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I need a small break from this comic as much as I might need to rethink and redo some stuff. I’ll also need your feedback and advise

SO, I’m struggling with this comic ( especially with visuals ) because the breaking point, Keroro’s supposed death and Dororo’s relived trauma, is taking too much time to build up to. This comic just doesn’t seem to work the way I want. I can’t work with this big of a story with this big of a buildup. It would work if I published all of this in a one big chapter in the start but I didn’t and I can’t

The visuals of this comic are supposed to change depenging on Dororo’s state of mind but I’m not sure if it looks intended and not just poorly drawn. The pacing is supposed to be pretty slow, building up Dororo’s insanity and trauma to make it believable but I feel like I’m just wasting yall time by working on pages that looks both poorly drawn AND don’t have much going on in them. I feel that I’m not doing a good job conveying things I want to convey, I honestly just don’t feel good about this project now. I struggle with asks even more tbh, that’s why I haven’t published any new ones yet

However, I don’t want to abandon DD. I still like this AU as much as I’m motivated by your support and feedback, so here are some options on how I can continue working on this project:

Shiruru by @toporcore (anxicon on artfight) (oil painting)

My orikero art all at once because for some reason I don’t post them