first & last passage tag! tagged by @yinxiong
pick a passage from the first fic you posted on here + your most recent one, and compare how much your writing has changed!
i *think* cigarettes (yuta) was one of the first if not the first nct fic i posted on here but here goes:
The bitingly acrid smell of smoke reaches you before his words do, and his hand finds its place in the dip of your waist before he comes into full view, coming up from behind you. He glances down at you, probably to give you a reassuring smile. You donāt chance a look, however; instead, you look away faux casually at his first inclination of movement. Youāve been in this position for hours while waiting for your boyfriend to return home. You know how the night will end, but youāre hoping, praying, that everything will play out differently than what you believe will happen.Ā
His eyes burn holes into the back of your neck as you slip out of his grasp and shrug off your jacket - his jacket - and place it haphazardly in the fading orange plastic chair, the only one on the balcony. Yutaās holding his breath, though he isnāt fully aware of it. Itās only when you slide open the door of his apartment that he reaches out and grabs your wrist. His slender fingers are cool and youāre too aware of your pulse as you finally turn and look at him.Ā
āSmoking kills, you know that, right?ā
hereās some words from my most recently worked on wip, foolās gold (greaser jeno)/smut warning:
āYouāre the one who wanted to be fingered in the passenger seat of Johnny Suhās car, filthy girl,ā Jeno throws back, not surprised when Jess swats at his arm at the mention of her boyfriend. She loves Johnny, Jeno knows she does, but that doesnāt stop her from begging for Jenoās fingers or tongue or, if sheās got time, his dick, whenever she stops by the City Motors garage that Jenoās been employed at for the past two months. She always comes in driving Johnnyās red Chevy Bel Air convertible. He knows itās bad of her and bad for him, especially if Johnny ever gets wind of it, but he canāt find it in himself to stop, not when itās free spank bank material.
Jenoās probably a bad person for it. He doesnāt really care - after all, itās just sex. If emotions were involved - and they never are, not for Jeno, not when it comes to getting his dick wet - it might be a different story. That, and itās Johnny Suhās girl.
Jeno fucking hates Johnny Suh.
āSay, speaking of John,ā Jess says, seemingly sufficiently cooled down by now. āI keep meaning to and forgetting to ask - youāre the same age as his sister, arenāt you?ā
ā(Name)?ā Jeno asks, his brow furrowing when he gets a nod of confirmation. āYeah, I mean, we were in the same homeroom and shit this past year. Why?ā
āJust curious.ā
iām gonna tag @neocitybynight @neostruck @jensungf @longassride @waithyuck @ja3minz !!
