your writing is so good im going insaneeeee. rattling the bars right now. describing tnp as an epic is so apt, theres a grandeur to the story and all its moving pieces. you really feel like something huge is sweeping you along. i find myself both mildly unnerved by and enchanted with the violence in your writing, both in the sense of how visceral your voice is and the brutality of the, well. violence. stuff i really just want to gnaw on like some creature. you really are doing sooo much with your craft always the punch the prose, the beats of the fight sequence with its push and pull (in and out of body experience, whatโs happening to the mc and observation of whatโs going on outside) that feels so fitting with the ocean elements. anyway. ๐ซต๐ซถ
