#yhs rant

I feel like I got wisdom in this field bc my teacher died when i was in their class, twice! They sent in a sub till the next school year or next semester, I think thats what would happen to the class.

Okami would know Gareth, when he was a lot younger. Gareth and Jane would be very social, outgoing couple. I imagine them hiking together and doing charity work. When Gareth’s health goes down, he wouldn’t go out with Jane anymore and stay homebound. He stopped looking presentable, talked a lot less and kept a small circle. This gave him the reputation of mystery man, or just a loner. After Jane died, he gave up the little hope that lived in him.

Okami and Roman dont know what happened between then and now. It seemed like Gareth just tanked one day and never got out. Okami still saw Gareth as that happy man, she denied the new him, thinking he would snap out of it.

“The useless lies people told me; “ It will be okay!” “ You will move on.” You all lied to me. I hope my dead body will haunt you forever.”

Okami would start to take mental health seriously when she starts the next semester. She very easygoing and understanding. She wants to redeem herself for Gareth.

I try not to put Yandere, TS (2 as well), or any spin off in my rewrite because I don’t wanna worry about making them all connect.

Also Jane Nightman everybody

I ask cuz going into reading a rewrite, the audience would assume Yuki is behind the murders already, should you still treat it as a mystery. This isn't a bad thing, there's a lot of room for more storytelling that way, I'm just curious as to how you plan to go about it.

Unless you don't wanna spoil anything in that aspect of the story lol

Hell0 sorry I didn't see this till like right now , IM SORRY !!! sad emoji

I do enjoy YHS' mystery, I want to build up some of the original aspects. I hope people go into my rewrite with everything they know thrown away, only because it's a REWRITE not a RETELLING. Like JStar and Gareth don't have a relationship, JStar makes a joke about Gareth's death Infront of the body! heheh

I want my rewrite to be darker, disturbing.

HERE A REDESGIN OF SOOKIE THAT I HATE

After READ MORE are spoilers for my rewrite for sookies character

I don’t think I’ll add the Samantha arc into my rewrite, I never liked the reason why its in the series. Also I don’t think it would fit into MY narrative.

I do like Samantha as an idea, I always pictured Sam as a theatre kid, drag could be something he would do. Or when there aren’t many girls in a theatre production, he would dress as Samantha to fill in a female role. So fun!

My Sam is kind hearted, he enjoys helping people and doing tasks for others. He very much blends into the crowd, he doesn’t have a passion yet so he stands still. His bad habits tend to be in manic episodes, high to low days. He tries everything but doesn’t feel like he belongs anywhere.

I think YHS works best when all the characters have a dynamic relationship with each other. Sam knows everyyyonnneeeeeeeeee, he does anything a person asks of him! I think his classmates would use him for tasks because thats how he presents himself as. Though Id say most think it’s a way to help him find his way, Sam gets very busy with the workload that he denies himself time.

Sam is the main character in my rewrite, my antagonist would threaten Sam’s self control (and or passion. i.e if Sam even helps his community?) Most importantly, they have to try to destroy the dynamic set in the school.

If i didnt make sense im drunk sorry i love tartuis