#treilyn comic

This is likely going to end up being the title page of the treilyn comic but I need to design a title I actually like... I've also been using a new brush and I really enjoy the kind of sketchy/pencil look it gives! With this being the title page, I'll also need to rework some of my panels and try and condense the storyline I do have into a slightly smaller one that is a little more manageable than the one I have now. The rest of the comic will mostly likely be grayscale with a little less detail than this page and will only have color as a way to provide emphasis on certain details.

Here's what I have so far of the first 6 panels! I completely forgot the take out the sketch for the top middle panel so uh. yeah. There's also a workshop/placeholder title design that I thought looked good in my head but just isn't doing it for me on the panel itself. Any suggestions would be great!