Broke MC

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‘Platinum was WAY ahead of its time. Sue me’

These little narrative asides make the story so much more fun and actually make me feel closer to my MC because she's got this sparky personality that I get to hear through her thoughts.

Honestly, I cannot emphasise how much I love this enough.

1) first it wasn't just about that competition show, and now it's not just about the album

2) Ellis Knight is probably not a creep I was afraid he'd be

3) we actually had to sell that song

But Platinum is on of the best in the ongoing choices stories at the moment. I didn’t think I’d enjoy it when it first came out because I’m not a fan of reality show and I thought it would be cheesy as hell.

But the story, the connection between the characters and the pace are just engaging. The chapters are long as well and I was sad when the chapter ended because I was so engrossed in it. I didn’t even feel that with NB or BB.