I really like your song! It’s giving pop punk/emo vibes, very nice.
My feedback is this: I’d love to hear more of your voice! I feel the mixing is a bit off and the guitars are a little loud, so it’s hard to hear what you’re saying. However, that is common in early FOB and other similar bands, so if that’s part of the style you’re going for then keep it that way. :)
I did notice a vocal scoop/uncertainty maybe at the beginning of the word “air” (in the phrase “in the air”). That could also be the Melodyne/voice tuning software. I’ve had producers who just do a blanket “correction” over the song and then go back in later to adjust wrong notes, and I’ve had producers who just analyze the vocal line and go in to fix notes that are slightly sharp/flat. I much prefer the latter, as the former creates a sort of “autotuned” sound. Again, though, that is also a cool effect depending on the style of the song.
Excited to hear more stuff from you! 💛
No I was actually personally disappointed with the amount of autotune in the finale song, I will be going forward and steering away from it. Thank you so so much, as well, I really appreciate it! <3 And yes!! Midwestern emo was my inspiration! I'm glad it's came across!