I suck at naming everything! XP
Hey you guys! Sorry for the long absence. I followed someone inappropriate by mistake and didn’t had the courage to unfollow them. Luckily, I don’t see their posts anymore, so...heh heh... ._.)
Most of you guys would be thinking: “Okay? Sooo.... What’s the point of this post?”
I need your guy’s critiques and opinions on these three characters I’ve made. I want to make a comic book series for you guys (and other people); and to be honest, I don’t really know if they’re alright or not.
Here are their informations (you can skip this part if you want to, though ^-^)
Age: 18 (physically), 182 (literally)
Backstory: 164 years ago, during the “Eclipse War”, the 18-year old Emily went underground while following her little sister. There, she found a giant white flower, the one in which it was mentioned in the book. Little did she know, however, the flower itself caught her and kept her inside for those long years. And now, with Emily at 182 years old, she is still underground with a faint music playing.
Role: To prevent anyone from coming underground.
Personality: Emily is a cold-hearted yet loyal women with an ability to have the White Flower’s powers.
Abilities: Wind, Water, and Ice
Age: 18 (physically), 182 (literally)
Backstory: Same backstory, but with different outcomes. The White Flower is a dangerous type of flower that was created by the princess of the Pearl Moon, herself. The flower itself consumed Emily and was able to do this for the whole 164 years. And now, it’s waiting for a vessel to come underground...
Role: To find a new vessel and to be with it’s rightful creator again.
Personality: A doll. That’s it. Just a lifeless doll. (great description, there!... >_>)
Abilities: Poison, Water, Dark magic, and Nature
Backstory: He used to have a normal life. Now before you say “Oh, this is just one of those “INSANE” O.C.s >_>”, it’s not exactly like that! He lives with a family branch of assassins. And what does a family branch full of assassins do with a child? Obviously, they’ll train then 24/7, of course! :D He doesn’t want to be an assassin, though. He wanted to be a pianist like his father. But his mother ain’t havin’ none of that. No. Know what? Scratch that! She doesn’t give a flying bird of whatever the heck her son is doing! All she wants from him is for him to become a successor like her. Years flies by, and in each year, he starts to be less persistent with her in order to have her be happy. He’s still clinging on to his dream of being a pianist, but he’s also thinking of giving up that dream for his mother.
Role: Originally, to disguise as one of the students of Rosedale University to find and kill Princess Titania. But that changed when Zack came along. His only purpose now is to accompany Zack to find the lost Princess of Dawn, Maria.
Personality: At first, he acts like someone who wants bloods on their hands. But later, he starts to show his bubbly, naive self.
Please let me know what you think. It means a lot to me!
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