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Everyone watch closely I am about to write an entire novel CD-Orchard style
Okay I finished it.

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Why'd the spacing change?
"I see your pointing out the surface level things, is this because her writing is functional or good?"
Also the background color did you switch or reformat it afterwards to see a more realistic page count?
"Yes but how is the actual writing Silly?"
IT ISN'T VERY GOOD OKAY!
More at 11
Thought you would like to know that Lily thinks that there's no difference between Princess Mononoke, Demon slayer, and Inuyasha.
Thats odd, because of the white haaaaiiir no that wouldn't make sense *quickly checks something* OH its because they're all set in ye olde japan & theres a boar that talks! Yeah basically same series. /j
Help the entire dialogue is her just lecturing the audience that she doesn’t have an incest fetish guys. It’s everyone else that is being weird about it. overall this reads like shit and not a good way to convey a message in a story. Even if the message wasn’t her weirdo fetish
Allow me to be perfectly transparent. Exposition isn't always a bad thing. There are things that need it. Scene setting for a series with many proper nouns for instance, you can make an operatic intro and explain the gist, i have never been against a star wars text crawl.
But not only is the concept of "partners" just not that complex to get across where it couldn't be just shown in a different interaction. With a singular third person.
Or just make the lingo really hyper specifc, its the far flung future after all maybe have Partner no longer be a singular word instead its always hyphened
"Oh so who are you with where are they?"
"My partner-sister they are back on the ship"
^thats not good writing thats an example entirely for functionality to get my point across
Now I'm just imagining PHM with how Rocky talks lol
The fact she feels she needs to get it out of the way so fast is putting the entire trailer before the horse.
The fact that she made a character obsessed with the prehistory of her setting as a way to basically explain how things currently are that could actually be quite clever. Maybe have her use old lingo or old sayings (modern sayings even) and everyone just looks at her like shes a fuckin space cadet (derogatory)
Just show them doing whatever talking about whatever establishing skills they might have important plot beats like idk how her setting works but presumably since its a road trip that they need to plot their astro-journey very carefully so one can be obsessing about how their ship is a beater or maybe start off at a space truck stop
If you can help it avoid ^ "As you, [character name optional] i have done/will be doing"
Apparently they are making a remake of BG2
Hope thats good

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Lily writing dialog reminds me of how I wrote dialog as a socially awkward 15 year old. Now I’m not saying my writing now is great but I also don’t regularly practice and I’m not trying to come off as more intellectual than I actually am. Also while the cringey dialog would not be a huge issue on its own, knowing it’s Lily who’s writing it and what the subject matter is about, it does seem concerning that the concept of certain types of affection being reserved for specific people being viewed as odd is definitely not lost on me. I think the only credit I can give Lily is that at least it’s not AI generated but that’s about it.
I have an issue with that sure. Like what a seent in that post wasn't to alarm ringing on its own 2 fully grown siblings talking isn't the death knell I find the dancing around more bizarre
Its really weird that her short bit fron NaviAvataR about braiding hair read like a 3 page comic sttip from the news paper. Actually lets I go with Dobson comic it read likea Dobson comic, I have to much respect for Jim Davis
Not the same person but I would love to hear how you'd rewrite expository scenes in various media, not just the RWBY example
Oh idfk how I'd save RWBY I would have to actually like watch it learn what info needed to be conveyed, remembering an Hbomberguy vid isn't a good set up
Ya, just, silly person you, ya needa give a piece of work! :D
I saw Lily's playersexual video and I can't believe she's saying that the player having more than a couple choices in a game is less fun, and that all the stuff she refuses to engage with in games shouldn't be in games in the first place.
I actually tend to agree with the titles implication.
I don't like that i can romance everyone as anything in games like BG3, like I enjoy when fictional characters are written with preferences if it is to come up.
I think it woulda been more interesting for a character to be able to get what amounts as the bestest friends ending instead of a romance if they weren't the preference for romance, it would be impacting and say something about how instead of romantic love blooming in a crisis a lasting unshakeable brotherhood/sisterhood/friendhood blooms.
Idk what you mean specifically. By "things she refuses to engage with" but if you mean how she just... didn't want to engage with base game features like teh "Examine" button said it was "too easy" while playing on easy with mods, then yes
It's starting to feel like CD has a kink specifically for having siblings act very touchy-feely with each other and then have the characters laugh at the insinuation that they're romantically involved
It's so weird. The entire story of Into the Void could have gone without that exchange
It would strengthen the point that all partnerships in this society are equal if the siblings were never mistaken for spouses, but I guess that wouldn't let CD wag her finger at these misunderstandings
Its just comically explanatory
Its better than explaining that with omniscient narration but only a step up from a...
Have you ever... seen RWBY? No?
Have you ever seen the Hbomberguy video about RWBY... WELL IN IT!
In it he shows an example of dialogue between 2 Faunes (idfk how to spell it) where one explains to the other that they are infact an opressed people
If you really wanna know how IIIIII would do it (ego ego) you can ask but yeah its clunky and exposity in a mundanely boring way
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Okay so.
There's nothing functionally wrong with this.
But like. Has CD ever talked, I don't mean text through discord or ask her audience.
Has CD ever like, spoken to another human being in real life... kinda wanna just leave it like that... that had a healthy and functional family life?
Also the way, this reads, it seems like every human just became aromantic, which is fine. Actually NO waitwaitwait I know exactly what this reads:
It reads exactly like this!
With how literal Lily can be, she probably does mean specifically pirate anime
Well I could look up pirate anime but that'd be disingenuous, I've at least seent all them swashbucklin animes
Fena: Pirate Princess, Black Lagoon, Jojo's part 3, Hunter x Hunter eh... kinda, Michiko & Hatchin, Jojos Part 8, Trigun Stampede, Space Dandy, Coyote Ragtime, Cannon Busters, Desert Punk, Cowboys Bebop, Castlevania (a little), Last Exil, Eureka Seven
Unless you mean like specifically pirate shows in which case only the first 2 work
Isn't just ironic that C.Diddy simps for elves yet she hates on what makes the fantasy genre fun for so many people?
Not really irony
Not really sure what that is
Being an asshole? I guess?
Lily being an A.I. bro wouldn't surprise me since that group views artists and their work the same way Lily does.

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Once again, you are mistaking CD-Call as, able to make sense
Wait when did she say she wanted life lessons? Is this cause she primarily covers things aimed at ages 7-16?
Once again, you are mistaking CD-Call as, able to make sense