okay so i don't really have it in me to talk properly about the two plays i saw today and yesterday due to still being in the depths of the bad brain but i do have to say that they were a very interesting back-to-back double feature, not because there were really any similarities between the two at all but just because of things i noticed about quality of the writing of each of them and the contrast that i think was only so apparent to me because i watched them back to back
i enjoyed yesterday's play a lot but i found myself frustrated that it felt very… overwritten i guess? like the playwright had a lot of Big Important Ideas about Big Important Issues and they wanted to make sure that the audience Got all of those ideas, so a lot of the play was the characters very explicitly stating those ideas out loud, sometimes quite literally turning to address the audience to make sure there was no hint of doubt as to what each moment (each conversation, each metaphor or bit of symbolism) was About. and honestly i've felt that in a lot of new plays i've seen recently where it feels like the playwright really wants to hold your hand and make sure there is no chance that anything is misunderstood or missed
so i guess what was so refreshing about the play i saw today was it really felt like the playwright had the confidence that these characters and the interactions between them were strong and developed enough to stand on their own. and it's not like there weren't really huge Big Ideas in this play, there absolutely were, but it felt like the playwright just trusted the audience to read between the lines and connect the dots of what was not being said. so many of my favorite scenes in tonight's play had no dialogue, or very little kind of stilted uncomfortable dialogue that felt like a real stilted uncomfortable conversation, but a million things were happening underneath every moment of silence (or every moment of rambling patter seemingly About Nothing) and the playwright trusted that 1) the actors could convey emotions without words and 2) the audience would have enough insight and experience as people who have also Lived their own lives in this world to not need their hands held through it
not a really profound observation at all (like… tl;dr show don't tell. wow. totally new concept!) but very interesting contrast to observe and at least notice the difference in my own personal reaction to both plays. anyways. i really feel like i'm learning a lot About Playwriting (and everything else about making theater) from seeing so much new work which is very cool