2026 Book Review #43 – Psychopomp & Circumstance by Eden Royce
I grabbed this off this year’s Ignyte Award shortlist because the title was the right sort of almost-clever to put a dumb smile on my face, and my attention thus gained it seemed like it could be a wonderfully harrowing Gothic ghost story. A swing and a miss, as it turns out. I can see why this ended up with some award nominations – the setting is well-drawn and enchanting, the prose often quite delightful – this is a fairly one-note short story spread incredibly thin over three times as many pages as it really needs. It also deserves to be called ‘horror’ about as much as an episode of Caspar the Friendly Ghost.
Set in a fantastical alternate history of the Reconstruction-era United States, the story follows Phee – a daughter of New Charleston’s black upper class, the only child of a loving but distant workaholic father and an oppressively involved society woman mother. Having just about managed to weave through her most marriageable years without being entrapped in a suitable marriage to any eligible bachelors from similarly respectable families, the simmering tensions with her mother explode dramatically when a messenger arrives with news that her beloved aunt – the firmly estranged black sheep of the family – has died and needs a family member to handle the funeral arrangements. Phee openly defies her mother for possibly the first time in her life, taking a carriage to the strange and small town her aunt spent the last decade of her life building from nothing. Upon arrival she finds herself reckoning with the weight of the responsibilities she rashly took on, the eerie nature of her new surroundings, and soon enough the murky secret that led to her aunt’s exile to begin with.
To begin with a positive, I really loved the book’s setting – both the choice of it and how it was presented and evoked throughout the novel. The Reconstruction-era American South is an incredibly rich field for stories of basically whatever kind, and the small (but incredibly disproportionately influential, culturally speaking) black upper-middle and upper classes which persisted through the Redemption and Jim Crow eras are if anything an even more underused niche. Phee’s perspective then paints the world in incredibly evocative tones, and the descriptions of New Charleston’s streets, manors and ballrooms are very well done. Keeping so close to the perspective of someone who grew up in the world but has no great academic interest in its mechanics is also an excellent way to keep exposition to the barest minimum, and keep the world feeling vast and enchanted.
The book is told in close third person narration, but it is very close – Phee’s personality and perspective absolutely suffuse the narration from beginning of the story to end. Which could be absolutely insufferable, but in this case is the book’s strongest quality (and it isn’t especially close). The prose is a very clear pastiche of ‘19th century society writing’, baroque and mannerly to the point of occasional self-parody. Which lends itself incredibly well to elaborately poetic descriptions and turns of phrase and musings about Phee’s desires and sentiments. Stylistically, this is easily one of the best and most memorable novellas I’ve read all year.
The problem is then with substance. A few problems, actually, but more pressingly that there just isn’t much of it. This is a 160 page novella, and on finishing it I feel that at least 80 of them are spent on Phee repeating the same two or three emotional conflicts and screaming ‘this is my arc!’ in the privacy of her own mind while neither arriving at any new conclusions nor actually moving the story forward in any way. Something like three quarters of the plot occurs in the last 40 pages, and I’m quite certain that a sufficiently ruthless editor could have cut the book’s length by half without actually losing any important beats, if not getting it all the way down to short story length. The story would have been stronger for the discipline, and it would have made the beats that already feel underdeveloped or out of nowhere far more forgivable.
That aside, my most passionate and deeply felt issue with this book is – if I’m being honest with myself – a matter of tilting and windmills. This book is shelved and advertised as both horror and Southern Gothic and it’s just...not. Which is just a truly aggravatingly common issue with horror in general these days, but I really can’t even begin to tell what about this story is supposed to be Gothic. There are some gestures in that direction early on, to be sure – the meeting with the funeral directors and then preparing the lynched former slave for burial were both very striking scenes; the initial exploration of Phee’s aunt’s house more or less manages to hit the eerie and ominous notes it’s aiming for – but every answer given and step of progress made reveals them to be aberrations. The strange small town is a metastasized halfway house, where the indigent and desperate recover and prepare for better lives. The dead aunt is beloved by all who knew her, her nosy best friend entirely benevolent and not even a bit resentful for being left out of the funeral organization and the will. The eerily polite and timeless funeral director Phee falls for at first sight turns out to be both a savant and a saint, possibly literally the best man in the world for her. No matter how imposing the traditions to keep and obligations to live up to seem, all Phee needed to do is believe in herself and find the right help and everything goes perfectly. Even the buried scandal which led to the aunt’s exile turned out to be the result of her being framed – and the whole thing is drearily weak tea so far as dark secrets of genteel families go even once you include the fraud. The whole thing just feels positively bloodless, a painful waste of premise and setting alike.
But, stepping out of my own perspective and desires to try and meet the story on its own terms, this is trying to be a story about grief, guilt, and finding the courage to leave your parents behind and find your own way in the world (one almost wonders why it wasn’t written as YA, honestly). I’m admittedly just a very difficult audience for such straightforward coming-of-age narratives these days, and might be unfairly harsh here, but it’s hard to take the time spent dwelling upon the final part of that (and there’s so much of it) especially seriously when the book explicitly states that the only thing which has kept Phee close to home and under her mother’s dominion to that point was her own cowardice. The role conveniently being her aunt’s sole inheritor and now having a ready-made place in a wholly separate community might play in allowing for a clean and pleasant separation at the story’s end goes unremarked upon.
(It’s a very minor point – and a sign that I am far from any publisher’s assumed audience at this point, probably – but I was frankly far more interested in the community politics and feats of management, logistics and accounting involved in this sort of estate settling than in Phee going through the most obvious and oft-repeated character arc in all creation. The struggle between using all of her sudden inheritance to establish and sustain her own independence versus using it to continue all the good works and charity her aunt had dedicated her life to seems far more interesting to dwell upon than ‘is it good to be your own person instead of your mother’s wind-up doll?’, if nothing else.)
The book’s handling of grief and guilt is, at least, more affecting and better executed. The best comparison here is probably Mammoth at the Gates by Nghi Vo – both novellas are most interested in expressing the quiet, empty grief of sorting through a lost parental figure’s things, settling their affairs and coming to terms with the guilt of having grown distant from them. I was a bit cool on Mammoth as well, but between the two I think it accomplishes this far better – if only for having the focus and discipline to actually make the whole book about that. Maybe if Phee had had a bit more to actually feel guilty about, or if her rose-coloured and near mythologized picture of her aunt was actually contested and complicated through the story. As is, there’s just not much there to support the whole narrative around it.
This is a book that I was lukewarm on upon finishing, and sitting down to compose my thoughts about it has honestly worsened my opinion significantly. Royce is clearly a very skilled writer on the sentence-to-sentence level, but the story being told just doesn’t seem worthy of the talent.