âTHE TOOTHBRUSH TO THE BICYCLE TIREâ By Sarah Kay
The first thing that grabbed my attention was the title. I was very confused about what this poem was going to be about due to the comparison between a toothbrush and a bicycle tire. As I continued to explore the rest of the poem, Sarah Kay uses techniques to help get the meaning out. After analyzing the title, the thought of the toothbrush in relationship to the bicycle tire came to me. The people are telling the âtoothbrushâ that the âbicycle tireâ will only bring trouble and negativity.
In the first section Sarah is speaking from the perspective of a toothbrush, which is normally used to CLEAN teeth. I thought this was a very interesting way to start off. In the first sentence when it says âThey told me that I was meant for the cleaner life,â I also approached this as a relationship, thinking that two people are opposites and other people donât want them together. In the second line, âthat you would drag me through the mud,â she is using the tire to explain the friction on the ground. Also saying that the boy on the bike may ride through a mud puddle which can also mean treating the toothbrush, or the girl, dirty. Sarah is very descriptive with her words to create a sense of imagery to connect to that audience.
In the next section, it is shown that Sarah substitutes âgoodâ words for âbadâ words that may be too harsh in a love poem. This technique is used two other times and I am curious as to why she changes the words? People have seen bad words in love poems before so I would want to know her reasoning behind it. In this section, the first sentence âThey said that you would tread all over me,â this is saying that the guy, characterized as the bicycle tire, would walk all over the girl, the toothbrush. He would break her heart and make her feel bad. The next sentence uses a metaphor to say that you can see right through someone. The sentence explains that the boy is speechless and is empty. He would make promises to her but he could never keep them.
Just by analyzing the first two sections, Iâve noticed that Sarah style of poetry is different from a lot of other poets that Iâve researched. When I researched Sarah, someone commented that âthe poems are very hard, but softly written.â I agree with this 100% because in âTHE TOOTHBRUSH TO THE BICYCLE TIRE,â it has a very strong, hardcore meaning but once you identify the meaning of it, it sounds very soft and gentle. Her poetry is found to be very personal and relatable, this poem especially. This poem doesnât have to be interpreted just about a boy and girl relationship, it can also be about friendship. I know that Iâve had some friends that my sister didnât like but I saw past their rough edges and imperfections and just looked at the positive qualities.
One section that confused me a little was the 7th section, âI will leave this porcelain home behind. Iâm used to twice-a-day relationships, but with you Iâll make all the time.â I didnât understand the full meaning of this but I think Sarah is trying to say that the girl is risking her life to love him, and leave her comfort zone. The word âporcelainâ is defined as a white vitrified translucent ceramic. I wonder why she decided to use this word and is there a special meaning behind it?