#tutorial feedback 4

We were suppose to show the first draft of our animatic in this tutorial, however Milly (who was in charge of doing the first draft of the animatic), was unable to do it due to illness and technical difficulties. Luckily Bene had done a little of the beginning of the animatic to show to the class. The issue is that Bene didn’t draw it the way the storyboard is laid out so we weren’t able to address our establishing scene as how we wanted to originally.

The feedback we received from Jake: - After showing the storyboard to him as the animatic wasn’t able to address our original idea he really liked how the scene is established in the beginning - More work during the trauma/abstract sequence especially when it comes to how it looks and also how we can incorporate the tornado more.    -> he says that the abstract sequence seems more like a nice, calm world in contrast to what we intended which was to show Vyonne’s body response to the trauma. Hence we need to experiment more with the colour and the pattern or at least develop a proper world for it like we did with the “realistic” world.    -> need more patterns that associate with the tornado such as fragmented lines/pieces, jagged lines etc.