Apprl 141

Too busy top and bottom. If the purple “petticoat” could be eliminated, the design might give a different feel.

The whole design looks like Halloween costume.   

The feather at front of the body is distracting because it’s a straight line while the other feathers are curved.   

Too many colors used. I would edit belt color and socks color.

Looks like he’s wearing a tent. I would edit either around the sleeve or bottom of the jacket.

Over designed around the shoulder. Needs some editing at the shoulder and pants.

Although there are many pockets all over the place, I still think that this design works because of the colors and the placement of the pockets.

Too much to look at. Personally don’t like the hip pack and the sandals with this design.

Too bulky, needs some silhouette edits.

Although the design is quite complex, the neutral colors and shorts keep the whole look simple.

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