.FIRST: Alternia with a different empress
!!! And, from the look of it, a MUCH crueler one!
Name (preferably include how you came up with it and why): Xelaik Evendo and I s2g there used to be a story behind the name
I donāt doubt that there is a story behind the name, and Iād love to hear it if you remember!
Looking over your bio, thereās a lot about the (artificial and robotic) body as a determinant of the person, and given that youāve got yourself a sapphic android who is being silenced by her authoritarian oppressor I think a good anchor for her is this Janelle Monae lyric at the end of āQ.U.E.E.N.:ā
āWill you be electric sheep? Electric ladies, will you sleep?/Or will you preach?ā
This is not to say that we should base the entire troll off Janelle Monae. Rather, I think itās worth using your troll to explore themes similar to those that Janelle Monae does with her suites: those of the electric lady/electric sheep, or the notion that technology can be used as a means of freedom or as a cudgel to beat someone into submission.
With that in mind, I am proposing the name METRAA NEXSIX, the first name a nod to the silent film Metropolis, which features an androidās deceptive role in a working class uprising; and the last name a nod to Nexus-6, the model of android from Phillip K. Dickās Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?, which explores themes of artificial intelligence and humanity.
Age: 7 Sweeps
Strife Specibus: Slingkind (she doesnāt enjoy fighting, but when she has to she uses a Kestros)
I haveā¦a cruel option for her, which may come in handy depending on where you decide to take the character. Just start with a simple pistolkind and arm her with a captive bolt pistol. Itās a weapon thatās used to stun animals before theyāre slaughtered, and has a number of variants ranging from harsh stunning to deadly force.
Fetch Modus: Sigil Modus - Each item has a sigil unique to it, and to get the item out she draws it from memory in the air (it doesnāt hurt to have a troll-google sheet pulled up in your cyber eye tbh)
I think Iād normally protest because it doesnāt relate directly to the android theme butā¦there are SO MANY sapphic witches, and we already had Eridan, our resident Almost Only Violetblood, as Kinda Harry Potter, so Iām gonna rule that I fucking LOVE it and sheās valid as hell.
Blood color: Violet
Symbol and meaning: Three jagged violet signish lines. Theyāre fanning out a bit to look like some abstract sparks.
It looks good and fits with Violet āsign language,ā but Iāll still assign you a new canon one after I have a look at your aspect and moon.
Trolltag: geoCyberpunk [GC]
? I feel like āgeoā implies a rocks connection, which I didnāt really see in your character? This can easily be fixed by making her a crystal to power her though. Orā¦unless that was a reference to crystal magic? I can make it work.
Quirk: S-she has a stutter at the beginning, of, um, each sentence? ~*Ā S-she isnāt very confident, uh, while sheās speaking.. ~* .\ [emotes with one eye, suffix to look like sparkles]
Special Abilities (if any): Her cybernetic eye has heat sensors, but nothing natural.
I actuallyā¦have an idea for that, based on your backstoryā¦
Lusus: A VERY large seaturtle with six fins that her hive is built on the shell of.
Hmmmmmmmm! So instead of living under the water she lives on it! I like it, especially since her new status as a robot probably doesnāt make her very waterproof.
Personality: Before she got into an āaccidentā with someone she guarantees that heiress asshole sent, she was a lot more outgoing. She was actively hemorebellious, and it wasnāt uncommon for her saphhic ass to hang around lowblood bars and flirt around. This is how she met her āmoirailā more so summarised as āemergencypailbroincasesheaintsmoothwiththeladiesā. One night she must have stepped too far out of line for someoneās liking, and again she KNOWS who that motherfucker was, and she promptly got the ever living shit beat out of her. Now she has two(2) false arms, half her face, and a fake leg. Fun. The Heiress was //so kind// as to find her a mechanic. Sheās⦠still afraid of mechanics. He didnāt know what anesthesia was, or didnāt care. After that she became more of a shut in, and stopped really dealing with anyone below her. She doesnāt know, but her new cybernetic parts might be to blame for her new view of the hemospectrum. Nowadays sheās a ball of anxiety that low-key knows sheās better than you but is way too awkward to not be a pushover.
You donāt mention how her new cybernetic parts might have made her more complacent, so let me propose a theory. We saw in literal Homestuck canon that Aradia, upon inhabiting Aradiabot, immediately becomes more violent. There are many theories as to why this happened; itās possible, for example, that as a ghost she had simply become unused to emotions and was unable to handle them upon getting a corporeal body. However, the predominating theory is that, upon inhabiting a robot that had been filled with indigo blood, she was possessed with highblood rage. She still, however, maintains her telekinetic abilities.
This suggests to us that there is both a soul and body component to aspects of trollsā personalities and abilities. I am suggesting that our girlās cyberneticsĀ are filled with rust blood, thus making her extremely susceptible to psychic manipulation, which is, of course, being constantly broadcast to her new body. This also potentially makes her exceptionally powerful because if she manages to harness the latent psychic abilities associated with her blood color sheād be able to fucking wreck shit.
Interests: Witchcraft, Wiccanism, Marine Biology, g I r l s, obscure forum websites.
Title: Knight of Space
I see where this assignation comes from, but may I suggest Knight of Rage? Sheās swamped with thisā¦this total narrowing of options, but itās ironically that precise narrowing that may eventually become her tool to free herself. Iām especially recommending this because of her potential role in a hemorebellion.
Land: Land of Crystals and Frogs [LOCAF]Ā -Ill have a locaf frappe, thanks
Hjgkrrlsgdl I love that. I wanna keep the acronym so lemme try Land of Crystals and Fissures? Itās pretty standard but repairing fissures as a Rage character is a good quest.
Dream Planet: Obligatory Prospitian
I feel likeā¦as a person whose robot parts are literally deciding her personality for her, itās kindaā¦important to me that you make her a Dersite, because the thesis of Derse is that itās the moon of Free Will over Destiny, and itās tough and scary and unscripted but ultimately you donāt answer to anyone.
If you take my suggestion that sheās a Rage player and a Dersite we end up withā¦Aquibornā¦whichā¦pretty much looks the fucking same as her symbol lmao. The title is The Hedonist, which I actually really like because itās such an of the body title for someone whoās been so thoroughly dis-.
Letās move on to the redesign!
I will be honest and say that part of the reason I did this was just because I thought sheād be fun to sprite; save for the symbol and muted colors the outfit is mostly a suggestion, though I hope you consider the change!
Horns ā your drawing made it look like Eridanās horns so I just ran with that! It fits both he old and new symbol easily. I just fixed one up to be robotic.
Hair ā this is courtesy of fan-trollās sprite sheet since it matched well enough! Edited a bit because that sideburn had so much personality.
Eyes ā I tried to follow your drawingās lead and give her three prominent eyelashes on the side and two smaller ones at the bottom. For her robot eye, I used Aradiabot as a template to figure out how best to sprite her with an overlay of the kinda EKG spike youād put into her eye. Her redesign has rust eyelashes to signify that rust blood is being pumped through her system, much as we got the same visual cue with Aradiabot.
Outfit ā the original is just a recolored mashup of Eridanās and Karkatās outfits. The new one features bagelartās Whovian outfit and some shoes from fan-troll. My reasoning is as follows:
You mention that her cybernetics have given her a new view of the hemospectrum that specifically places her above others as befits her caste, so even if sheās lowkey about it it makes sense that sheād dress fancy
We have exactly two examples of violetbloods across different universes and they are both FancyBoys. It may not be that all violetbloods are fancypants but itās fun nonetheless
Janelle Monaeās persona is a pan android and she is extremely well known for wearing suits to show solidarity with the working class from which she originates. This is also alluded to by her rust-colored bowtie. You can spin this as the kind of outfit she wore even before the accident to signify both her class and her desire to romance some lower blooded ladies.
So those are all the notes I have for this beautiful sapphic siren! I hope you liked my notes, because I sure like her!
-TR










