sorry for sending two so close so each other!
No worries I enjoyed the last one and Iām having fun with this one!
FIRST: Alternia with a different empress
Name (preferably include how you came up with it and why): Veveni Phobos - Veveni is very loosely based on the word vicious, and Phobos of course is the name of one of the two Gods of fear in Greek mythology.Ā
Strife Specibus: Whipbladekind - She relies on manipulating from afar, but when she has to get close, she isnāt afraid to use her Urumi.
Fetch Modus: Hue Modus - Objects are sorted by color in stacks, and all items of one color are ejected at once. Aā¦ hassle.
Love it. If you wanna go a step further you can make itĀ so itās sorted in stacks based on blood color, with items that land between suffering weird consequences (only part of the item being ejected, etc.)
Symbol and meaning: Itās meant to represent DNA, and it reflects how she views each caste- as being biologically inferior.
It kind of looks like Gemgo, the yellowblood sign of The Original, with an assignation of Prospit and Space. That, in addition to her colored eyes, gives me an ideaā¦
Trolltag: contagiousCacophony [CC]
Quirk: S-HE S-PEAKS L-IKE T-HIS T-O I-NDICATE S-OME W-ICKED E-MPHASIS.
Special Abilities (if any): She has a mutation that leaves her eyes permanently hued in her blood color. This gives her particularly potent chucklevoodoos, and strangely she finds it hard -not- to use them to get her way.
If youāll allow me to sell you on this, I feel like this might be a fun idea: Veveni is a goldblood who is clawing her way to the top of the (landdwelling) hemospectrum. You can stillĀ endow her with the belief that she is innately biologically superior (as goldbloods apparently think of themselves as the smartest person in the room). She can pass her oddly-colored eyes off as a fortunate mutation that means her chucklevoodoos manifest physically rather than as a hypnotic gaze.
Lusus:Ā A small horselike creature with four eyes and tightly curled arm horns. ((loose reference to the four horsemen of the apocalypse
ā¦armā¦hornsā¦WHAT ARE ARM HORNS. Wait does this horse. Does this horse have horns that look like flexing arms. I love it. If you wanna keep her a purpleblood you want them to be a seadwelling mammal so maybe keep that but make her a mermicorn. If you want to go with my idea that sheās a social climbing goldbloodā¦(ŹāæŹāæ) she may have to kill or abandon her lusus to keep her cover.
Personality:Ā Itās easily said that, among her friends, Veveni sticks out as probably the most vicious. She was praised by the cult for her potent abilities from a young age, and since torturing lowbloods equalled respect for her, it was no surprise as āincidentsā of harmed or worse trolls pointed more frequently in her direction. At her current age, sheās more interested in writing about such things as lowbloods have long since steered clear of her direction, but she still makes a habit of terrorizing her less fortunate friendās dreams particularly. Not that they know itās her. Outwardly towards them sheās extremely laid back, almost tired, but when a situation calls for it she has very fast reflexes.
I think this is actually a good sell for her being a goldblood because purplebloods are supposedly EXTREMELY driven and will stop at nothing until they reach their goal, however whimsical it may be. Goldbloods, on the other hand, apparently tend more towards boom-and-bust cycles of showing off and then wearing themselves out. This is especially relevant since a bloodthirsty purpleblood would likely have their eye on being made a subjugglator to come in contact with yet moreĀ rebellious lowbloods, and this does not seem to be the case for her.
Iām also just a fan of this rework because having potent psychic abilities with no check risks making her overpowered; this reimagining would give her the hidden weakness of being psychically susceptible (though if sheās successfully infiltrated the subjugglator cult then itās unlikely anyone would suspect as much).
Interests:Ā Literature, Writing, Torture, Online Roleplay, FLARP
I donāt know that that title even fits your original character? I mean sheās definitely Prospit but I donāt know that her character has much to do with loyaltyā¦given that she often heralds othersā death, you may want to give her Maid of Doom? Which would make her a Caprimino.
I am aware enough of my own biases to know that Iām trying to shoehorn her into a Space role so I can retroactively justify the narrative thread Iāve woven here, butā¦I feel like I can make an argument for Prince of Space. With the new backstory, sheās literally destroyed others in order to carve out a space for herself in the hemospectrum. Much as Dirkās destruction of the self was tied intimately to his self-involvedness, Veveniās destruction of spaces can lay in her own scrabble for purchase.
Land:Ā Land of Drought and Lemonade [LODAL]
If you want her to be a Doom purpleblood flip those two (LOLAD) and youāre GOOD. Her quest could be to fix the draught (because right now all the poor consorts have to drink is lemonade).
If you want to go with the Space goldblood Itās pretty easy just go Land of Lemonade and Frogs (LOLAF). The lemonade would also be great bc it would remind her of her lowblood status much as Karkat felt his planet was mocking him for his mutant blood.
So. I got a little carried away with multiple sprites (for which fan-troll gets most of the credit for bases), but I promise I have my reasoning. From left to right, these are: a sprite based off your original drawing (surrounded by assorted symbols depending on if you want to modify the existing one or pick one of the two canon EZ ones if she was truly a purpleblood), the yellowblood version, a hypothetical transitional stage in which she is waiting for her hair to grow long enough to cover her second pair of horns while quietly swapping out clothing that would identify herĀ ātrueā blood color (using an edited sprite from naphal), and her Final Form as a subjugglator.
This if for if you want to keep her a purpleblood because tbh she doesnāt need to have a mutation to be exceptionally powerful; weāve already seen that purplebloods can be bloody-minded in every possible way. Letās go top to bottom.
Horns - I wanted to make them mimic the hourglass shape inherent to both your created symbol and to the goldblood one I assigned her; this just meant making them symmetrical to look like the bottom half. The teeny tiny second set is eventually covered with hair to successully complete her transformation into a purpleblood.
Hair - Itās just the hair you gave her. I couldnāt tell what you wanted the bangs to look like so I tried my best to make it look dynamic.
Eyes - I followed your design cue and gave her two lashes on the bottom outer corners of her eyes. Her redesign just uses one full color for each eye in keeping with goldblood design.
Mouth - both goldbloods and purplebloods tend to be toothy castes, so I gave her some teef.
Symbol - like I said, I gave her Gemgo, The Original, as a starter sign. The fake one sheās got at the end is Caprilo, which I initially picked just bc it looked like a coiled Urumi but is the sign of The Multifaceted. It tickled me, especially because itās a Heart sign and she is very much using it to disguise her Self.
Outfit - most of these are just palette-swaps of your original outfit for variety, but I wanted to address the final one. If we look at the spread of purplebloods we have so far, even Gamzee, the soberest one (ha!), has an outfit that noticeably diverges from his peersā in that it uses a polka-dot patterned pajama pant where even Feferi still uses colorblocking. The shirt and shorts seemed a bit tame for that, so I gave her a tutu and extended her boots out to look like clown shoes. Based on the purplebloods weāve seen so far, bright yellow is a relatively common accent color, so I added that to the tongue of her boots and gave them a gold underlining as a nod to her original blood color.
So that concludes my review of Veveni! Iām a fan tbh.
