COOL now that im home and am officially on break and have a bit more time. here are some things i fucking adored about ur vi fic:
"ur the kind of pretty that makes me want to do bad things" hello 911 i would like to report a murder
vi being a loser and down bad and just an overall simp is SO so in character for her bc like she is a lover girl at heart; she loves so hard and so deep and so STUPIDLY and you captured that so well in ur fic
sevika? ? ? ?? a cunt. but also serving cunt. we stan
the puck off bracelet. brb while i commission an etsy artist to make it tbh
vi having a rep for being a player but like. being so whipped for u that all her teammates like "lol oKAY" is on brand and so insane honestly
i kind of love roommate!maddie
vi being kind of a genius is also canon thank u for acknowledging/including that in the fic, it just made the lesbian miscommunication THAT much better
“Anymore concerns, cupcake?” what if i swan-dove off the nearest building WHAT THEN
pineapple on pizza is superior. i will sick warwick on anyone who disagrees
i truly have no clue who ellie and abby are i only know them thru the variety of vi-fics i've read on tumblr bc they seem to be popular overlaps with vi-stans (which we love!!!) but their characters in ur fic specifically is so good
ANIMAL PLANET!!!! did you ever watch those "the most XTREME" countdown shows bc THOSE WERE MY ENTIRE CHILDHOOD
i sadly cant smoke bc of medical conditions but i would still let vi smoke me out cool yeah whatever goodbye
“I’ve been fantasizing about fucking you on your couch.” hi i'd like to buy a gun.
“Think I’ve always wanted to have you,” /GUNSHOTS/
look see now i also have a huge problem and it's the fact that i'll never get over this fic i fear. never. ever. ugh. UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
OHMYGODDDDDD, i’ve been looking for a moment to actually reply to this because i SCREAMED! when i saw this ask!! I LOVE YOUUuuuuUuuUuuuuuU!!!! this whole this made me giggle thank yEW for the time you took to share your thoughts i’m DEAD! A FEW THINGS I’D LOVE TO REPLY TO:
YES! vi is a certified lover girl idc what anyone says WHICH IS WHY i have to challenge this with one of my upcoming fics :]
sev is so cunt in every aspect of the word, i can’t wait to write more for her /screams/
genius!vi is SO cannon! i stand by the fact that she’s such a smartypants (brb thoughts are being THUNK)
pineapple in pizza is SO yum, i’m not even sorry!!
ellie & abby are my first loves ohmygod, tlou tumblr had me in a chokehold last year holy fuck
YES I LOVE ANIMAL PLANET I HAD TO PAY HOMAGE
i lowkey don’t like smoking, but it can be such an intimate / hot exchange and it makes me so h-WORD! VI ALSO COULD SMOKE ME OUT ANYTIME IDC!
yea idk where some of that dialogue came from in the smut part BUT IM NOT MAD AT IT heh
ANYWHO!! i see those chapters of figure eights AND IM SAUR READY to curl up in a ball in bed + kick my feet + spam ur inbox with my screaming !!