Rereading the Vortex Boys for like the fifth time and my two new favorite lines are “‘You think you’re getting out of Friday night dinners?’ Jack teased. ‘Bitch, please.’” and the child’s complaint of “‘Stop telling me to hush, I want to know!’” when John and Rose are snogging in the park. I also adore the “Capital T” Music Man harmony and the Max Bialystock references. Plus, brilliant premise, excellent characterization, perfect dialogue. One of my favorites; thank you so much for sharing!
Ohhhhhhhh my goodness this is so sweet!!!!! Thank you so much for taking the time to message me! I love this fic so much and I would absolutely adore revisiting the characters again, but my beta would KILL me if I started another multichap without finishing at least some of the ones floating around 😂😂😂😂























