Is it possible for you to do a bmp writing in which the princes mistake the MC for a boy and what their reactions are when finding out the MC is a girl? I know the request is a bit odd, but I really would love it if you were able to write it. I do also understand if you don't want to. I love your work by the way!
A/N- Thanks so much for the request, itâs something different than all the cheating, dying, kidnapping, and blah (so it is not odd at all)!  I tried to do something new and interesting with this; I hope all of you like it.  I know it is long, but it is worth it I think!
Also thanks for re sending it, you added the butlers in the second time so I added them here with Zain and Theo for the lolz! Â
Edward- Â My eyes widened as I watch the beautiful woman walk into the room. Â Who was this woman? Â I never seen any woman as charming as her before; this woman was more beautiful than the goddess of love herself. Â She reminded me of a rare hidden rose hiding inside a dying bush. Â Her beauty brightened up the room and she stood out as she walked toward me with a smile on her face, her cheeks were turning a lovely shade of rose red with each step. Â I took a deep breath as I walked toward her with a curious expression on my face. Â I knew I was supposed to wait for the commoner boy to return but I could not help myself. Â Her hypnotizing allure was magnetizing me toward her and I began moving without a single thought
âEdward, are you okay?â she asked as we got close enough.  That voice, no it cannot be⌠but it is.  My eyes widened as I met her eyes.  The makeup that covered her face tried to mask her identity but I finally saw past the disguise.
âMc?â I muttered to myself.
âYes?â she responded as she watched me with a confused look. Â She waited for me to say more but language had failed to express my feelings at the moment. Â How did I not realize Mc was a woman? Â A beautiful woman at that. Â My heart started to race in my chest as I continued to gaze at her, I felt like I could die happily right here. Â I saw a piece of heaven on earth.
âYou look beautiful princess,â I finally said with a smile as I held my hand out toward her, âcan I have this dance?â Â Her cheeks reddened as she muttered yes. Â I led her to the dance floor and placed my hands on her waist as she places her on my shoulders. Â We danced for a few minutes and I could not help but notice how nervous she was; she ended up stepping on my toes a couple of times but I ignored it, I was too distracted myself. Â She ended up laughing and I looked at her curiously, âwhat is funny?â
âTo be honest,â she said, âI thought you believed I was a guy for a while. Â The way you talked to me when you invited me to this ball after the flower accident, and the way you were just looking at me. Â You seemed really surprised like you saw a ghost; I think I am just over thinking things, you can ignore me.â Â I felt my cheeks redden as I looked away from her; I could not tell her she was right.
âI did not see a ghost,â I said, âI saw a fallen piece of the heavens, and now I am dancing with her.â
Louis- Â I watched in awe as Edward danced with the beautiful woman. Â He looked like he was in nirvana as they swept along the dance floor. Â Who is that woman? Â I have never seen her at any party before; I know because I would remember seeing a beauty like herâs before. Â Strangely, she does look slightly familiar but I could not put my finger on it.
I ran my fingers through my hair as I watched the duo closely and the dance finished. Â The two of them walked over to a table and sat down as I continued to watch them. Â After a few minutes of talking the duo separated and Edward walked straight toward me.
âYour highness,â I began, âwho was that woman.â
Edward laughed, âit is Mc.â Â My eyes widened as I turned back toward the beautiful woman, that could not be her. Â My cheeks reddened as I thought about the young boy Edward invited to the dance out of pity after Prince Keith soaked while driving. Â I had trouble putting the two faces together as I watched other men talk to her. Â I felt something strange in my gut as I watched the two. Â âShe is a very beautiful woman,â Edward said from beside him.
âShe is, I didnât realize that Mc was a woman until now though,â I muttered.
Edward looked at me smiling, âto be honest, I didnât know either.â
Wilfred- Â I watched as the beautiful woman anxiously walked through the crowd. Â She looked out of place in the crowd as she searched for some solace in the chaos of nobles. Â She caught menâs attention but ignored them as she searched for some comfort.
To be honest, she looked almost like Alice lost in Wonderland. Â Where is the rabbit? Â She was completely lost, and she piqued my interest. Â She wore a blue dress almost like Aliceâs and I tried to stifle my laugh.
Her expression lit up as she saw someone in the crowd. Â She walked toward the source and it ended up to be Edward. Â Edward always gets the interesting ones I thought as I begin to wonder what happened to the commoner he was with earlier, that boy was very intriguing. Â Even though he was a shabby looking commoner he was brave enough to go head on with Keith who can be scary.
I laughed to myself as I grabbed a cup of wine from a waiter and took a sip. Â I watched as Edward led the girl onto the dance floor and they began to dance. Â That is when it happened; our gazes clash and my eyes widened. Â Those bright, determines eyes broke the gaze first as she continued to dance. Â Those were his eyes, I remember them well. Â I never seen a commoner with as much determination as that boy. Â She was he. Â The cup of wine nearly slipped through my fingers as the pieces fell into place.
Claude- Â I watched as Wilfred gazed intently at Edward dancing with some woman. Â Did he know her? Â Chances are no. Â If he did I would have also met her before but the woman was a mystery to me. Â I sighed, I never seen Wilfredâs attention stuck on someone this long before. Â His attention has always been kidnapped by words in books, never by an actual person.
I walked over toward Wilfred and whispered, âdo you know the woman that Edward is dancing with?â Â Wilfred smiled as he turned toward me with a mischievous look.
âYes,â he said as he turned back, âI wonder if the other princes realized it yet.â
âWhat do you mean?â I asked confused as I turned back toward the woman, âwho is she?â
âRemember that boy that was arguing with Keith earlier? Â Mc?â Â Wilfred asked as he kept his gaze glued on the woman.
âYes?â I replied as I watched her.  Was she related to him?  Did Edward give the boy a plus one invitation?  Wait, why would he be dancing with the boyâs dateâŚ
âThat is him,â Wilfred stated.  My eyes widened as I remembered the messy looking boy.  That cannot be him, she looked too⌠beautiful?  That boy looked like he lived on the streets or something.  I kept staring at her until I realized it was true.  She was wearing the same chain around her neck that he wore.
So it is true, clothes really do make the woman.
Glenn-.  âShe looks⌠familiar,â I whispered to myself as Alan looked up at me like I was crazy.  Alan followed my line of sight and saw her.
âOoo,â Alan squealed, âshe is pretty.â Â She was more than pretty, she was beautiful. Â A familiar voice tried to whisper her name in the back of my head but I could not comprehend it. Â I was just left to watch Edward dance with her as a pain in my chest echoed through my soul.
I turned toward Alan who was drinking apple juice as he looked around anxiously. Â He was not ready, I knew he should have stayed at home.
Alan then turned toward me with bright eyes and asked, âIâm bored, can we play a game?â
With a groan I replied with, âno.â Â That is when I heard two women walk by gossiping.
âAre you serious?â a woman exclaimed, âPrince Edward brought a commoner as a date?â  My eyes widened as I turned toward the woman; everything slowly came back to me as I remembered the only commoner Edward had invited was that man⌠women?  What was his name?
âIs that Mc?â Alan asked curiously.  Mc, that is the name!  Wait, Mc?  That name⌠It sounds so familiarâŚ.
Yu-  I smiled as I walked over toward the young master.  I know he was most likely getting bored of this silly party.  To be honest, I am too, but unlike the young master I am used to it.  I ran my hand through my hair as I saw both the boys  distracted by Edward and his date.  As I turned toward the two I noticed something familiar about the woman; I just could not put my finger on it.
Where is she from? Â She is not a noble; I would definitely remember her. Â She looked out of place, she looked like a bright candle shining in the pitch dark.
A pain echoed in my chest that refused to be ignored. Â My heart remembered something my brain seemed to deny. Â I felt internal confliction as I walked up to the duo.
She looked more radiant the closer I got.
That is when I heard Alan ask, âis that Mc?â Â I turned to look at the woman and the memories flood back. Â
Mc, my childhood friend⌠Mc, my first love⌠and Mc thatâŚ
Edward brought a guy with the same name here.  The guy that fought with Keith.  Wait⌠was that man my first love?
Roberto- Â I watched Edward happily dance with a beautiful, mysterious woman. Â The woman looked familiar but I could not put my finger on it. Â I turned my attention toward Alberto who was standing guard by the exit making sure I do not slip away from the party. Â He knows me too well. Â I sighed as I turned away to move my attention to other things. Â Time passed and I bumped into the dancing woman from earlier.
âSorry,â she muttered.
âIt is okay,â I said with a smile, âwerenât you dancing with Edward? Â What is your name by the way?â
She laughed, âMc.â  Mc?  That nameâŚ
âWait.. werenât you that guy Edward brought?â I asked as my eyes widened. Â She laughed even more as she nodded her head. Â She had a cute laugh. Â âSo are you a crossdresser?â I asked curiously as I looked at her feminine outfit not and mentally compared it to the outfit she wore before.
Her cheeks went bright red like a tomato, âNO!  I just donât like wearing girly clothes that muchâŚâ
I laughed, âokay, okay, okay⌠ So you are a woman then?â
âYes,â she responded.
Alberto- I watched Roberto talking with a woman in blue dress and tried to recall who she was. Â She looked somewhat familiar the more that I watched her. Â After their conversation the duo went their separate ways and I quickly lost track of the mischievous prince.
I left the post and scouted the edge of the party to see Roberto making his way toward the door. Â I walked up behind him and tapped the princeâs shoulder.
âYour highness where do you think you are going?â I asked. Â Roberto jumped and quickly turned around with a disgruntled look.
Roberto ran his hand through his hair and said, âwell that was quick.â Â I did not say anything as I sighed, why does Roberto always have to try to sneak out of his royal duties?
âWell while we are talking sir,â I began, âwho was that woman you were talking to?â
âMc?â I asked as I tried to remember the name.  Wait⌠was that the name of the boy Edward had invited to the party?  But⌠Roberto was definitely talking to a woman.  Maybe a different Mc?  âWhat family is she from?â I asked.
âShe is not a noble,â Roberto stated, âshe is the girl that was arguing earlier with Keith, remember? Â The crossdresser?â Â I stood there in shock as I gazed at the prince waiting for him to say he was just joking. Â That girl was Edwardâs boy? Â Edward invited a crossdresser to the party?
Keith- Â I watched the beautiful girl in blue drinking wine as she stood near a wall. Â It was hard not to watch her as she danced with Edward, and spoke with Roberto. Â I could not help but feel a bit envious as I watched them from afar; I had to step in and doing something soon. Â Like a lion I waited for my prey to be alone and defenseless to pounce; the time has finally come for me to go in for the kill. Â I walked through the crowd that naturally separated around me and up to the girl.
âWould you like to dance?â I muttered to the girl and her eyes widened as she stared at me. Â I did not wait for her to respond as I pulled her toward the dance floor and put my hands on her waist. Â She slowly put my her hands on my shoulders as we slowly began to dance. Â âYou know you can try?â I whispered low enough for only she can hear. Â She was dancing alright with Edward before, what is wrong with her now?
Her face reddened as she glared daggers at me and she spat, âI didnât say I wanted to dance.â  That voiceâŚ
âMc?â I said and she nodded her head, âas in that stupid commoner?â
She pushed herself away from me, âyes I am the one you speak of, and you are a pompous jackass.â
Luke- Â I jumped up as I saw the girl Keith was dancing with push him away from her and yell, âyes I am the one you speak of, and you are a pompous jackass.â Â She turned away from him and stomped off into the crowd. Â Keithâs expression showed both anger and shock as he watched her leave him behind.
I rushed over quickly to his side and asked, âwhat happened, your highness?â
Keith turned toward with fire in his eyes as he said, âit does not matter.â Â Before I could say anything else he stomped off. Â I heard a voice behind me laugh and turned to see Roberto walking toward me.
âHeâs okay⌠Luke right?â he said.
I nodded my head, âyes your highness. Â Do you know what just happened though?â
Roberto laughed, he was amused by the whole situation, âremember that boy that Prince Keith was arguing with earlier?â Â I nodded my head, the boy caused Keith to leave the room yelling in anger. Â âKeith was just dancing with him,â Roberto stated, âhim being her.â Â My eyes widened as I remembered the girl that Keith spent so much time watching through the night. Â She was that boy? Â I scratched my head in confusion as I rushed after my prince.
Joshua- Â I took a sip of my wine as I looked out onto the garden. Â I had to get a break from the crowd and ended up outside on the balcony; luckily no one else was out here. Â I heard the door open behind me; I had spoken too soon. Â I turned to see a woman wearing a beautiful blue dress walk to the edge of the balcony and sigh.
She did not even realize I was here.
I watched as she looked out at the garden and whispered, âwow⌠itâs amazing.â
âYes it is,â I said causing her to jump, âthe flowers are imported from all the kingdoms.â Â She turned toward me and I gasped. Â Her eyes were a plain colour, but at the same time they were beautiful. Â They shined brightly in the night sky that enveloped us, they reminded me of stars.
âSorry, did I interrupt your⌠private time?â she asked curiously.
âNo,â I said as I turned my attention back towards the garden, âyou see those roses over there? Â They were given to the garden about hundred years ago by Charles kingdom by the current kingâs grandfather. Â The sunflowers, and the cherry blossom trees are from Oriens. Â Theââ
âHow do you know?â she asked.
âBooks,â I said, âand the whomping willow is from Dresvan.â
âWhy are you telling me this?â she asked.
âYou seemed interested in the garden,â I stated, âand you looked like you never seen it before.â
âI have never been here before,â she stated.  I looked at her confused; who is she anyway?  I should have asked this earlier.  She cannot be a noble, she would know more about the place.  Does she work here?  No⌠she has no uniform.
âWho are you?â I asked and she laughed, âwhat is funny?â
âWe met already, did you already forget?â she asked. Â I nodded my head and she said, âMc.â
âDo you mean you are the commoner Edward brought?â I asked and she nodded her head, âI thought you wereâŚâ
âA boy? Â Everyone seems to think that,â she said. Â I looked away toward the garden as I tried to register the new information.
Jan- Â I watched silently as Prince Joshua talked to the woman. Â Leaning on the wall I wondered who the woman was. Â Joshua was pointing at stuff over the balcony as she watched; so, I could not see her face.
âJan?â a voice called and I turned to see Zain walking toward me.
âYes,â I said as I straightened my posture and turned toward the noise. Â I felt like a kid that was caught putting his hand in the cookie jar before dinner even though I did nothing of the sort. Â Zainâs expression turned to curiosity the closer he got to me.
Zain looked out the glass door once he reached me, âso, that is what you were looking at. Â I was wondering where she went.â
âWho is she?â I asked as I turned to gaze at her. Â I did get a familiar vibe off of her but I could not connect the wires.
Zain smiled nervously, âthat is the commoner that Edward brought.â
I turned toward Zain with a confused look and back at the commoner, âdidnât Edward bring a guy?â Â I knew Edward brought a guy because I could never forget that silly argument he, I am guessing she now, had with Keith.
âEdward brought a woman, not a man. Â I was surprised too,â Zain stated with a smile before saying he had to go and do something. Â I turned my attention back toward the duo outside and curiously watched the woman. Â She is an interesting one if this is all true; thinking about it, Zain has no reason to lie to me about this. Â I wonder if Joshua knows this yet. Â She turned around and I finally got a glimpse at her face. Â It really was Edwardâs little pet.
Zain-  âUmmâŚâ Mc said curiously while looking at the clothes I brought, âwhy is it all male clothes?â  I was taken aback by the question.  What did he mean?  He is a guy right?  Did he expect me to bring a bunch of dresses?  Edward only asked if I could prepare clothes for a commoner boy he was bringing.  Is this man a crossdresser?  I did not know what to say and Mcâs cheeks reddened as she said, âI know I dress boyish but I am a female not a male.â
My cheeks reddened as I looked her up and down and realized it was true.  I did not get a good view of her closely earlier, all I heard about her was from Edward.  If Mc was not a female than she had a big chest for a man⌠Why did Edward make a mistake like this?  Does he even know that Mc is a female?
âI am so sorry for the mistake Miss,â I said as I quickly bowed my head low, âI will go get new clothes for you, sorry again.â
âIt is okay,â she said  with a small laugh as I quickly backed out of the room with the maids to fix the issue.  How could I make a stupid mistake like that⌠ I took out my phone and began to create quick preparation for dresses to be brought up to Mc.
When I met up with the Michel later and told him about what happened he laughed, âit is okay Zain, everyone seemed to think the poor girl was a boy at first. Â I had to take a double look myself, but I knew from the beginning that lovely Mc was a girl.â
Theo-  I rushed up the stairs with a box to be brought to Edwardâs guest from the prince himself.  I searched for the room quickly as a sigh left my lips.  I really did not want to deliver something to some commoner boy.  If I was being asked to do something by a prince than I wanted it to be something interesting.  Running my fingers through my hair I found the room and opened the door quickly.  I knew he was changing and I did not care if I saw anything, it is justâŚ. wait what.
My cheeks matched my hair as I looked at the sight infront of me.  Standing in front of me in just underwear was the boy Prince Edward had brought.  He was about to put on a beautiful blue dress andâŚ.
He is not a boy, definitely not a boy with that figure.  Oh god, I really hope she is not a boy nowâŚ. Please god.  She turned toward me with shocked wide eyes.
I threw the box onto the bed besides her and yelled âsorryâ as I ran out the room slamming the door shut. Â Oh god, I hope she does not tell Zain about this. Â The image was not ingrained into my brain, but truthfully I could not complain. Â She was a very hot woman.
Thank you Prince Edward, you are now my favourite prince ever.