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The Suggestion Based MSPFA follows Verita Kansai, a young TOTALLY NOT A MUTANT blood troll on a quest to FIX THE SHIT SOME DUMBASS KIDS DID. and its YOUR job to help with that!

a tale exploring the many relms of ParadoxSpace that attempts to expand and explore the capitivating concepts of Andrew Hussie's original oddesy, while also ocasionally breathing its own concepts. What you expect me to plagerise everything!?

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In this blog you can see a few tags used on posts. if you wanna know more about the blog itself, consider checking out the About page!

Dubiously Cannon - this is used for in character posts written by Verita across her travels. Or maybe others. Take these with a grain of salt when it comes to if these events actually happend or not. This is where alot of asks go! Make sure you format it like you would a suggestion on the main comic (ex: VERITA: i like your shoe laces :3)

Cannon - Posts exclusive to the Social Medias. Though you can find em on Mspfa if you know where to look. These are parts of lore that are 100% CANNONICAL to the PardoxTrapped universe! If you know who to talk to maybe your ask can be here?

Not PT Related But Cool Anyway - this is where is where i see others fanworks and rb them here anyway. were all in this together and i just like sharing what others make :3

Author Shenanigins - Posts like these that come from me myself!! Not at all cannon to ParadoxTrapped in the slightest. Just me rambelling. if you wanna ask me a question this is where you would just ask like a normal person

ok so recently ive been thinking alot about my work on PT so far. Since i havent really been working on it due to collage and junk and also just a lack of motivation which ocasionally hits me, and while looking back on pt's prolog i relised how... fast? the pacing was? Nothing really had time to sit. Things were introduced and had little time to explore them. Half of the things in Veritas Room werent even interacted with. Most stuff in the hidden room wasnt interacted with either. And also the writing just kinda sucked??? and unlike something like Johns introduction from HS you couldnt really gadge Verita as a person from her introduction and interactions in the prolog, She doesnt even really react to the readers sudden preasence.

So. Thinking on these issues i decided, Im going to remake PT's Prolog. I will redraw the panels, Rewrite pages, maybe even add some new ones in the process. Perhaps add more CSS stuff or something. Since while i mostly have issues with pacing most of the early pages in PT kinda suck visually. Just look at Veritas Old Sprite compared to now.

Ultimately, the goal is to improve the Prolog so i can start working more on Act 1. get back into the groove of drawing in HS's style, get back into the writing, and also just make a better story so that newer readers will get more enticed. I want PT to be the best it can be, and while this might take a while this should hopefully help in that goal.

Course as i work on PT in general my art style and writing will get better. So someday i might be compelled to do this again in the future. but for now i think this is a solid way of getting me back in the chair.