the eastern island

Byou

Japanese Text: 

夢見の王スイギョウの命令で、夢見に必要な「夢見の目玉」を手に入れるため、生命の国ミンケンへ向かう使命がある。ネジ回しを持って生まれる。

好きなもの：ビョウは木陰に隠れて擬態プレイするのが好き、彼の体は葉っばで飾られていて、その中に潜り込んでミノ虫状態になるのも好きだ。

嫌いなもの：夢見の国の生物にはない葉飾りの体をしているので、仲間からよくいじめられる

Original Translation:

Under the orders of Sui-gyou (King of Mon-chien), Byou's mission is to head towards Ming-ken (Land of Life). There he must collect the Eyeball of Dreaming. Born with a wrench.

Likes: Since his body is decorated with leaves, he loves to camouflage in the shade of trees.

Dislikes: Receives frequent bullying from his fellow comrades because no other creature in the Land of Dreaming possesses leaves.

My Translation:

By order of Sui-gyou, the King of Dreaming, Byou's mission is to go to The Land of Life, Ming-ken, to obtain the "Eyeball of Dreaming" which is necessary to see dreams. Born with a wrench.

Likes: Byou likes to play by camouflaging and hiding in the shade of trees, disguising himself as a bagworm by concealing himself with the leaves that are decorated on his body.

Dislikes: He is often bullied by his peers because of his leafy body, which is unlike any other creature in the Land of Dreaming.

Notes:

The original translation isn’t too bad, just missing a bit of details. Maybe to make sure the text fit onto the page? Fun fact,  ネジ回し can also mean “screwdriver” but keeping it as “wrench” makes more sense when you see what the tool actually looks like:

Tou

Japanese Text:

生命の樹の管理者として、新しく生まれた生命を登録するのが使命。生命の登録のためには、時間の国シチェンへ行かなければならない。

好きなもの：　器械をいじるのが好き。だから彼の指はそのために細くて長く、細かなものが見やすいよう精度のいい眼鏡をかけている。

嫌いなもの：体の真ん中に穴のあいた自分の体がイヤで仕方がない。首もひょろひょろしててみにくい。容姿コンプレックスがあるのだ。

Original Translation: 

Guardian of the Tree of Life, Tou's mission is to register new life. In order to register life, he must travel to Shi-chieng (Land of Time).

Likes: Tou's fetish is mechanical apparatus. His fingers are long and thin. He also wears accurate eye glasses.

Dislikes: Cannot bear his very own physique. An aerodynamic body (a hole right in the middle of the body) with a long and winding neck are the subjects of his inferiority complex.

My Translation:

As the administrator of the Tree of Life, Tou's mission is to register newly born lives. To register lives, he must go to Shi-chieng, the Land of Time.

Likes: Loves to play around with mechanical instruments. His fingers are long and slender for this purpose, and he wears precision glasses that make it easy to see the smallest of details.

Dislikes: With a gaping hole in the middle of it, Tou can't help but hate his own body. His spindly neck also adds to his unattractiveness. This is why he has an appearance complex. 

Notes:

I changed “guardian” to “administrator” to be more accurate to the original text, and it fits more with his nerdy character. I’m not sure why they chose the word “fetish” in the original but it definitely gives off the wrong idea, so I changed that too. I also fixed some errors in the last section (where did “aerodynamic body” come from I wonder). 

Sha

Japanese Text:

欲望の国の王キンギョウに命じられて、東脳世界に隠された４つの楽器を集めることが使命。シャだけにしか、それらの楽器を奏でることはできない。

好きなもの：音楽が大好きなシャは、どんな楽器でも演奏できる。欲望の国ユイワンにある自分の楽器の部屋にいるときが一番落ちつく。

嫌いなもの：音楽のない世界というものが恐ろしい。ついでにいうと、欲望の王は音痴なくせに唄うのが好きなので、チョット許せないと思ってる。

Original Translation:

Under the orders of King-gyou (King of Yui-wang), Sha's mission is to collect all four musical instruments of the Tong-Nou World. Sha is the chosen one. Only he can play the instruments.

Likes: Loves music and can play any instrument. Winds up in his music room located within Yui-wang (Land of Desire).

Dislikes: Fears a world without music. Next to that, he cannot approve of tone-deaf King-gyou's singing.

My Translation: 

By order of King-Gyou, King of the Land of Desire, Sha's mission is to find and gather the 4 hidden musical instruments of the Tong-Nou world. Only Sha can do this, as they are the only one who can play the instruments.

Likes: Sha loves music, and can play any instrument. They feel most at ease when they are in their instrument room in Yui-wang, the Land of Desire.

Dislikes: The idea of a world without music frightens them. Besides that, the King of the Land of Desire likes to sing even though he is tone-deaf, which Sha finds a bit intolerable.

Notes:

For Byou and Tou, the word 彼 was used which means “he” but for Sha I used “they” pronouns because there weren’t any words used to indicate gender. I wish English didn’t have to rely on pronouns so much :/