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sometimes you need dialogue tags and don't want to use the same four

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some people think writers are so eloquent and good with words, but the reality is that we can sit there with our fingers on the keyboard going, “what’s the word for non-sunlight lighting? Like, fake lighting?” and for ten minutes, all our brain will supply is “unofficial”, and we know that’s not the right word, but it’s the only word we can come up with…until finally it’s like our face got smashed into a brick wall and we remember the word we want is “artificial”.
I couldn't remember the word "doorknob" ten minutes ago.
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Hi! This is my first time asking, but your prompts are amazing! It’s almost like you’ve experienced these scenarios with how detailed you are! Any who, I was curious about tips on starting off a story. What are the best ways to hook a reader in the beginning?
Aww that is actually one of the best compliments I had so far!
How to start a story
don't start with descriptions
the reader can get bored if the descriptions are too long
they won't remember details until they actually formed a connection to the situation and the characters
start with a prologue or flashforward or flashback
this way you can show what's going to come or what happened so far to get the reader hooked
a lot of writers advice against using dream sequences and the character waking up as the beginning of the story, because it can seem lazy
start with action
hook the reader by throwing them right into action
they get invested sooner in the plot and the characters
they want to find out more about the context that brought them to this point
build an emotional connection
start by showing an emotional scene or present the character's goals and intentions and motivation to make people relate to them and their struggle
surprise the reader
start in an unusual situation, something that may even confuse the reader at first (but not too much, you should resolve it quickly to get them to keep reading)
leave them with questions they want to find the answers for
I hope this helps you and good luck writing!
- Jana
These are awesome! Going to keep these in mind!
Word Upgrades & Adverb Replacements
Not banning adverbs, just helping you avoid the icky ones.
1. Swap the adverb, not the meaning. Instead of: “He whispered angrily.” Try: “He hissed the words between his teeth.”
2. Replace “said” only when it changes tone. Not every line needs flair! But sometimes: • mused (thinking aloud) • snapped (tension) • muttered (quiet frustration) • chirped (bright and quick)
3. Alternatives to ‘almost’ that aren’t icky. Objects: brushing against, bordering, adjacent to Actions: poised to, ready to, about to States: akin to, resembling, not quite Misc: a whisper from, at the cusp of, within reach of
Example: Instead of: “She was almost smiling.” Try: “A smile hovered at the edge of her mouth.”
Punctuation as a Writing Superpower
Punctuation is mood.
1. Em-dash = drama or interruption. “The decision — reckless as it was — already felt final.”
2. Semicolon = linked thoughts. “The storm hammered the walls; inside, her hands wouldn’t stop shaking.”
3. Colon = emphasis or explanation. “He wanted only one thing: answers.”
4. Ellipses = hesitation or fading thoughts. “I thought I saw someone behind the shed, but…”
5. Intentional fragments = emotional punch. “The letter fell from her hands. Silence. Then breathing. Then panic.”
high-tension romantic scenarios to get lost in
fixing each other's collar/zipper/tie/etc - getting unexpectedly close, breath catching when they realize (or their light touches burning into the other's skin)
^ also moving someone's hair out of their face/behind their ear
^ or touching someone's necklace/bracelet/watch
eye contact in a crowded room, but not exchanging any words/expressions - just looking at each other, the rest of the world going still.
^a(n unironic) wink in this situation. or an eyebrow raise, lick or bite of lips, or head tilt. there's something in the subtlety of it - like "this is between us"
pulling someone in by their belt loops??? this is so random idk
feeling the other's breath/lips ghosting their neck
any sort of whisper. anywhere. goddamn.
a long pause when someone is speaking, as though they lost their train of thought while looking at the other person
their bodies accidentally pressed together - being stuck in a small space, falling onto one another, or having to sit really close together. the pause when it's realized.
^this but they're hiding
"make me"
"i dare you"
"and if i do?"/"what will i get (if i do)?" "show/tell me what you want"
the pinky reach before holding hands for the first time
slow dancing (the hand placement, eye contact, proximity, MUSIC)
teaching the other something that involves physical contact (like holding their hands while trying to balance on a skateboard, or guiding their hands somewhere)
eye contact, waiting for one to fold
"don't do that to me" (tempting the other)
sharing earbuds - forced proximity, the vulnerability in sharing things that matter to them
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Writing Description Notes:
Updated 19th October 2025 More writing tips, review tips & writing description notes
Dialogue Tags
Facial Expressions
Masking Emotions
Smiles/Smirks/Grins
Eye Contact/Eye Movements
Blushing
Voice/Tone
Body Language/Idle Movement
Thoughts/Thinking/Focusing/Distracted
Silence
Memories
Happy/Content/Comforted
Love/Romance
Sadness/Crying/Hurt
Confidence/Determination/Hopeful
Surprised/Shocked
Guilt/Regret
Disgusted/Jealous
Uncertain/Doubtful/Worried
Anger/Rage
Laughter
Confused
Speechless/Tongue Tied
Fear/Terrified
Mental Pain
Physical Pain
Tired/Drowsy/Exhausted
Eating
Drinking
Warm/Hot
Cold/Freezing
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MarzVA is a young, nonbinary (they/them) and queer Irish-African voice actor born on June 25th, 2010. They're based on the coasts of North America and rooted in the culture of improv acting.
They come from humble beginnings as a voice actor, starting out with voiceover work and slowly progressing to improv classes. They currently perform with a local improv group, and on their days off, they voice act and audition for various projects. Marz has been working to become a better voiceover actor for 2 years.
MarzVA has a decent range, but prioritizes high & medium voices over low ones.
MarzVA is a voice director for many different Discord VA servers.
MarzVA creates background beats & occasionally character themes.
Marz can be found in small YouTube productions such as WCUE stories, where they're quite popular with some creators like The Gaming Rose, Flytrapstar, FennecWCUE and others. Despite their enjoyment for smaller films, Marz dreams to be involved in indie animated shows.
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