can anyone see this post

Dan is dead; all hail Don.

Holding her like a talisman

Shout out to my favorite single line delivery in Mermaid Mask, when Grimoire says "What??" After learning that coral is alive and in fact an animal. He sounds so astounded, flabbergasted even. Tbh tho, I didn't know that either so I was equally astounded and flabbergasted

Genuinely think the most underrated skill in writing is knowing when a scene is done. not perfect. done. there's a version of every scene that keeps going because you're scared to leave it, scared it wasn't enough, scared the next scene is harder. so you keep adding. one more line. one more beat. one more little moment. and the scene dies from it. it needed to end three paragraphs ago and you just kept talking because you didn't want to face what came next. same as real life actually.