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okay. look. can we put aside the "what does fyora even do" "what has fyora done right" jokes for five minutes.
can we get fucking real here. i don't care about the "we're making a constitutional faerie council democracy luxinia. we're doing the wreck it ralph ending luxinia it'll be great." line in this context. that's fine, great, whatever. but king altador (with a similar level of influence outside of his own city and whose dealings with tdf also bled out into the rest of neopia repeatedly) is fine? king roo is fine? lord darigan AND king skarl (who kinda sucks) who both got to keep being king after everything that happened in the war of meridell are fine? king kelpbeard (whose city was also destroyed and kinda sucked) is fine? king hagan is fine? king jazan is fine? shenkuu's emperor is fine? nah this one woman just sucked so bad tbh she was such a loser failwoman so we had to get rid of her entire all-female monarchy line lol.
besides queen amira this was the ONLY other monarchy position, or position of structural power in general, held solely by a woman, on this goddamn website and it was the ONLY all-female position! even the lands with non-monarchy leaders have male mayors or otherwise (neopia central, moltara, kiko lake, krawk island, whatever's happening on kreludor)! if fyora really fucked up that much worse than every king who fucked up, fine, have her step down and choose a successor, that's fine. but addressing the element of "faerieland has a weird level of influence in inter-land affairs" by getting rid of the only all-female monarchy and leaving all the shitty dudes in their places sucks! it looks shitty! and yes obviously i don't actually LIKE monarchies, and yes, in reality an all-female monarchy wouldn't suddenly make a monarchy Good, and sometimes writing them out works, but we are writing fantasy world with approximately twenty other Good Fantasy Monarchies^tm happening concurrently, all coincidentally led by men, and did you think this through how this would look at all!
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#you know what year you do have a point #also like. look I don't love Nyx I think she's a boring character #but at some ponts the criticism sounded like that 'his tragic backstory' vs 'her obnoxious sob story' meme #and she was also... pretty damn sidelined by Ozzy's arc. even though she was (supposedly) the main freaking character. #even in an almost all-female main cast they managed to make The Guy's Backstory the big emotional focal point. like come on now
Not a fan of the Baelia / Iridesia thing tbh but Iâm also kinda just done with Neo as a whole rn. Plot completely killed interest in the site for me ngl đ Iâm sure Iâll be back I always end up returning lmao but manâŠ

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This graphic on the default kau neopets petpage makes me want to cry no wayâŠâŠEars perk up with the laughter of children T_T
Big Brother Bruno! With his sister Sofie(left) and after his curse with Gilly (right
Kacheek in The Haunted Woods Pocket Neopet
Some more Neopets art from the backlog :)
Honestly Iâve seen some people theorizing and I would not be mad if TVW ends up being a Faerie Fragments onsite tie-in (I mean it obviously already kinda is with Luxinia being there) and they add âNew Faerielandâ to the map of Neopia as a new location that plays into the nostalgia players have for Faerieland when it was in the sky. Altador came about the exact same way back in the day (it was a Darkest Faerie tie-in; TDF is obviously a better game by arguably any metric than FF but the precedent is there and itâs a largely inoffensive thing to do I think. if anything despite how much I love TDF it being a game you had to purchase whereas FF being free makes this a more widely accessible crossover between the two medias).

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anyone else remember the Animal Crossing x Neopets collab back in the days?
non crt version below the cut
Having to solve a 200 piece puzzle just to advance the plotâs story is kind of insane lmao but honestly I donât hate it.
Anyway I know ultimately itâs not that serious. I admittedly just like talking about the creative process since I am a creator myself & itâs interesting to see storytelling crash and burn the way TVW has so Iâm largely just thinking out loud for my own selfish benefit when I talk about this stuff lol. âWhy is this not workingâ is a meaningful conversation for me to have with myself :-)
neopets team i understand where you're coming from but with the scale of gameplay and design you've actually ended up making here i would not have admitted to any of these if you put a gun to my head
Okay I know this is largely just me being a hater but I keep thinking about this particular question/answer from Jellyneoâs interview with TNT about The Void Within. Admittedly as a writer myself I just find it fascinating. The Void Withinâs story is pretty unbearably bad imo, and I know Iâm far from the only person to think this. I have seen little to no praise for literally any aspect of it at all. Listing THIS MANY inspirations, especially such⊠ambitious? ones, for something that has amounted to a handful of characters with nearly 0 individual characterization sitting around in various rooms and talking about their feelings followed by a couple of mundane puzzles or action sequences is really fascinating to me. I think it just really speaks to a really amateur writing process. Like, really amateur.
Is it possible to have âtwo manyâ influences on a work of art? Not⊠necessarily. A very good artist can draw from a shitload of sources and combine a bunch of things that inspire them into something new. But I also think that most good artists⊠donât? At least itâs a very particular writing style that would take a lot of intentionality to pull off. I mean, there is something to be said in restraint, right. Especially because part of the creative process is inevitably going to involve taking all those inspirations and elevating them, or otherwise incorporating them into your own ideas as well. As it stands The Void Within is literally not long enough or complex enough or well made enough on any level to adequately take inspiration from (deep breath) Gravity Falls Over the Garden Wall Avatar: The Last Airbender J.R.R. Tolkien Terry Pratchett Lovecraft Guillermo del Toro Horizon Zero Dawn Slay the Princess God of War Ragnarok Pokemon.
Within the context of what The Void Within actually amounts to that is a meaningless list. And I think it speaks to a harsher truth about TVWâs writing, which is that it is so devoid of original thought or a personality of its own. You can tell me that this story takes inspiration from a dozen different IPs but nobody can articulate with confidence a meaningful major character trait or conflict for a single one of the protagonists. Itâd be hard to even articulate a single meaningful story beat. And itâs been going on since 2023. Iâm also kind of fascinated by the fact that I donât think any of the above IPs they claim to take reference from really⊠is reflected by TVW, anyway? And like, itâs fine to take inspiration from eclectic sources OF COURSE, but where is absolutely any of this within the story we actually got? Do we really need to say that a Neopets story (which has been a largely high fantasy fictional setting with established lore since its advent in the late 90s) needed to be inspired by TolkienâŠ? Like, youâd think that something more like My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (high fantasy with tech-as-needed, fantasy animal protagonists, predominantly female-led cast, balances external conflict and action/adventure elements with social/emotional interpersonal conflict⊠I mean My Little Pony: The Movie feels like pretty much exactly like what TVW is going for) or Steven Universe (pretty similar, but also includes a more explicit science-fantasy aspect with things like dark magical corruption / G-rated cosmic horror l that think really mirrors some parts of TVW) would be more apt than like. God of War Ragnarok LOL.
Anyway. Admittedly more than anything like I said I just kinda found this fascinating as a writer myself. Thinking about how to balance inspiration from preexisting art and media with original story is just a genuinely interesting topic without any easy answer but surely this is an example of how not to do it. I mean obviously itâs context-dependent. Venture Bros is one of my favorite shows of all time and it takes inspiration from a million different IPs but itâs also an episodic parody / comedy show with 80 episodes. But I think what interests me in particular about this list really is just the way it feels within the context of what The Void Within has actually presented so ridiculously hollow. You can name so many pieces of media that inspire you but the final product reflects pretty much none of them at all. It lacks substance. It doesnât really feel like there is anyone on the team who cares for Nyx As A Person, or otherwise there isnât anyone on the team who is capable enough as a writer to communicate it. Itâs just a scattered collage of loosely-connected IPs jumbled together. Vague concepts without a real through line.

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I donât want to hear anything about The Void Within again I am so sick of that ugly blue Aisha and her baby Yoda ass Faellie