At the end of the day, I donāt rlly care if you have a fiction Kin, but like. Are you sure THATS who your fiction kin is?
To elaborate, I saw someone fiction kin Kokichi Ouma. While I was watching that i genuinely wondered āwhy the fuck would you chose this guyā because he is an objectively bad person. And i genuinely have no idea how a person can connect to EVERY ASPECT of his life.
I say heās a bad person because he made an elaborate scheme to āend the killing gameā that involved him making everyone hate him and stooping to lows that almost made him the culprit. He literally USED Gonta as a weapon, and visibly showed no remorse.
And while Iām a believer of the āa lot of the hurtful things he said were lies to make people hate him and he genuinely had good intentionsā, one, even if it was out of good intentions the shit he said and did was like actually making shit harder and could have killed people (aka anytime he made up lies in the trials) and 2, canonically within the game we donāt know that. If we look at the game and analyze what he says, we canāt tell if what he says are lies to make people believe something, or truths to make people believe something.
The whole point of his character is that we donāt know where the lies end and the truths begin. And when looking at how the game played out, he didnāt need to do any of that. He overthought the killing game and tried to do things alone which led to more harm then good.
And then looking at how his whole character is, if someone were to tell me āmy fiction kin is Kokichi Ouma!ā (Or anyone of the same profile as Kokichi Ouma) I would genuinely wonder if youāre okay or if youāre just trying to be different and edgy.
This is coming from a big fan of this character btw heās been my fav since 2022, I just accept how annoying and shitty he is.
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High-key Iām tired of seeing people put other characters down in the tumblr sexy-man voting instead of like actually giving us reason to for a character.
Like, give me a good reason to vote for Grace! Donāt give me distasteful reason to NOT vote for Tenna or Senshi.
I find propaganda that gives reasons to vote for someone much more enjoyable and silly then the ones that make fun of or insult a character to elevate the other.
I also wanna point out that thereās been a trend for the Deltarune not-secret bosses
DELTARUNE CHAPTER 5 SPOILER
So king and Queen are forced to stay in your castle town, Tenna can also be there but he doesnāt have to be.
For chapter 4 and 5 it seems that you donāt get to keep anyone important from those chapters, they all just die or are deemed mindless or fragile.
My prediction is that Tenna might be the last boss you get to keep, and that chapters 6+7 are going to have less and less recruits.ļæ¼
I dunno, it might mean that they will play a more important role at the end of the game, Ć laāif you recruited everyone you could they will help you when it matters mostā kind of way.
I saw a post that essentially said that if Gerson was Susieās mentor why are we so mad that Flowery is Ralseis mentor, and that we canāt be mad that they are not the same.
I agree that characters that spark change within different characters (in this case Susie and Ralsei who are VERY different characters) are not necessarily going to look the same or have the same approach on how to advance someoneās character, but in the case of Gerson and Flowery itās very differentā¦
Gerson acted ignorant of what was happening in the dark worlds and wanted Susie to find answers for herself. Flowery acted as if he was higher than Ralsei and was actively preventing the Fun Gang from getting all the information needed.
Gerson never built Susie up, but laid the foundation for her to find her own strength. Flowery actively tried to build Ralsei down to try to make Ralsei stand his ground.
Gerson did it because he thought that Susie had strength within her but needed some help with getting it out. Flowery did it because Of his way of thinking, that darkners have their own dreams and should follow them even if itās against the prophecy. He also did it because if he convinced Ralsei to go against the prophecy his dark world wouldnāt have to disappear and he and Asgore would be able to live happily.
Essentially, Gerson is a mentor who wanted to guide Susie to find her own strength because he knew that she wanted to become stronger. Flowery wanted Ralsei to find his own strength because Flowery found it and is much happier, also because it was convenient in the moment.
They both help advance character growth, but Flowery is not a āgood mentorā when along side Gerson, as his actions had manipulative intent rather than Gersonās.
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Itās okay. I had a really fun time playing, the gimmicks were really fun and fresh and new and exciting (if a bit overwhelming at times), I liked most of the new characters and i enjoyed the character development.
BUTā¦
I think this is the worse chapter yet.
To start off, I think Susie and Noelleās character arcs kinda went really fast. Itās been only 3 days for them and while Noelle was crushing on Susie for a long time, Susie never really thought of her until chapter 2 and literally didnāt mention her in chapter 3 at all. I really like the ship, but I feel like they rushed Susieās character just so that they could have a dramatic lovers moment. It was nice, but felt really rushed on Susieās part. Making her constantly talk about Noelle the whole chapter also just made things feel like they were going very fast with her character development.
Next, Flowery. I enjoy his character! I think him wanting to defy the prophecy by allowing his world to live while him also wanting to make Asgore happy very interesting. Unfortunately, they really wanted to reheat Tennaās nachos. Flowery is very surface level when it comes to personality and general trates. It feels like they saw how popular Tenna was and wanted more of that hype, but instead they made a character who is exactly who he is presented as. Flowery is presented as a hot, charming, and very powerful character who can even hold his own against the knight, someone who has repeatedly been shown to be extremely powerful. And thatās what he is. Nothing more or less.
Comparing him to other bosses, King was shown as a massive threat but was shown to have only been able to get into that position by having the knight remove anyone who matched his power and by fear-mongering the kingdom. Queen was presented as a extremely intelligent women who could predict your every move, and who has little to no care about others, but as the chapter went on you saw that she actually can be a bit gullible and is not as intelligent and all knowing as she says she is due to the WiFi outage, sheās also shown to care deeply about Noelle and surpassed that surface level expectation of just āA robotā. Tenna was presented to be a hot shot game announcer who runs a studio and has everything under control, when progressing through the chapter you can see that heās actually not flawless and is very out of date, suffering from attachment issues, and has little to no respect from his employees due to him misstreating them.
Flowery has none of that, he was presented as something and stayed like that for almost the whole time. The punchline is that he is perfect, but itās not interesting and itās more annoying than anything else.
Lastly, the actual plot. Theres not much of it in this chapter other than what we already got, Asgore did something to Dess, the knight, the prophecy. While we got the bunker code, that was just set up for things to move along while things have been very still from chapter 3 and on. This is chapter 5 out of 7 and with the amount of loose threads there are itās a bit confusing to keep track of everything. The plots at a stand still but side information is moving ahead, we know essentially nothing about Susieās and Ralsaiās, past, and we still donāt know whatās happening with Kris as that one tip bit we got was played off as a joke. The plot leaves a lot to be desired and I canāt really see the end of it happening in two chapters with all loose ends tied together.
All in all, itās a good chapter and I had so much fun playing it and there are so many amazing moments, itās just not as strong when it comes to story and character writing compared to the others.
Fan children are only good when itās in character.
Iām so fucking tired of seeing fan children that are 1, just your own self insert but you happen to be the child of the people they ship.
2, an overpowered kid that is someoneās OC that happens to be the child of the people they ship and has both of their parents respective skills but 10x better.
3, thatās just an OC that happens to be the child of the people they ship but you wouldnāt know that unless itās stated with OOC dialogue
Like, sometimes fan kids are okay but only when it makes sense and works within the story youāre trying to tell. No one wants to read about some fuck ass baby who is super powerful and cool and strong or whatever.
I loved the idea for that show, I genuinely just think it needed maybe another writer, more EPS to flush out the characters, or longer EPS to flush out the characters.
I feel like its biggest flaw is character writing and world building.
Because I feel like we donāt really get to see N being more then Uziās tag-along, thus I feel like them getting together and N also getting more time to show off other sides of his character other than being a reformed murder drone were pushed aside to make Uzi more interesting.
(Uzi doesnāt need to be interesting when she has so much going on, and I know they played her having family issues and being the most powerful robot ever as a ongoing joke but like nothing needed to change about that if we made others more interesting as well.)
Looking at V and J, they also get pushed aside and reduced to smaller roles and then just randomly given character development. Thad and Lizzy could have been interesting normal drone characters but we never get to see them outside of jokes. I donāt even know what the fuck was going one with Doll.
I just wish we got to see more of that show instead of them having to cram in a lot of development in a short running season.
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As soon as we got to EP 2 I knew this wasnāt gonna end well. I watched both EPS 1 and 2 in the same day for the first time because I saw people online saying how cool and funny Jax was and how if you were a fan of Kokichi Ouma you would be a fan of him.
When I watched EP 1 I thought he was pretty funny, but as soon as I saw EP 2 I knew something was off. He was so annoying to the point where it was just cruel, and I got the feeling that it was only gonna get worse from there.
How horrible of a writer do you need to be to already fuck up a show by EP 2? Like I thought it was gonna be another case of Murder Drones where it had a good idea but it needed better writing and more EPS to be executed in a way thatās fully understandable, and in a way yeah it did end up like that.
BUT AT LEAST MURDER DRONES DIDNT LOOSE THE PLOT.
Genuinely give me a reason why the hell I would care about Jax. Like, for Kokichi it makes sense why you should care for him because it TIES INTO THE PLOT and even if you hate him YOU DONT HAVE TO TALK TO HIM AND HES NOT FORCED DOWN YOUR THROAT.
Apparently Pomni and Ragetha are best buddies but we didnāt get to see any of that because goosworx forced us to watch Jax. Kinger gets pushed to the side and highkey got reduced to a guy who misses his wife because we were too busy looking at Jax. Zooble and Gangle? Who even are they? Idfk I was too busy skipping past every part that Jax was in.
And whatās worse is that he IS a complex character that you donāt really see in media, but it seems that the idea of Jax was too complex for goosworx to fathom, so complex that after all that build up with him he died OFFSCREEN and no one fucking cared.
If you have a fan ship that only works with the original love interest or commonly shipped person having to change character completely and act differently from the original counterpart then maybe thatās not a good ship.
Same thing goes Vice Versa, if you have to change a character to make the ship work then maybe itās not a good ship.