Hello, may I have a critic about my gemsonas please :) ? Here are the desc. : Amegreen (representing myself) is the middle gem, Alexandrite is on the left and Celestite on the right :
Name : Amegreen
Nickname : Amey, Greeny
Pronouns : He/Him
Size : same as Lapis Lazuli
Weapon : ???
Power : ???
Biography : Originally a Quartz made for Pink Diamond, he pop out completly defective, without the ability to summon his weapon. The Diamond where supposed to shattered him but he cried in front of them to not shatter him because he’ll try to be useful. The diamonds, by feeling pity for him, give him a chance, but he failed many times, until a day where he was accidentally in a ship taked by a Rose Quartz. He finally ended up in the Crystal Gems camp, even if it’s was by mistakes. After the war, Amegreen decided to live with Rose Quartz and others gems protected by her called Agate, Alexandrite and Celestite
Description : Since the day he pop out, many unlucky adventures happened to him, making him feel like he was useless and even thinking that he didn’t deserved to live, and if Rose Quartz, Agate, Alexandrite an Celestite wasn’t here to cheer him up, he’ll be probably dead by commiting a suicide.
Name : Alexandrite
Nickname : Alex, Alexy, Xandry
Pronouns : He/Him
Size : same as Jasper
Weapon : Whip
Power : Luminokinesis
Biography : While it is pretty unknow what was his role on homeworld, it is know that he was rejected by everyone due to his gem. He joined the Crystal Gems just before the war started and now live on Earth with Rose Quartz, Amegreen, Agate and Celestite.
Description : She recomfort any gem from sadness and give them once again the joy of living.
Name : Celestite
Nickname : Celest, Celly, Celya
Pronouns : Her/She
Size : taller than Peridot
Weapon : Scepter/Spear
Power : Aerokinesis/Cryokinesis
Biography : Strong gem used as assassin in the sold of Blue Diamond, her mission was to shatter a rebelled fusion gem, but couldn’t do it because she feeled compassion for them. In reason of ths failure, she supposed to be shattered because everyone thought she was with the fusion, so she decided to escape with Rose Quartz and fight alongside with her as a member of the Crystal Gems. She now live with her, Amegreen, Alexandrite and Agate.
Description : Expend creativity and reduce stress by giving relaxation. She is a good speaker too.
Amegreen : What exact gem are they? I usually try to keep my gems restricted to existing gems but trade names are fine (green amethyst being, in realist, prasiolite but I can understand Amegreen.
I’m not sure how it would work out that he would be for Pink Diamond but as we don’t know much about her, it’s plausible.
Alexandrite : Just by glancing, it seems you haven’t fleshed out Alexandrite or Moonstone as much as Amegreen. I understand that you’ve based him off yourself but once you’ve set a bar, try to keep around the same area with your other characters. I’m not saying this as a review but as a fellow character creator.
Why was he rejected due to his gem? Was it his unknown job or was it just because an Alexandrite or something eles? That line is very ambiguous.
Celestite : If she failed a mission, how was she able to face the public? I can see that she could have been publicly shamed but I would expand this part.