Ooookay... so I keep seeing these A/B/O type stories in my facebook feed and decided to give one a try. I had to stop half way through, not only because of grammatical errors (because, come on, we all start somewhere) but because it seemed that even the author was having trouble remembering who their own characters were and what they were meant to do.
I get it. I do. I’ve stopped so many stories and started up again, only to confuse myself and have to go back and read it— hash it out, look for inspiring music to really build the characters and backgrounds again... so I’m not knocking this person at all. In fact, I’m thanking them. If it weren’t for them, I probably wouldn’t have had the nerve to start my own original A/B/O.
Albeit my cover is totally unclear, and I could totally use help with that given my time constraints, and my title is suuuuper simple and to the point, I’ve never been so pleased with a work that wasn’t fanfiction.
To all of you that have inspired me to be more in the writing world, you know who you are, and thank you. You truly are my favorite people.
Without further ado, I give you:
Sylvia Tana Silverwind's parents, Jordan and Kristoph take it upon themselves to find an antidote for easing heat cycles and decide to test
The first chapter is up. The second is scheduled for laaater this evening like closer to 12am EST because I’m silly and posted the first one that late.
The third is being worked on and while most of the first two chapters are in he/she mode, the book will turn to first person while the main character battles through her own adventure.
Like I said, it is A/B/O and goes through some intense historical themes in an alternate universe. A few things to mention are the usage of experimental medicine to slow heats, the effect of not finding their true mate before the heat happens, changes in important historical characters, sexual content for power, mild mentions to genocide all to build up the background of what the main character, Vivian will have to face to try to make things right.
I’m hoping to move through this as I’ve found the happy medium of exhausting my kids outside and working through mealtimes to get adequate time to write at night. Here’s to hoping that stays true through the summer!
@my-jedi-life my awesome friend. Would you do me the honor of beta checking my filth going forward? I would be honored if you would.
