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The Great Hall was filled with whispers that morning. Spoons clattered against plates, owls fluttered about, leaving letters on the tables, and amid all that noise, Marlene felt as if every word were directed at her. “Did you see the way Black was looking at her?” “I bet they won’t last a month.” “She’s too serious for him.” Marlene looked down at her toast, unable to enjoy it. Every comment felt like a malicious spell piercing her skin. Next to her, Dorcas tried to distract her with jokes, but Marlene could barely manage a smile. When Sirius walked in, the murmuring turned into laughter and knowing glances. He walked with that insolent confidence, greeting half the world, as if he didn’t care about a thing. But when he saw her, his expression changed: he set aside his arrogance and walked straight over to her. “Good morning, Marls,” he said, with a smile that seemed to want to erase all the others. She looked at him, uncertain. “People say things… all the time.” Sirius raised an eyebrow, pouring himself coffee as if nothing were wrong. “And since when do you care what they say?” “Since it affects me,” she replied in a low voice. He set the cup down on the table and leaned toward her, completely ignoring the curious stares. “What exactly are they saying?”
La gente hace comentarios: que soy ingenua. Que solo estás jugando conmigo. Que solo soy un amor pasajero en tu historia. Sirius soltó una breve risa, pero no fue burlona, sino más bien incrédula. "¿Un amor pasajero? Marlene, si supieran lo que significas para mí, se quedarían sin palabras". Bajó la mirada, sintiendo el peso de las voces a su alrededor. "No quiero que piensen que solo soy un adorno en tu vida". Él le tomó la mano por debajo de la mesa, ocultando el gesto a los demás. "No eres un adorno. Eres la razón por la que me despierto cada día en este castillo sin volverme loca". El murmullo continuó, pero Marlene apenas lo oyó. Sirius la miró con esa intensidad que siempre lograba desarmarla. "A veces siento que no encajo en tu mundo", confesó. "Que soy demasiado normal". Sirius negó con la cabeza, acercándose aún más. “Lo normal sería alguien que me dejara caer en mis propios abismos. Tú eres quien me detiene. Quien me recuerda que hay algo más allá de las bromas y las travesuras.”
She sighed, resting her forehead against her hand. “But those comments…” He interrupted her gently: “Those comments are hurtful, poisonous words spoken by envious people to damage what we have, Marls.” The Great Dining Hall was still filled with voices, but in that moment, for Marlene, everything boiled down to him. Sirius gently stroked her hand, as if every movement were a promise. “Marlene, look at me,” he said at last. She lifted her head, and he held her gaze firmly. “You’re not a rumor. You’re not a fling. You’re my story. The only one I want to spend my life with.” She smiled, a small smile, like someone who’s starting to believe. “What if they say something else tomorrow?” “Then tomorrow I’ll remind you of the same thing all over again. Over and over, until there’s no doubt left.” The laughter and whispers faded from her mind. The castle could keep talking, but none of that mattered. Sirius leaned down and kissed her forehead, with a tenderness that dispelled any doubt. “Don’t worry, love,” he whispered. “The only thing that matters is what we feel. The rest… is just air.” And she, for the first time in days, took a deep breath, as if she could finally let go of the weight of all those outside voices. Because in the end, the only thing that was real was him, and the certainty that together they could survive any problem.



















