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Finally got the whole mane 6 done

Then several women step in to talk to the PPG about how the villain is using feminism as a scapegoat to get away with toxic and criminal behavior. And how what the villain is doing isnt actually feminist at all.

Like that episode was very good about addressing toxic behaivor from people who are supposedly woke or whatever.

Meet Terry the Elf. He's late-middle age for an elf, so several hundred years old, and has decided to spend his early retirement taking up adventuring, like one would take up gardening or birdwatching.

Terry was a clerk in the retinue of an Elven diplomat for basically his entire adult life, so he's seen quite a bit of the world, and figures that adventuring would be a good way of returning to some of his old haunts.

Also, Terry fucks.

He's raised dozens of generations of kids and grandkids across the world over his hundreds of years of life. He's not a deadbeat dad: due to elven lifespans, even a "brief" diplomatic posting is still like two decades, so he played an active role in his kids' lives and is still in contact with the vast majority of his grandkids.

With so much experience being a Dad, he's also done plenty of fostering and adoption over the years, as well as being the connecting point between a great many polycules both historic and current.

Last time Terry held a family renunion, the local King thought he was being invaded.

When 1) Chloe herself quite literally express the fact that she wanted to change for the better in Malediktator

Ladybug: Don't worry Chloé. You can fix your own messes, if that's what you want. You, too, can serve a purpose, but you have to want to. Chloé: (sniffles) I do want to.

2) we see Chloe slowly changing for the better, and only getting worse due to being groom by Gabriel from Miracle Queen onwards, the show'e retcons of her, and the near non-stop manipulation from Lila in season five.

because they’re not easily accessible online for whatever reason

Great dialogue can come from radical emotional honesty. But in most real conversations, people

dodge questions

answer indirectly

lie (badly)

change the subject

crack jokes to avoid serious answers

lie (convincingly)

say half of what they mean

tell the truth but get so anxious/angry/defensive others now think they're lying

If your dialogue feels unnatural, it might be because everyone is saying exactly what they think, or articulating their thoughts too well. Try letting characters hide things instead.

Can you do some about these?