#time's mirror

Time's Mirror, by Risa Walker A kind of slutty teenage girl accidentally time travels to the future, then to the past, then starts a cult. This is a pretty standard starter story for a middle school fanfic author. It feels like a first draft in that all the elements to a plotline are there, but no elements adding gravity or character have been incorporated. It was really short as well, which really added to the first draft feel. I wouldn't recommend reading this. It just wasn't very good, and even if it had been fleshed out more I don't think I would have cared about any of the characters or story.