state what it is explicitly, but here it is from my old notes.
To say that Empyrean will be dark is not that far from the truth. While I don't delve too deep into the themes, they are definitely there in each act. And they can just as easily tie in with religious themes that are sometimes more subtle. I mean, of course it's gonna be dark since the yanderes are gods and other creatures. Not to mention we're only about halfway into act two, and the kill count is well into the hundreds.
ANYWAYS, yeah, Empyrean is dark and will get worse with various themes there in the background. On a brighter note, I have a progress check for you all.
Uncompleted! Act four (Scarabia) is ten chapters so far and counting (chapter fifty-five to chapter sixty-four) which makes for a current total of approximately 41.1K words in 106 pages with 8 lore parts. The page count for the Scarabia characters is looking like:
Jamil currently has . . . 38 pages
Kalim currently has . . . 36 pages
I actually went back to one of the earlier chapters of this ask to add a major scene. If it hadn't been for that and the brainstorming while also rewatching the movie for probably the dozenth time, I probably would have completed chapter sixty-five. But I don't mind, since I think the scene I added is pretty good and important.
I know exactly how chapter sixty-five is going to go, so hopefully it shouldn't take too long to write. And I have a strong idea for what sixty-six is like. After that, for the rest of the story, I know what I want to do but it's just a matter if things change or not and how complicated things get.
Anyways, have some unused wanted posters I made for Ace and Deuce. I was going to use them on AO3, but because I couldn't get the code just right, I kinda scrapped the idea.
Also, I think I'm going to go back and change how I do the page count for each character because I think it's starting to become skewed and disproportionate.
I kinda feel bad for people in heartslaybul, usually the overblot is the point where the charachter gets the development but since it’s a yandere au riddle remains a tyrant and the people will still suffer under is reign…dark.
So in the Heartslabyul trivia page for Empyrean and in past asks, I've mentioned that I try to have a theme for each act. I state what it is explicitly, but here it is from my old notes.
To say that Empyrean will be dark is not that far from the truth. While I don't delve too deep into the themes, they are definitely there in each act. And they can just as easily tie in with religious themes that are sometimes more subtle. I mean, of course it's gonna be dark since the yanderes are gods and other creatures. Not to mention we're only about halfway into act two, and the kill count is well into the hundreds.
ANYWAYS, yeah, Empyrean is dark and will get worse with various themes there in the background. On a brighter note, I have a progress check for you all.
Uncompleted! Act four (Scarabia) is ten chapters so far and counting (chapter fifty-five to chapter sixty-four) which makes for a current total of approximately 41.1K words in 106 pages with 8 lore parts. The page count for the Scarabia characters is looking like:
Jamil currently has . . . 38 pages
Kalim currently has . . . 36 pages
I actually went back to one of the earlier chapters of this ask to add a major scene. If it hadn't been for that and the brainstorming while also rewatching the movie for probably the dozenth time, I probably would have completed chapter sixty-five. But I don't mind, since I think the scene I added is pretty good and important.
I know exactly how chapter sixty-five is going to go, so hopefully it shouldn't take too long to write. And I have a strong idea for what sixty-six is like. After that, for the rest of the story, I know what I want to do but it's just a matter if things change or not and how complicated things get.
Anyways, have some unused wanted posters I made for Ace and Deuce. I was going to use them on AO3, but because I couldn't get the code just right, I kinda scrapped the idea.
I just reread the damnation series for the first time since the diasomnia one came out and I can't believe how much I've over looked the scarabia one.
Vassal!MC is probably my favorite one out of all of MCs. I love her dynamic with Jamil and her interactions with Kalim is so comedic. I remember you said that you're not quite satisfied with the scarabia chapter but for me, I think it was the most entertaining.
I have a huge bias for pomefiore (and Vil) so that's probably why I wasn't as affected by the scarabia one since they came out around the same time if I remember correctly. But rereading all of them now that they're all out changed my perception of a few.
Heartslabyul is still the number one for me (it's the chapter I often find myself thinking about or wanting to read again and again), followed by Pomefiore and Scarabia. Octavinelle, Diasomnia, and Savanaclaw all have their own charms but didn't quite move me as much as the top three. Ignihyde is perhaps the only one I don't have a solid opinion about but I still very much enjoyed it.
I love reading your works and seeing the improvements and changes in your writing as a long time reader.
Heartslabyul does tend to be the fan favorite. Even just looking at the stats of each ending reveals that it's the most popular here on Tumblr and on Quotev. Here's the rankings, from most popular to least popular (keep in mind, the results are a little skewed because the first dorms were posted far before the last ones):
On Quotev: Heartslabyul, Octavinelle, Savanaclaw, Pomefiore, Scarabia, Diasomnia, Ignihyde
On Tumblr: Heartslabyl, Pomefiore, Diasomnia, Savanaclaw, Octavinelle, Scarabia, Ignihyde
For Quotev I went by results and for Tumblr I went by likes. I think the main reason Heartslabyul is the most popular across the board is due to the fact that: (1) those in the fandom know them especially ones just getting into the game since it's the first dorm. (2) Because the King of Hearts is married to the Queen of Hearts, MC ended up in a married role which allowed for some options and interactions I couldn't exactly replicate with anyone else because none of the other villains are married to their lackey.
Anyways, this is just me yapping and speculating, but I'm glad that Damnation is worth the reread!
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Why are you bashing Azul to the point where you dont even wanna write abt him anymore? 😭
Were you pulling for Kalim and Azul came? Is that it?
- 🍓 anon
No, because Azul took too long. And I was saving for Grim's next SSR, but now I'm flat broke. If I remember right, my past pulls for the overblot cards have been like:
Azul - 100 wishes
Jamil - 93 wishes
Vil - 200 wishes
Idia - 100(?) wishes
Malleus - 40 wishes
Malleus, perhaps I've judged you too harshly. This is not even counting the fact that he appeared BEFORE too. I had done a single ten pull during the New Years event to get SR Jamil, and instead Malleus appeared like
Umm hello Shiny! This is an inquiry.. About a week ago I sent a message? Ask? Theory? about chapter 26 and I was wondering if you had received it! Maybe you were too busy to answer it cuz I bet you receive a LOT of asks… I don’t mean to be forcing an answer or anything I’m just curious if it got sent or not. I’m a little new to Tumblr so I’m still a bit confused to how everything is working.. You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to. Thank you!
Btw if you’re wondering which ask it is, it ended with me asking if I could be mushroom anon..
Yes, I did receive it but haven't gotten to it yet. I try to only answer a few asks a day because I don’t want to flood people's dashboard, but I will get to it eventually.