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*I changed a few things from this translation to the video to make it fit on the screen, subtitle-wise.

この町も気付けば　呼吸をしてる If you listen hard enough, you’ll hear the town breathe. パパママの喧嘩　エブリデイ恒例行事 Papa and Mama are fighting, everyday, it’s all the same.

並んで歩けない登校は　すこし苦手 I don’t walk with the others to school, I don’t care for it much anyway 石を投げられたって　斜め後ろをトコトコトコ Sometimes I get rocks thrown at me, so trailing a little behind, I trot trot trot

授業は退屈さ　抜け出して　午後0時 Lessons are boring, so I slip out when the clock hits noon 掠め去った風に　不安な瞬き In the breeze that sweeps past, I anxiously blink away the sting

もしも僕がいない世界　ぐるぐる変わらん異世界 If by chance there was a world that existed without me Turning, turning it would spin all the same 火照ったへばりついた殻だ　剥がして知らない町へ Shedding the hot shell that clings to me, I venture off to another town unknown 目が追う景色と香りも　聴こえる音も苦みも Chasing the sights and smells, sounds and even bitter tastes 同じはずなのに同じじゃ　ないなら教えてよ It should all be the same, but if it’s not I’d like to experience it

この歳で頭を撫でられてもさ Petting my head at this age even? 嬉しくはないけれど　お菓子は欲しい It doesn’t make me particularly happy, but I do want snacks

寝ちゃってるママの隣でお昼寝 I nap beside mama who has dozed off 皆居なくなった夢に　すぐ起こされた Dreaming that everyone has left me, I suddenly wake up

なんという焦燥感　半ベソで揺らす Feeling uneasy, I shake her with tears in my eyes 熱すぎる体　苦しそうな吐息 Her body’s too hot, and her breathing sounds strained

声が届いていないのかい　ウンともスンとも返さない Can she not hear my voice? Not even giving me the slightest response. 「助けて！」外に飛び出したが　鳴いても泣いても　知らんふり “Help!” I run outside, but for all my shouting and crying, no one seems to care 役にも立てないこの手を　振り払うパパは睨んだ This hand of mine that I can’t even use to help, Papa just shakes it off and glares at me その目が示した言葉は　要らないって事だろ Unspoken words are shining in his eyes, and I can tell that I’m not wanted

喜怒哀楽を丸めて　一つにして　落っことして All these overwhelming emotions, I roll them up into one, and throw them away Iもひとつ残して　茜空　雨上がり “I” have been left behind in the red sky after the rainfall

晴れ　駆け抜けた毛並みが　振り返る事はなくて The sky is clear, so I dash away with my fur flying without looking back 解けた糸　結んでた価値観　鳴いても薙いでも無いじゃない You can’t change the fate of things that have already been decided So there’s no point in crying over it 目が追う景色と香りも　聴こえる音も苦みも Chasing the sights and smells, sounds and even bitter tastes 新しい町はちょっぴり冷たい　でもいいさ This new town is a just a little bit chilly, but that’s okay

君の名前はなんて言うの？　友達と遊ばないの？ Hey what’s your name? Don’t you have any friends to play with? 家族はいるの？　そうかいそれじゃ　並んで歩いてあげるよ Do you have a family? Well then, I guess it can’t be helped, I’ll walk with you. 役にも立てないこの手が　君から触れられている This hand of mine that I can’t even use to do anything, You hold onto it nevertheless 涙腺なんて切っといたのに　ダメだな繋いでいて I promised that I wouldn’t cry, but I can’t help it so hold me.

ギュッと繋いでいて Hold onto me tightly

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Chorus battle drinking game

Take a shot:

If it's a man-chorus

If it's a samfree song

If it's not a vocaloid song

If there is a duplicate song in a round

If they use this set of images

If art is cropped with the original backgrounds

If it uses original art

If it's autotuned

For every bad mic

If it's over compressed

If someone did their lines in the wrong key

If the lines aren't timed

If there's voice acting

Extra shot if it involves moaning

For every minute the chorus extends over 4 minutes

For every time Sony Vegas accidentally crops a pan.

For every time Evolution is used

For every audio waveform/spectrum

For every chorus wheel you see

For every comment that acknowledges more than just the singers in the group

If you catch wind of drama involving the group

Bonus round:

At 2:00, in the period of 5 seconds, take a shot (to your best estimate) for every 20 particles you see.

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oukime

Please check out my dance group’s newest dance cover. It would mean a lot to all of us if you could watch it, like it and maybe take the time to vote for us here

nemurioukoku

Hey guys, something a bit different this time, If you could all vote for this group, it would mean a lot to my sister and friends. They worked really hard on this. Registration only takes a few minutes and all you have to do is like it on the contest page.

They're only three votes from top five on the Canadian filters, and only seven from top five on the North American filters. Any help would be amazing. Thank you!

ピエロ

大丈夫　大丈夫　おどけてみせる僕は It’s okay, It’s okay. Silly ol’ me 小さなサーカスの名も無きピエロ Is this little circus’ nameless pierrot.

真ん丸いお月様みたいなボールの上　バランスをとって As I balance upon this round, moonlike ball 派手に転んだりしちゃって I’ll be sure to make my fall extra showy, 笑われるのが僕の仕事 For creating laughter is my job

客席に泣いてる君を見つけた But then I saw you, crying in the gallery, そんな悲しい顔はしないでよ Please don’t make such a face パパもママも知らない君の涙に Even though your papa and mama didn’t notice those tears, 僕は気付いた　拭ってあげなくちゃ I see you, so let me wipe them for you.

『大丈夫、大丈夫　痛くも痒くもないんだよ “It’s okay, it’s okay. This doesn’t hurt, it’s nothing for me, 君が笑ってくれるなら』 If it means you’ll smile for me.” ダイジョウブ、ダイジョウブ　無様に転ぶ僕は It’s okay, It’s okay. Clumsy ol’ me 小さなサーカスの玉乗りピエロ Is this little circus’ balancing pierrot.

泣き止まない君が言うんだ Then you said, crying all the while, 「あなたの嘘が悲しいの」って “Your lies are what make me sad.” 『嘘なんて一つも吐いてないよ』 “Lies, you say? I haven’t told a single one.” その言葉にまた泣き出した Those words bring but more tears to your eyes.

「客席に見せない仮面の下の “The face that no one sees, あなたが隠した素顔をみせて Your true hidden face, you must show it to me. 怪我したとき痛いって　辛いときは喚(わめ)いて The pain from when you’re injured, the cries from when you’re broken… 恥ずかしいことはないんだから It’s not anything to be embarrassed about.

大丈夫、大丈夫　上手く笑えなくていいんだよ It’s okay, It’s okay. It doesn’t matter if you can’t bring yourself to smile right, もう二度と嘘を吐けないように Just don’t ever hide behind lies again. 大丈夫、大丈夫　堪えたりしなくていいんだよ It’s okay, It’s okay. It doesn’t matter if you can’t brave it all, 私も一緒に泣いてあげる」 Because I’m here to cry with you.”

大丈夫大丈夫　君が見つけてくれた It’s okay, It’s okay. You found it for me, 忘れかけてた僕の顔 The expressions I once forgot a long time ago. 「大丈夫、大丈夫」それはまるで魔法のようだ “It’s okay, It’s okay.” It was like you had cast a spell. ほら嘘吐きピエロはもう消えていなくなった See? The lying pierrot is gone for good.

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パーフェクトサークル

笑わないで　どんなに無様におどけていても Don't laugh. No matter foolish I may be. 嫌わないで　本当は身勝手な僕だけど Don't hate me. Even if the real me is selfish. 話すことに少し疲れたの？ Are you tired of talking? 誰のことも　何も　知らないくせに Even if you don't know anything about anyone, 作り笑いで何を守るのさ What are you protecting with that fake smile of yours? Forgive me... Love me... Please. 傷つけないで　どんなに嫌なやつに見えても Please don't hurt me. No matter how bad I may seem. 壊さないで　こんなにちっぽけな世界でも Don't break it. No matter how and small and fragile this world is. どうやって顔を上げて生きていけるの？ How... how do you live with your chin lifted high? 誰のことも　考えられないのに Even though you can't wonder about anyone else, 群れにはぐれて　誰を待つのさ Seperated from everyone, who could you be waiting for? Forgive me... Love me... Please... So I... I need... I need you... 砂に枯れ木で世界の輪引いて By the deadwood in the sand, I pull on the circle of this world 波が寄せて引いてまた消えて The waves wax and wane, then dissapear once again.

#パーフェクトサークル #Perfect Circle #NataP #ナタP #Vocaloid #Cover #Lyrics #Translation

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This was a tough one to translate because many of the existing translations were actually quite off with the grammar structures. Also for the video, I rewrote some parts again a second time, so the translation lines fit with the subtitles/lyrics shown.

This is the version I have edited taking the best from both my original and video translation. The part in brackets is actually the original lyrics from glow we removed from the song to put in Top Secret. I translated that too, so I put that there.

シークレットｇｌｏｗ

例えるならば　林檎みたいに If I were to compare, I’d be like an apple 甘く脆くて　毒のあるもの Sweet, brittle and fragile… A poisonous thing

降り注いだ冷たい雨　青い傷を溶かしてった。 The incessant cold rain falls, and leaves blue scars with every drop いつか見てた夕暮れ空のすみっこで笑う誰かがいた。 There was someone laughing in the corner of the evening sky I once saw.

(気付かないうちにオトナになって　綺麗な嘘　口に出来るほど) (Before I notice, I will become an adult, and my mouth will be able to produce beautiful lies.) (いろんな痛みを覚えてきたけど　それでもまだ痛いんだ。) (I've come to learn many types of pain, and yet it still hurts.)

小さな　見栄と　世辞と　言葉騙しを Just a little thing, charm and flattery, a deceiving word 繋いだ故にただ　嘘をつくのです Connected by nothing but lies

夕暮れの涙が出そうな赤　私の中の君を溶かしてしまえ。 The evening sky seems to be crying red tears, so I will fade all my memories of you inside me

赤い　赤い　赤い　赤い林檎みたいな Red, red, red, red just like an apple その　甘い　甘い　甘い　甘い誘惑に泣き At the sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet temptation, I laugh. 長い　長い　長い　後悔の先には Far, far, far beyond my regret 何かがあるのですか I wonder if there’s anything there

私の体中　君の傷跡で溢れているから　もう進めないよ。 All throughout my body, your scars, they overflow, I can no longer move on ねぇ　消えて　消してよ　そう願っていたのに Hey, disappear! Erase it! Even though I prayed for this, why? どうして　こんなにきつく抱きしめてるの？ Why am I embracing you so tightly?

Your voice that has grown distant, a red that threatens to engulf きっと　このまま君を溶かして夜になるだけ。 Just like this, you will melt into the night.

淡く染まる指先に零れ落ちそうな赤。 Red that seems to spill over lightly dyed fingertips 私の中の君を奪ってしまう。 It tears you out from inside of me

ちぎれてく雲間から　溢れ出す涙。 Tears begin flowing from the rift between the clouds 少しずつ滲む君にぎゅっとしがみついた。 I clung to you tightly as you gradually started to fade

#glow #Keeno #Top Secret #Vocaloid #Scop #Lyrics #Translation #Vocamania!#Cover #Chorus #Secret Glow #シークレットglow #合唱

Sometimes I write translations for no reason at all, even if ten thousand other translations exist.

心拍数＃０８２２

僕の心臓がね、止まる頃にはね My heart, when it stops きっとこの世をね、満喫し終わっていると思うんだ I think that surely, I will have fully enjoyed this world やり残したこと、なんにもないくらい As for things left undone, there will be about none 君の隣でさ、笑い続けていたいと思うんだ I think I just want to continue to laugh by your side この胸が脈打つうちは君をまだ守っていたい This pounding in my chest of mine is a desire to continue to protect you 生きる意味なんてそれでいいの To me, that’s a good enough reason to live もう一つ、もう一つって同じ涙を数えて One by one, I count the same tears 僕らはまたお互いを知るんだ And once again, we understand one another 高鳴る鼓動が伝えてく My beating pulse, it conveys 重なる音と流れる想いを The overlapping sounds and my running emotions もう離さないと約束しよう Let’s promise to never be apart いつでも君が寂しくないように So that you will never have to feel lonely 僕の心臓はね、1分間にね My heart, in a minute 70回のね、「生きている」を叫んでるんだ 70 times, it cries “I’m alive" でも君と居ると、少し駆け足で But when you are by my side, it hastens 110回のね、「愛している」を叫ぶんだ And 110 times, it cries “I love you" この胸が脈打つうちは君をまだ守っていたい This pounding in my chest of mine is a desire to continue to protect you 生きる意味なんてそれでいいの To me, that’s a good enough reason to live もう一度、もう一度って同じ心を重ねて Once again and again, the same heart repeats itself 僕らはまたお互いを知るんだ And once again, we understand one another 僕と君が出会えたことに You and I having met one another, 何か理由があるとするならば If there perhaps is a reason for that to have happened 運命かは分からなくても I don’t know whether it has to do with fate but 嬉しいことに変わりはないよね It can not change this unconditional happiness いつか僕をやめるときまで Until that day where I cease to be あと何度「好き」と言えるのだろう？ I wonder how many times that I can say that “I love you" ここに居られることに感謝しよう For being here, I would like you to know I’m grateful ただ生きていることにありがとう。 Thank you, simply for living. 高鳴る鼓動が伝えてく My beating pulse, it conveys 重なる音と流れる想いを The overlapping sounds and my running emotions 愛し続けると約束しよう Let’s promise to continue to love 心拍が止まってしまうまで Until that day when our heartbeats stop

#心拍数＃０８２２ #Shinpakusuu0822 #Vocaloid #Cover #Lyrics #translation #Heartrate #0822

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nemuriouji

For me, I also want to add that this is not only an issue with the treatment of these people during the process but also the reception of the results. (I have also been extremely lucky and work with friends 90% of the time anyway, so I don’t really get crap from my groups often).

So if you go through chorus comments from the general public (ie. not friends of the participants or deeply rooted into the mixing/animation/illustration crews as often), whom do they give the most recognition in a chorus to?

Is it…

A) The singers who put all their work into singing their hearts out and working to get those lines right? B) The organiser who pulled their hair out night after night trying to get everyone together to even start and finish the project in the first place? C) The mixer who painstakingly cleaned up every last pop, all the noise, fixed all the timing and adjustment of different microphones in different recording conditions? D) The animator who lost several nights of sleep adding in every little transition to subtly make things look better, and to make sure even the tiniest detail that no one cares about gets overlooked to make your video look good? E) The artist who’s hand is about to fall off from drawing a full set of custom consistent images for everyone in the chorus (sometimes with bonus images, backgrounds and other illustrations)?

If you answered A, you’re likely correct. And I don’t mean that it’s undeserved because it isn’t. But it’s really annoying when everyone has worked so hard to make the final product look the way it does and no one cares about anything but the singers in the end. Even though it’s a coordinated group effort.

For example, the first chorus battle (if anyone was around for that), Yanovi-san and I were the animators for one of the finalist groups VocaMania! The group members each received mixed attention due to the varying levels popularity each member held, (also it was a small community at the time too so there were other factors involved). Now the saddest part was, because we weren’t singing, Yanovi-san and I were either forgotten, or not considered part of the group by the general public. As in, people didn’t know of our existence in Vocamania!, and literally had to ASK who we were when we were brought up in conversations about the group on twitter.

This is just a more conceited example, since it involves myself. I’m not actually really upset by it, but it’s a good example to use. The fact remains that, although people are becoming more aware of the other work involved in the production of choruses, it’s not happening enough to keep up with the demand of quality art, mixes and animations. More and more people want it, but fewer people are even aware of how much work it takes.

So I guess what I’m trying to say is, respect everyone within your group and try to appreciate the entire product of choruses as a whole instead of just thinking of it as an amalgamation of voices.

nemurioukoku

Reblogging onto this account because relevant.

What program do you use to animate? ;A;

I use Adobe After Effects CS5. owo

In which Aniki talks too much, TAKE 1

... and decides to list pros/cons for the ANIMATIONS of each video in the chorus battle.

Why? Because I want to.

Disclaimer: I am not responsible for any hurt feelings from reading this. I am not a leading authority on video animations, I just like analyzing animations, so if you happen to be upset, I apologize for making you feel this way. You're welcome to just ignore this post. There is no favouritism in any of these mini-reviews, etc... but I won't lie that some videos were harder to find cons for than others, which may result in very nit-picky cons...

A lot of these are rather informal, so again, this is not an official sort of critique or anything blahblahblah

If you want to ask/say anything/insult me, feel free to shoot me an ask or maybe tweet me or sth. I'll respond to concerns you may have.

【VDA】ピアノｘフォルテｘスキャンデル

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gw9YBtpFX3A

+ I like the textures + A lot of good variety + Consistent style and colour scheme throughout entire video - Typeface of the Japanese type does not match the style of the video - Far too little consistency between the different typefaces of all the nametags - Chorus Wheel

【Nifleheim Manor】 Unchain

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IU-Xz1B6Nm8

+ Tonnes of variety while retaining video style + Good transitions (for sections and type) + Thank you for remembering to lock to camera when moving those 2D spheres on a 3D plane. - Intro vastly contrasted the rest of the video's quality. - The mass chunk of text at the end is in a type that may be slightly difficult to read. - At a few parts, the coloured silhouettes are a tiny bit too bright.

【SakuraNoHanabira】ライトラグ

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mcfuq0lRUv0

+ I enjoy the summer festival theme for the video + Lots of variety + I like how the colour choices are similar to the original video. - Quality of some of the graphics are quite low. - Backgrounds are slightly overfiltered to the point it does not cohesively fit well with video. - Lack of Japanese typefaces. (Default typeface isn't a good choice to roll with)

【Masked☆Melody】アモーレ

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dtTYU5sKTZ4

+ I really like your type choices + I really like the style of the video + Very nice image choices - Sometimes the glow colours are too strong and clash with one another. - Some of the anchor points for circular graphics are not properly centred - Not a huge fan of moving 2D images in a 3D plane in a way that you see how two-dimentional such images are.

【Veiled Vegas】 Jabberwocky Jabberwocka

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZtzXE8sTWE

+ Background textures fit the feel of the video well + I like how the background changes consistently (verses all have the same BG, prechoruses + choruses as well.) + I like your transitions - Be careful that the typeface you use (Japanese) works for all your kanji, because it might be missing some. Some of the Kanji is in a different typeface. - The paintsplatters felt slightly out of place. - Quality/style of the volume graphic also felt out of place.

【・Code M・】東京電脳探偵団

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5A0ZOeaIZCw

+ I really liked the art outlines and the way they appeared + I also really liked the coloured checker graphics. + I like the look of the video that you were going for. - Sometimes you zoomed in too far and the images/type got pixelated. - The name parts seemed to be an a style that wasn't too cohesive to the rest of the video. - I don't like how the instrumental break text does not pan in a straight line.

【Flawless Logic】チェックメイト

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5A0ZOeaIZCw

+ Consistent graphical style throughout entire video + I liked the fisheye lens parts + The spotlight parts were pretty creative. - Awkward pans - The same image (The person who started) was moved in similar ways each time it showed up to the point where it got stale - A bit too much unecessary camera motion.

【KirinHeaven】メランコリック

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ODZBlgo-36o

+ GIRAFFES + I think it was really clever how the story is told to match with the scripting. (REALLY CLEVER) + I like the overall feel of the video - The typeface used weren't the best choices - Background photos didn't fit the style of the giraffes/rest of the video - Intro graphics were a bit awkward.

【TheMoonlitLounge】 Between the Sheets

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cx_oNhozXb0

+ I like the soft style of the video + Nice use of evolution + It's sparkly - Graphical style of the symbols and some name plates (wineglasses) were out of place. - Some of the nametypefaces (the strong one with the blackglow) didn't fit in well - Background removal for many of the images were unclean.

【••αкυмє】 Lost Destination

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N40r8SwMSV0

+ I like the textures used + I like the background used in the final section a lot. Most cohesive section of the video + The portriat graphics were nice. - Some elements were unecessary and didn't match the video. (red stripes, silhouettes, audio spectrum) - Vertical bar graphics with the glowing orange borders didn't fit the video at all. - The moving texture stripes at certain parts were really jarring to look at.

【Clockwork☆Chorus】愛Dee

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjwjfFSxfXY

+ The ID/nametag nameplate idea was pretty clever + Consistent image set + Consistent video theme throughout entire video (Dance floor style) - Background is a bit TOO static - English AND Japanese typefaces don't fit overly well - The lyrics moving over some images and panning too erratically are sometimes distracting

【Hougako★Delight!】アイドルを咲かせ！

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpewczjWEos

+ Emulates a dating sim opening perfectly + Amazing attention to details (Masking,cutout consistency,etc...) + Strong, cohesive transitions - At some (very few) points, the images are zoomed in too closely and become slightly pixelated - At some points (the characters in a scene w/ background) the characters moving in relationship to the background a tiny bit awkward - At one point, when the images are cut and lined up next to one another, some of them overlap onto the image next to them a tiny bit.

【❥不思議ＮＩＮＥ】ワールズエンド・ダンスホール

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38KtDUOzPf0

+ I really like the graphical style of the video + Lots of nice variety + I like your graphics - A lot of the pictures are at different resolutions - A few images are filtered and others aren't (not sure if by default) but it creates inconsistency - Colour balance might help out for some of the brighter images.

【Komorebi】 Perfect Crime

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhDOjvmcHRg

+ Tasteful use of particles + Good changing of elements to keep the watcher interested + I like the dancehall look and the 3D experimentation - Tree sections feels rather out of place - Sometimes the images don't really fit well with the background images used - Although the background 3D experimentation was valiant, the 2D images rotating on a 3D plane, again look awkward.

【Lilium Album】 Fall Into Unseen Darkness

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fooUZXbfu6k

+ I really like the intro graphic a lot. + I really like the consistent video ambiences presented throughout the entire video + I particularly like some of the textures used (especially the barb wire sections) - Some of the same animation patterns repeat too often - Be careful at some of your transitions, I see the vegas-cut-off a few times - A few of the overlying effects are a bit distracting (not sure if intended)

【Royal☆7】 Mr. Wonderboy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oJxMSZRigOw

+ Background elements were put together well + Graphical style of solos look good + Consistent colour scheme - Some of the graphics didn't match the background graphics quality/style (ie. some nameplates in comparison to the brushes/evolution graphics) - The horizontal cutoff colour checkered backgrounds near the end were slightly jarring to look at. - Intro section typeface didn't really fit well.

【Mystic♢Quartz】夜空色シンパシズム

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-KIpar2zxgw

+ I really like the colour changes for the solos + Video style fit the song really well + Nice choice with the lyric typeface - Got a teensy bit repetitive at parts - Sometimes the lyrics were too large and distracting - For the final chorus, when the images collect together, it feels like it could have been done slightly more dynamically.

【Midnight Charades】サンドリヨン

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RnCtSgD3Wdk

+ Backgrounds were well chosen and pleasant. + The white lace was a nice touch + I like the partial black and white look - Lyric typeface did not fit the song or video feel - The personal graphic to each person did not fit the video style either - I feel like the actual name tags could have been placed in a slightly different manner

【Bag of Tricks and Treachery】イカサマ⇔カジノ

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EfqoukixGSk

+ Clearly displays who's singing where (Simple and to the point) + I like the choice to have different images used as a group near the end + I also actually like the brief moment the half faces show up on the screen for split seconds at a time. Those moments were placed well. - Background style doesn't really fit the song and feels a bit static at times - A few of the pans were slightly awkward. - Nametag typeface does not fit video/art style

【Vanistiana】 Oath Sign to the Borderland

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z7E3rGfs2ik

+ I really like the token nametag graphics used at the beginning. (The whole archaic greek themed graphic style/stone background + mosaic tokens were really nice) + Trackmatting the audio spectrums to the names were a REALLY clever idea. I've never seen that done before! (I actually hope you don't mind if I try that someday in the future, just so I don't seem like I'm ripping you off) + Graphical styles of both portions of the video were very tasteful - Motion of some graphics were awkward. (ie, some backgroundstone and token pans in Oath Sign) - The eye cutouts in Borderland were a bit too simple, and didn't quite fit into the video - Spacing for some of the rectangle icons in Borderland could have been evened out a bit more.

-TO BE CONTINUED-

I'll finish this later when I'm not lazy

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LOL OMIGOD. As beautiful as this set is, if I had a dollar for everyime I saw this set (especially gumi and the Kagamine twins) used in a chorus, I'd be filthy stinking rich.

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ST☆RLIGHT would like to thank everyone for the overwhelming support they’ve given to us throughout Voca★Fusion!

While the results have announced that we have made it to the third round, unfortunately, ST☆RLIGHT has decided to forfeit from Voca★Fusion.

This is due to a misunderstanding in the final score results- I would like to stress, this is no one’s fault, and that it was a group decision. We assure you there is no drama going on- only a slight mistake in the rankings, and we do not wish to go on knowing where we really stand in the competition.

However!

Although we have dropped out of the competition, we are not going to drop the group! If you would like to keep listening to our choruses, ST☆RLIGHT now has its very own Youtube channel you can subscribe to!

Please keep a look out for our new covers, we’ll keep working hard for everyone who has graciously shown us their support! Thanks to everyone again for all the encouragement up until now, we hope you’ll stay by our side from here on out! ☆

CVCC #3 【VOCA★FUSION】 Trap 【alphawut soup】 Animated by Candy General Aesthetics: +Colour and texture choices very fitting. +I also like the lace&doily look. +Sometimes the lyrics stand out even more than the names. Nameplates: +Very nice picture choice, they almost look like a set. +Interesting decision to hide the eyes until the very end. +Sometimes the font chosen for the names was the same/too similar to the font for the lyric subtitles, which was confusing. +The doily-like graphic made, please don't make it spin upside down. Perhaps it's just a pet peeve of mine, but it's one of the things that bug me about chorus wheels. When you have an image (especially in a circular styled graphic) spinning it upside-down just because you CAN rotate it, it looks extremely weird. Nothing against things purposely upside-down images, but when you spin things in that manner it looks out of place. +Not including names for group parts is a bit annoying for the watcher to find out who is singing at that point. Some people don't care, but some people do. +The black lace/designs around the edges of the rectangle graphics often blend in with the darker backgrounds. +Conversely the outerglow around the vertical lace pictures in the first chorus looks strange. This is mainly due to the fact that you have tiny little spaces which cause overlapping in the outerglows around the inside edges of those spaces. This with the fact that there are SO many tiny spaces in the lace graphic make the spaces stand out A LOT in comparison to the glow around the whole outside of edge of the graphic. +Background removal needs a little more cleaning up. Use of Effects: +Subtly flicker and shake over the silhouettes in the beginning add a nice effect to the intro. +I liked the particals you used very much. Regardless whether they're a premade clip, or actually your own, they fit in the video style very well. +Simple panning and fades used, so it doesn't leave much to be said about the effects. (this is not a bad thing) The Pointless Nitty Gritty: +At the intro where all the silhouettes are shown with the song title, the way they are laid out looks awkward mainly because on the left side, the pictures are piled in a way that one has a hard time discerning what exactly it is that they are looking at. +Also at the beginning, the white drop behind Mizuki's image is cut off at the top. +At 1:38 when the images transition, you can see the edge cut off awkwardly on the sides. Overall Thoughts: +Definately better than most chorus videos. +It keeps changing to stay interesting. +I like the intro scenes and subtle textures over the images in the credits sections(instrumentals). +Stylistically good looking as well.

#CVCC #Chorus Video Constructive Criticism #Vocaloid #Animation #Candy #Candify

CVCC #2 【VOCA★FUSION】 Between the sheets 【Vivid Chemistry】 Animated by DijiDori General Aesthetics: +It might just be a personal opinion, but I really like the faux-simpleness of the entire thing. Subtitles included. +On the pro-side, it's very sparkly. The style of the particles are very tasteful. +On the flip-side, it's very sparkly. I'm practically blinded by the amount of sparkles used. +Nice colour choices. Nameplates: +Art is very well drawn, as expected of KL. ;w; Clean professional drawings that nicely fit the style of the pv. Well, the PV fits it, which is good. +I love the way the little stylistic graphic transitions in. (is that evolution? 8D) It looks nice and fits the style of the pv/song. +At the end, there are little patterns near the base of the pants of the drawings. I feel like something could be done with them, but that might just be a personal matter, again. +The thin lineart over the glowing bright background makes the names extremely hard to see. ESPECIALLY due to the fact that it's white. This is improved when the colours are introduced. +Whether it was intentional or not, at one point the icons are viewed closer, and the names get slightly cut off. I understand it's an aesthetic choice to leave in/take out the names are certain places however having it slightly cut off/not there for some icons in one scene is not exactly the best way to go about it. Either show them or take them out completely. (Fyre's icon at 1:09) Use of Effects: +The subtle flicker of the particles and rotation overtime is pleasant. c: +The camera/panning movement of some of the images are slightly awkward. It's nice how there is slight movement of the images to keep the watcher entertained, but the weird swaying/pulsating type motion is kind of odd. At some points it looked okay, and at others it looks like you moved it just a BIT too much. For example KL's icon at 1:11-ish, it does a slightly abrupt direction change and moves strangely far in that direction. Immediately after it though, the slight movement THERE looks rather nice. +The extra particles INSIDE the icons along with the already sparkly background is a bit overkill with the slkjdlksfshiny particles. +At the same time, good job trackmatting those particles. The Pointless Nitty Gritty: +At the end with the video credits, the way the text is placed "Video" then with "Dijidori" next to it, when the icon appears, it's jarring to look at the space that forms before your name appears. +(This is partially due to the scripting >A>) At KL's solo at 3:31, the flash before the full images comes on looks good, but it feels like it would fit much better BEAT-wise with at 3:32 instead of 3:35. Perhaps a prolonged screenflash could've been used, (this could be just a personal opinion) but it feels offbeat with the momentary pause that occurs. +Occassionally, particles pass by in the foreground, and I'm not sure if it was intentional, but there seems to be some sort of dark opaque glow around it that blocks out particles behind it that looks slightly strange. Overall Thoughts: +Very deceptively simple in a good way. People probably don't see the complications behind making a video like that, but that's the beauty of it. +Maybe it was a personal aesthetic choice to make the icons harder to see, but the constant movement of the icons is something that ATTRACTS attention, so you're trying to do both at the same time, which is a bit confusing. +It is very sparkly.

#CVCC #Chorus Video Constructive Criticism #Vocaloid #Animation #DijiDori #Digital Dream

CVCC #1 【１２男合唱＋２】「Leia」-Male Chorus-【Happy Halloween!】 Animated by Kentamidorin

Alright, idk where to start, but I'll try to structure this into something understandable. XD; General Aesthetics: +Fits the style of the song and the original PV very well. +Use of multiple dulled out colours and paint splatters very well done. +Nice font choice. Again, fit the song and not particularly out of place. +Font stylings very nice. +Layout of some of the images was slightly awkward. +The fire at the end is a very nice touch. Nameplates: +Creative way of representing and showing the nameplates rather than individual icons. +Background removal is better in this video but still some stray edges and backgrounds are lurking on the images, however the style of the pv hid those rather well. +Drawing styles for the images sometimes VASTLY different to almost a jarring extent (ie. Fruu-san's image) +Some slightly out of context pictures. A bit tougher to point out, but the PoT picture KINDA stands out a bit even if it is kinda emo-sauce looking, but then again only obvious to SOME people. Use of Effects: +The flashing effect over the entire video made it particularly difficult to see. In this case, it could be an aesthetic effect choice in which it's alright but be careful of how much of it you use. +In the same instance, the shaky camera/wiggle effect used is similar, however the constant movement over such a large number of pixels can be slightly tedious to look at during the ENTIRE video. +Transitions are simple but smooth. Not every video has to be flashy,so this is nice. The Pointless Nitty Gritty : +The way the shaky camera movement is applied, perhaps because it is vegas, I can see the edges of some of your overlay textures. (or maybe you just need to scale your textures larger) +It happens again when you pan your images too far. I assume these are pre-made with the images over the textures background with splatters added, becareful that you don't accidentally overestimate the size of it and end up with awkward cutoffs. +Again the background removal could be further cleaned up a bit. Overall Thoughts: +Not overly complicated, but pleasing to look at nonetheless. +However, it is a bit busy to look at and gives quite a lot to focus on at the same time. +Creatively different enough from the conventional chorus video. +It looks good, that is the most important thing. c:

#CVCC #Chorus Video Constructive Criticism #Vocaloid #Animation #Kenta

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『ライトラグ』 joboさんの為に【１１人合唱】

Birthday chorus for Jobo-san.

Screenshot of layers and keyframes here.

Chorus Video Constructive Criticism

Promised to make a tutorial, so one'll be coming up... at some point... whenever I stop dying from homework/exams/animations/life.

In the meantime, I've been bored, and I feel like being a jerk giving some constructive criticism for chorus videos. :O

How is this going to work? You're going to send me a video in my ask box, and I'm going to critique it. A few house rules to keep in mind first.

1. Must be your own video. If you made it with someone else please get their permission as well.

2. My word/opinion is not almighty. I'm just a lowly animator with too much time on their hands and needs a life. What I give you is largely my opinion and what I've learned over the course of animating several choruses. I am NOT the best animator out there. I do NOT know everything there is to chorus videos and animating. This is just my opinion and judgement and you are welcome to disagree. This is all only if you want my opinion.

3. Contrary to popular opinion I'm not actually a very nice person. owo;; I'm sorry if what I say may or may not come off as harsh.

4. I forgot all my other points.

5. And yet I'm still numbering this off.

6. I'll probably add to this later if people actually send stuff in.

But please don't be afraid to drop your video in my ask box! I'd like to try this out o v o)b*

#Vocaloid chorus animations #Constructive Criticism

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