Hi Ive never written a prompt before, only ever read and liked people’s posts so I hope you see this. I’ve been on tumblr for a few months and I only just thought of maybe asking a prompt since I really like your accounts fics plus santospilled and saint and theblueeyesskyes. (Some of those names might be slightly wrong since I’m going off memory and don’t wanna go of this incase it deletes everything I’ve written and then I have to write it again from memory)
Sorry I know this is really long. Now onto the actual prompt, 😬
(THIS IS A FIC FOR BARSANTOS NOT ANYONE ELSE I PROMISE) 😊
I read a fic a while ago and can’t find it anywhere but it was a fic with Robby (THIS IS A FIC FOR BARSANTOS NOT ROBBY I PROMISE) and I’m assuming just someone called reader bcs it used first person and didn’t mention a name.
But anyway in the fic Robby is having sex with someone and it keeps cutting between two different places. The hospital and the bed. In the fic the reader is having a good time and is really enjoying it but it gets a little much. And their safe word wasn’t really established and more kinda just ‘stop’ I guess. (I don’t think they picked a specific word but I might be wrong). And they end up saying “hula hoop” which is the word in the hospital when a patient puts a member of staff in danger. And it shows hospital past events when a patient attacked them and reader didn’t say hula hoop. They kinda say what they say when they wanna stop in bed which is just a normal kinda like asking to stop. Basically reader kinda switches the words.
Now for the BARSANTOS part:
Would it be possible if you do this sort of fic but for Baran and trinity. Maybe it’s been a long day and a really long shift. Baran might be extra stressed with her son being sick or her ex husband giving her issues. Maybe a patient died that she was responsible for or just something along the lines of bad or stressful. (No seizures though bcs I think Baran would choose not to do strenuous activities like sex the same day she had a seizure. She’d probably either isolate herself or just stick to soft cuddling all night with trinity).
But yeah so barans having a bad day and so is trinity. Delayed charting as usual. Dennis is staying at the farm almost full time so she’s at barans a lot and they’re always together after joined shifts. Trinity maybe takes care of her son sometimes. (This is post Garcia situationship that’s fully ended many many months ago btw) and maybe trinity gets yelled at by Garcia and trinity isn’t pissed bcs she has thinks Garcia has an agenda agaisnt her. She’s pissed cause she knows that Garcia isn’t, and that Garcia yelled but trinity did truly mess up and it wasn’t just targeted dramatic over exaggeration.
(Sorry I’m getting sidetracked and writing a full 86 chapter story I promise I’ll be better 😭)
So it’s been a stressful shift and they both go to barans. They don’t even both to have dinner and shower. Just flop in bed and go straight to making out. All the anger in both their bodies coming out. They’re mid sex as baran is driving into trinity with a strap and at first it’s great they both feel amazing and better after the awful day.
(Bro I just accidently deleted liek 4 paragraphs 😭) I tried to do a space between it and must have selected it by accident. Someone kill me bro. Anyway back to it.
So it’s all going well until Baran switches positions and has trinity from her back to on her stomach. She driving the strap deep into trinity, bruising her cervix and pulling sounds out of trinity no one else has ever heard before (not even Garcia hehe). It’s a little much but trinity still deeply enjoys it.
Baran holds her hand on trinity’s head and pushes her head into the pillow. Trinity’s struggles to breath at first which worries her slightly but it’s fine bcs she just moves her head to the side instead. Baran is a little rougher than usual, the anger taking over and she’s degrading her (which is normal during sex) but the degrading is a lot meaner. Usually it’s a “you’re such a slur” and “beg for it” and “you’re so desperate for it aren’t you” but it’s a lot meaner now.
Trinity tries to just push it to the side. Trinity tries her best to talk. Tell her to slow down or something but all that comes out is a weak whiny “b-Baran” and Baran slaps her ass and thrusts harder degrading her more and saying how much she knows trinity likes that.
But it’s a little too overwhelming now so trinity tries to reach for Baran’s hand or waist or anything. Baran mistakes it for her trying to touch herself and she takes her arms and pins them behind her back. That freaks trinity out because she doesn’t like being held down, it’s one of her boundaries along with sensory deprivation (blindfolds mostly are a gigantic no).
She freaks out and her eyes widen. She can’t say it for some reason. The only thing in her head is ‘say it’ ‘say the word’ ‘say *safe word*’. As tears slowly prickle and roll down her eyes.
Trinity tries her best to say it but the only word she blurts out is “b-Baran” and then finally she uses all the strength she has and all the consciousness left to squeeze her eyes shut and then yell “HULA HOOP”. Trinity doesn’t hear the yell. She thinks it was a little louder than her average voice but the truth was she actually screamed it and Baran froze.
At first she was confused. Then she thought about what hulahoop meant and her eyes widened. Guilt immediately flooding her entire body. She pulls out slowly and lets go of her hands, pulling them back like she touched a burning grill. She apologises profusely and wants to lift trinity to sit up but hesitates. Trinity balls up and things her knees to her chest, slowly letting tears fall and trying not to show them. Not wanting to seem weak or make Baran feel bad. Baran asks calmly and almost in a whisper if she’s aloud to hold trinity and help her. Trinity slowly nods and Baran lightly lays behind and spoons her, whispering apologies and kisses her temple and head and cheeks lightly, tears silently falling from her eyes too. They don’t talk for a while. Just lay down in silence and holding eachother. When trinity eventually drifts off to sleep baran wait until she’s sure she won’t wake and goes downstairs. She freaks internally and goes outside the house to throw a rock and scream and cry so trinity won’t hear and wake. Then she grabs a towel with warm water to clean trinity up and lightly lifts her to the bathroom, turning the bath on and trinity slowly wakes and gets it. Baran asks if she’s allowed to join and trinity nods without saying anything at first. Then quietly says she doesn’t have to ask every time. Baran apologises when holding her close in the bath and slowly tracing on her arms and chest. Trinity says it’s ok and Baran shakes her head when trinity tries to make excuses for her. Baran sighs quietly and asks if trinity wants to be dropped home and trinity shakes her head straight away saying she wants Baran to hold her all night. And Baran does exactly that.
Neither of them have a shift the next day so they talk about their problems from the shift the night before and rego over all their boundaries to make sure if any have changed and to remind themselves. Baran still feels bad and they don’t have sex for almost 2 weeks after that. They still kiss and hug and cuddle and makeout but nothing under the clothes for 2 weeks. To give them a break and some space from sexual intimacy for a little while.
Idk what to do after the two weeks so if you see them then you can make up whatever you want.
If you are gonna add a part where they have sec again eventually can you just include the part where every couple minutes Baran checks in, maybe trinity finds it annoying at first so instead Baran holds her hand and squeezes every once in a while. She still asks verbally but the hand squeeze makes her say it less often so avoid more irritation of trinity feeling like she’s a baby.
Ok thankyou I really really hope you see this and have time to answer it. My phone was on 1% when I looked up and I genuinely rushed to the charger cause no way was I losing this entire thing that I spent like 30 mins writing.
Ok bye i life your work. I really I you see this. BYE LOVE YOU ❤️💕♥️💙💜💞