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So here’s some of my suggestions on how to fix some of them. feel free to add your own!

1) drop the love triangle. no one asked for it. this series did not need a love triangle. and the fact that it dragged for over 300 pages? and for what?

maybe have james tell matthew and cordelia about the bracelet IN PARIS, but ask them not to tell anyone else because he’s not ready for that yet.

and things can still be awkward between them when they come back because james will feel guilty for ruining their trip, cordelia will feel guilty for thinking james would ever cheat and matthew would feel guilty because he saw that something was wrong but never said anything.

have the herondaisy confession happen before the christmas party so matthew would still be pushed to drink (because he sees how happy they are but he’s still in love with cordelia) and boom! so many annoying scenes are gone.

2) write the scene where herondaisy give each other the second runes. It feels wrong that we didn’t get that since cassie made such a big deal about it in ChoI.

and then when tatiana crashes the party she could say that their marriage was a sham and cordelia could ask the people who believe tatiana if they want to see her marriage runes or are they done listening to the lady with a knife to a child’s throat. 

3) split the second part of the book between London, Edom and Idris. The fact that we didn’t get to see the parents’ reaction to their kids being dead, kidnapped by a prince of hell and trapped with vicious killing machines is beyond me. and the trial? charles finally stepping up and defending his family? bridgestock being fired? I think we deserve to see those moments, not just hear that they happened. 

4) that secrets scene with lucie and cordelia…why? I mean why this late in the book? It was so unnecessary. If she really wanted to test their friendship she could’ve sent them to Edon BEFORE they made up.

Imagine, they have this huge fight about keeping secrets, they don’t talk to each other for a while, but then they have to work together to save james and matthew and just when they think their friendship is going to be ok, the secret demon shows up. but this time cordelia’s secret is that she knew about the bracelet before james told everyone else (because her actual secret was stupid)

5) have one more chapter before the epilogue!!! where we see the character finally grief. sure they didn’t really have time to do that before because of Belial and the Watchers, but once the dust settles they have this moment of “oh, Christopher is dead” and give him a FUNERAL!!!

(the fact that he didn’t get one feels so wrong)

I very much believe that if it’s in COT it’s definitely gonna be Kamala/Ariadne + Anna, with Anna the one dying, it makes complete sense. Would Anna die? Not completely sure, but I’m betting on no because Cassie is the type to have a lot of the ships (especially the gays we love the gays she loves the gays) get their happily ever after and I don’t think that Arianna is getting split for this exact reason. But it would be extremely angsty for this to happen and would make a good opportunity for these two to finally get together and have a scene where Ariadne/Kamala is the one asking for Anna to stay alive y’know cos references.

If it’s TWP, Kit and Ty. I am the last person who wants either to die so I think they won’t for the reason I stated earlier about happy endings. And in this Kit is dying in Ty’s arms and we get a scene where Ty is saying to him the same words he said to/about Livvy before and after he raised her from the dead ending it with “I love you Kit, I love you.” Ahaha making myself sad with this anyways- or or Dru and Ash, Ash dying in Dru’s arms. I know a lot of ppl might be iffy about Morgernthorn, in all honesty, same. But I have a huge feeling that they will turn out to be an enemies to lovers, with Ash repeatedly trying to make sure Dru stays his enemy, cos of his mother and a bunch of other things, so it would explain why Ash would be the one dying, but obviously he won’t acc die (happy endings reason).

okay so... I think the reason most people didn't like the book, cassie write so many dialogue ( and they were really good), she really focused on the relationships but she missed the parts in the battles or other important stuffs. SHE CHANGED HER FOCUS.

And I also think that she read most of the theories and she wanted to change so people would be shocked, but it did not work out for us.

I was really hopeful at the begging of the book because it started dramatically, but when I came into the middle, I realized this book was different from other books she wrote, yes ıt was more dramatic but also kinda not how I expected it...

you can't just do that, especially when you've spend the last 6 years setting up the original ending.

you can't write a mystery where the butler did it, but then change it last second to the maid. because it wouldn't make sense.

okay so... I think the reason most people didn't like the book, cassie write so many dialogue ( and they were really good), she really focused on the relationships but she missed the parts in the battles or other important stuffs. SHE CHANGED HER FOCUS.

And I also think that she read most of the theories and she wanted to change so people would be shocked, but it did not work out for us.

I was really hopeful at the begging of the book because it started dramatically, but when I came into the middle, I realized this book was different from other books she wrote, yes ıt was more dramatic but also kinda not how I expected it...

The book is still dramatic and I still like it but it left me with a “wait what just actually happened plotwise?” at the end and it just doesn’t cut it