THE MONTAUK PROJECT
Part one of character rewrites.
The Byers.
TW for: CSA, child abuse, domestic violence, substance abuse.
PT 2
PT 3
PT 4
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JOYCE MALDONADO
Because I donβt want her to keep Lonnieβs name. They stay technically married to avoid the legal complications that come from divorce, but they are not together.
2nd gen immigrant- her parents are from Spain, but she knows little to nothing about the culture due to assimilation over time.Β
37 years old, greyish skin, her stature is short and thin. Has a bit of a smoking addiction which leaves her voice rough. Her clothes are old, cheap, or thrifted. Her hair is shoulder length, dark brown, and cut at home with split ends.
She works multiple jobs, both at a grocery store, and a local restaurant- (as a waitress, she is not a good cook)
She wanted to be a singer.
Sheβs a kind person. Caring; and extremely protective over her children. Her instincts are sharp, and sheβs very clever. She never got to go to college.Β
She doesnβt talk about problems, or the past- even if she should. She never apologizes and never expects apologies. Sheβs also extremely stubborn.
Sheβs a tired person. She loves her children deeply, and tries her best to make time for them, but has never been emotionally available due to financial concerns and abuse from her husband.Β
She married Lonnie when she was 22. They met when she was 17 and he was 21. They got married when she found out about her pregnancy.Β
When Jonathan was younger, she was deeper into her addictions, still convinced she was βin loveβ with Lonnie. All manipulation on his part. Will was born as a sort of last ditch effort to fix their marriage. When he came around, Joyce set herself on being a better person- which marked the start of Lonnie being abusive rather than simply toxic.Β
LONNIE BYERS
Iβll keep this short.
41 years old. Spindly and stronger than he looks. Perpetual scruff on his face and grey hair. Heβs been arrested for domestic violence and by the start of the story, heβs been released on parole for about a year. He has not contacted his family.Β
He has an addiction to alcohol and prescription drugs, something he picked up from his parents.Β
He spits words like bile, and he used to be a musician.Β
Jonathan is his favorite child. Jonathan is his least favorite child.
He does what he does to Jonathan from a place of self loathing; repression, and trauma.
He lacks emotional stability, and self control. Heβs passionate. He can be extremely loving and extremely cruel. He wants sex and money because he cannot name the loneliness in his heart.Β
He does not survive my version of the plot.
He is not redeemed.
JONATHAN BYERS
he grew up with the name, and cannot shed it anymore. Itβs a part of him that he hates.
15 years old. His skin is pale, and his hair is a dark hazel. Heβs lean, but strong. Shorter than average for his age, but not by much. His back is scarred from the metal of Lonnieβs belt. Perpetual bags under his eyes and a crooked nose- broken years ago and set back incorrectly. His hair is overgrown, and choppy. He cuts it himself to avoid his motherβs classic bowl cut.
He works at a local gas station to help his mother. Lonnie never brought in much cash, but he still supported their family. He does most of the cooking and cleaning. Their house is still a mess anyways.
Photography is his passion. Itβs the only thing he has for himself. He gets free materials from the school, and the camera is from Joyce.
At heart, heβs kind. He doesnβt like watching anyone or anything suffer. Heβll defend people he doesnβt know based off principle. Heβs braver than he looks and he can be funny when he wants to be.
Heβs generally antisocial. Not because of anxiety, he just doesnβt like people. Too much and too loud. He can be cold to people that try to break his barriers down, and has severe trust issues.Β
(Heβs also autistic- undiagnosed.)
Heβs a fundamental pessimist, focused on the worst possibilities- almost balancing out his mother.Β
He cares about his family more than anything. And he spent his whole childhood protecting them, both physically and emotionally. Especially Will.Β
He faced the brunt of his fatherβs abuse, and did everything he could to shield Will, for the most part successfully. Heβs always made himself available for him.Β
Joyce has never been available for him; not really. Heβs always been more of a co-parent than a son. She still loves him, of course.
But sheβs more likely to patch him up than stop him from getting hurt in the first place.
He tries to not blame her; but he holds some resentment for it.
His dad was touchy with him. He canβt remember much. Just being afraid; and hands much bigger than his over his body. It only really happened when he was younger. From around 5 to ten. He was told that it was a good thing. Affection. Attention.Β
It changed him, made him weirder. He doesnβt understand boundaries very well. But he knows right from wrong.Β
He wonders, often, if itβs the reason why he doesnβt like girls.
He spared Will from their father. Just not from the upside down.
WILL BYERS
takes his fatherβs last name, like his brother.
Skinny and short, with a bowl cut thatβs rather awkward on him. All he wears are hand-me-downs. Has one scar on his back from a time Jonathan couldnβt protect him. Heβs a cute kid, always looking small and nervous, even when heβs at ease. Somewhat mouse-like.
He does whatever chores he can. Heβs aware of his familyβs financial situation, and always tries to restrict himself from having things he wants.Β
Overall, heβs a normal kid. Happy and caring. A little too shy for a boy though. A little too artsy. But he has friends that love him, and Jonathan, so he doesnβt need to listen to the insults that get hurled at him by people he doesnβt even know. Heβs brave, and daring. Supportive, but not a leader.Β
He worries about more things than he should, curses himself for being weak. And for crying becauseΒ godΒ he cries too much. He tries to be good. To not be selfish. He fails too often.Β
He doesnβt really understand what the fuss is about girls. He doesnβt understand the fear in his brotherβs face when he mentions it. Not yet.
He got into drawing because of Jonathan. Heβs called him dad accidentally more than heβs ever talked to Lonnie.
Heβs good at hiding; being quiet. He had to learn how to be good at it.


















