Johnny

This was a song for a cancelled 3 song EP. I've only recently demo-ed out vocals for it. Please let me know what you think, please be critical

Lyrics:

[Verse 1]

Bruised hands grip brittle bars

A cage of sinew, her body marred.

Hollow eyes leak rancid tears,

The floor is slick with bile and gore,

[Chorus]

MOTHER, MOTHER, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

TURNED THE CRADLE INTO A LOADED GUN

MOTHER, MOTHER, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

A MOTHER’S LOVE, THE THING SHE HATES THE MOST

[Pre-Verse]

Claimed the child knew what she was doing

Claimed she’s the reason why he left

Tempted him and made him weak never once blamed man for what did

Said she was a whore at a young age

[Verse 2]

Skin so tight, it splits, it screams

A banquet of bones, STARVATION’S DREAMS

The air is thick with rot and lies

Her child’s corpse, a MEAL FOR FLIES.

[Chorus]

MOTHER, MOTHER, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE

TURNED THE CRADLE INTO A LOADED GUN.

MOTHER, MOTHER, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

A MOTHER’S LOVE, THE THING SHE HATES THE MOST.

[Bridge]

Rot in the air, bile on the floor