I reckon you're the only person I've seen who actually gives an honest and rather insightful review of a blog without asking for followers or ad clicks. I could use some brutal criticism for mine. Also, here's an internet cookie for being brilliant:
In Real Life, I'm something of a writer. Â An unpublished writer (except for a really, really offensive joke in a joke book once), but I've written for money. Â Mostly I write poetry and short stories and things. Â An honest critique?Â
You repost too many other writers works, instead of your own. Â I saw some writing on there that hasn't been reblogged, and I assume it's your own work. Â Dude, you need to find your voice. Â You're actually good at writing. Â Really, you are, but your voice is pretty much "I need someone to love". Â That's not what life is about. Â Love is brilliant. Â Love gives us many things, but if you're just focusing on looking for love, on that person out there that is your future, you're not focusing on who you are. Â Write from your stomach, not your heart. Â Love will salt your work, but don't let salt be the curry sauce, you know?
You said "Teach me how to swim". Â Learn how to swim, and then find someone to swim with. Â That's way more fun.Â
In summary then; Good writer, still hasn't reached down and vomited the words out. Â Gimme some soul. Â
Worth a follow, though. Â The topless selfies are a bit weird, mixed with the general theme of your blog.Â
Then sir, life isn't just about 'the one', and you're reblogging other people's needy requests for love. Â Figure out who you are. Â That's what life is about. Â Someone will come along and want to share that.Â
That's all the advice and critique I can give.Â